Funny, with a plot and romance: overal very nice indeed and not at all sucky. Please turn your attention back to this story for a while, I'd love an update on this one ;)

Your story is not a piece of crap.
^^
It actually is quite good!

Your story is not a piece of crap.
^^
Its actually is quite good!

Your story is not a piece of crap.
^^
Its actually is quite good!

nice story
don't give a damn about whatever others said
I luv ur sense of humor
Update soon

dat was good hope u update soon