hmmmm. pancakes.
:D
hhaha. daaamn. this sounds like fun. bet Kaggie has a blast with so many boys 'round her.
XD

oh i love it!!!! i ride with my friend jojo but im not that great right now but im getting better! im still working on a jump and landing without falling off! but i love the story! i hope you update soon!

Liking this a lot please update soon.

Well...I think this story is amazing! I love the detail and the idea is totally oringinal.

Just curious...do you ride? I only ride four-wheelers. My Mom won't let me get a bike...some nonsense about me and a broken back. [rolls eyes] No faith!

Any way...I love this story so far! Great job.

Just...one thing. You have a few spelling and grammatical errors. If you want, I'll be your beta and edit your chapters for you. Tell me if you are interested. I do have an account [under authors who have stories posted] I'm just too lazy to sign in.

Again...great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Twisted [Formerly Sesshoumaru's Fiend]

lol that was fun hope to see the next chapter

I like how this story is going. It's a good change in scenery. I cant wait for the next chapter.....so update soon.