I'm intrigued. The bloodplay a great addition. It always makes a story so erotic. I can't wait for more!
tessa-hime- Sun 20 Apr 2008
Hahaha! I know exactly what book you're basing this off of, and I'm sad that you replace the kick-ass FEMALE character with a male, but I guess it makes perfect sense, since he is also a half-breed. Well, great concept, and prettyn cool so far. Do you happen to know when the sequel to the book comes out?
I have to say that the opening chappie is nothing short of AWESOME! It's interesting, seemiingly fast-paced, and creative! I would love to read more!
BRAVA DIVA!
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Kimmy-chan- Sun 20 Apr 2008
AHHHHHH!!! OMG!!!! The suspense is killing me already!! It's awesome!! I love it!! Hurry and write the next chap! >x
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