i'm a sobbing mess after reading this and i was hearing in the backgroud the song of titanic in a piano solo and now im crying all the way excuse me im gonna continue now, nby the way excellentg job **sobs**

I can't stop crying, that was just beautiful...just beautiful.

I totally enjoyed this one shot. It spoke of so much love, yet it was done briliiantly in a classy style. A highly enjoyable read, I'd say. Well done!

this was absolutely beautiful! it almost had me crying on several notes (but i was at work, so i couldn't). outstanding. 'nuff said.

This story was very, very beautiful and touching. I really enjoyed it.

You had to be sobbing as you wrote this because I'm sobbing as I read it. Brilliantly done.

Oh my god!!! That was so terribly sad! I love it completely! I've never enjoyed having my heart broken so thoroughly by a story! Great job!

Where have you been hiding?

This story left me reeling in amazement. It reads like a work from a seasoned author, so it's hard for me to fathom I haven't had the honor of experiencing one of your stories by now.

The imagery you create is transcendent in its beauty. You concentrate on a few metaphors, fleshing them out into a family of heart-stirring sentiments. The wind. The stretch of beach. The mix of his tears in the sea. And oh my, the gravity of the Setting Sun. That's my favorite. The way you align the visual of the setting sun with the colors of their souls and the tenderness of their love for each other, the way you have her praise him, the way you humble him with her gift of her life and the depth of her loss...I don't think anything I say can do its beauty justice. There was more tangible, touching emotion in this one-shot than I'm able to comprehend. The solidity and poetry of your writing stunned me. This is absolutely one of the most eloquent and poignant pieces I've ever read. Breathtaking work.

this was so beautiful and agonizing and sweet.

I'm crying as I read it. Still am. It's just so beautiful. T_________T
I cried onto my homework but yea..it's so beautifully written. Thank you.

Thank you for this. I haven't read anything so beautiful in a very long time...You've broken my heart. I can't tell you how very much I loved this and how deeply it touched me. I cried and cried...and it has become so very hard for me to cry, these days. My heart is still aching for them. Your character portrayal was flawless, poignant, and filled with such desperation and love it was moving. Perfect.