Hey you replaced your first chapter with number four, don't worry I did the same thing today while editing a story.

I'm so glad that you updated. I often checked and was like pulling my hair out! (when is she going to update?!) I thought I might have to light a fire under your butt! (nah just kidding) ^_^

cute chapter and thanks for dedicating the chapter to me. I'll let you know when I update my fic.

Take care-

Lady Nefertiti.

hey - you updated soon! I love this fic and I can't wait till your next update! if it's possible can you e-mail me when you update?

it's: Lady_Nefertiti_01 (at) yahoo

Wow now its getting interesting, but u might want to watch out for the spelling though. Can't waite for the next update. ^_^

Wow now its getting interesting, but u might want 2 watch out 4 da spelling though. Can't waite for the next update. ^_^

please add me to your update list, my email is unavailabletoyu@yahoo.com i'm curious as to where you're headed with this. you spell sess's name "Sesshomaru" or "Sesshoumaru" but just with one "h". ;D a beta reader would definitely help your ratings. otherwise, i think you're doing fairly well. ;D

FL

i like this story but the spelling is a little off it's Sesshoumaru not Shesshoumaru just wanted to tell you don't take the wrong way I really like this story really!!!

interesting...can't wait to see what happens next.

FL

hey i love how your story is starting but can you please if you would tell me when you update it please my e-mail ir
darkdeathstar39@yahoo.com
thanx

Not sure exactly where this is heading, but I would advise you to at least put up a warning before the chapter begins if it has that sort of violence in it. Some people are opposed to reading those kinds of situations, so a warning is nice.

good start for a first chapter. I'm saving you to my fav. stories list so that means you better update soon!

^_^

Lady Nefertiti.

Wow that was strong but good! I hope u set up da next chap soon ^_^