this chapter was really short but i still liked it i can't wait until u update the story soon i wonder what will happen will get to meet kagome's father please please please update soon

the only criticism I have was the chapter was too short! how dare u leave such cliff hanger...update soon plz~!~!~!~!~!~!

awesome!more,more!!!!!

Yeah you put a Led Zep song in the story! I am a huge fan and it made me very happy to see this while reading. I like this story and hope keep finding the inspiration to write.

you tricked me here I am reading the tittle of the chap. and it says lemon song. Now what do you think when you here that. right lemon. LOL sorry I have a weird sence of humor. well i hope you post more soon.

hugs and puppies

Your fic has an excellent idea behind it, but your writing style could use a bit of work.

Firstly, there seems to be this constant idea that everyone wants Sesshomaru. While its not hard to imagine why (he is Sesshomaru, after all), it makes for an odd element in the story. Heck, even Kagome assumes the only girls would approach him is for sex. It just doesn't make the story flow well at all.

Secondly, there are a few flaws in your grammar/spelling which coulkd be caught by a beta in a brief read through. I'd recommend one. For instance, "“Mr. Are you Kagome-sensei’s boyfriend?”
". "Mr." should have been "Mister".

Thirdly, re-read all your chpaters at least 3 times and edit each time before posting. This will help will not only the spelling/grammar errors, but also with the flow of the story. You rush through things- take your time, use details, explain this more thoroughly.

Like I said, great idea, very creative, but the execution could use a bit of work.

hmmmm. the Lemon song, eh? well it is a song that would get you pumped up.
Tapas Tango? hmm. i smell practically hot sex on the floor.
XD
oh no! Sessho's gonna be the demon icicle now? oh poo. wonder what set him off. update when you can please!

heyy its me again i still love it plz write more

Well, I was flicking through the page where all of the updated stories are displayed and an unusual name caught my eye.

Face Off!

An unusual name...very, I pondered.

That term sounded familiar to me, but I couldn't place it. Suddenly it hit me...hockey!

I love hockey. It may be a Canadian thing, or just a Grandparents-that-are-uber-in-love-with-hockey-thing but I have loved hockey for as long as I've known what hockey is.

I love the idea of Sesshoumaru being a hockey player. Seriously, I think hockey players have the best builds out of the other sports players. (i.e. baseball, basketball, soccer, lacrosse, and most likely rugby)

Well, I was going to write my own hockey story, but I think I will put it off for a while. There can only be one hockey story right now.

I had a baseball one in mind, too. Perhaps I will drabble there.

Well, keep on working hard. It looks really good to me so far. I've only read the first chapter, though. I have to get ready to go to school, but I will finish reading and reviewing when I get home.

Buh-byes!

-JustalilTwisted (formerly Sesshoumaru's Fiend)

daaaaaaaamn.
Kaggie is effin' lucky as hell!
hahhaha.
*sigh* being in the presence of all those gorgeous men.
XD
it was nice that Bank was looking out for Kaggie and that we found out some more stuff about Kagome.
loved the whole strip poker thing. it was something i could seriously see all of them doing. haha.
pshhhh. fur ser Kaggie and Sessho's relationship is going in a decent pace. hell if i were Kaggie, i would've jumped Sessho first time i saw him.
XD

I just came across this story and with the playoffs going on right now I just had to read it! The chemistry you got goin' here is great. I do think I would like to see more of Sesshoumaru's fridgid side, and (being a HUGE fan) a full play by play of a unusually brutal game. lol
cant wait for the next chapter!
Tilayha

omg omg i so luv the story and the new chapter i can't wait until u update the story soon i i'm glad that sesshoumaru and kagome finally kiss or did something will we get to meet kagome's father i hope we do i wonder what she will do if she did please please please update the story soon

omg omg i so luv the story and the new chapter i can't wait until u update the story soon i i'm glad that sesshoumaru and kagome finally kiss or did something will we get to meet kagome's father i hope we do i wonder what she will do if she did please please please update the story soon

yummy

i didnt even expect ban to be kagomes brother! it through me off and i like that! the little scene of strip poker was great! and i love that you had kagome drink a beer it shows shes layed back! i cant wait untill the next chapter! thanks for updated so soon!

heyy luv thestroy i think this will become really gudd please write more

wow!!!i also went to Mexico for Spring Break it was so boring with no fanfics to read!!lol anyway its SUPER GOOD!!!!!plz keep on writing!!!!

Strip poker? I'm curious as to what happens next. I hope there's a lemon next chapter. -wink wink- Possibly includiing Bankoutsu? -hint hint-

Next chapter should be interesting! it would be really funny if Kagome was winnning!

please write more i want to know wat she will say

oh my god PLEASE update soon i cant beilive you letf it like that!

There are definitely not enough Inuyasha-characters-involved-in-sports fics out there, so I'm loving this. I like the quick pacing. It's very "episodic" that way, and suits the subject matter. Your characterizations are fresh and engaging. All in all it's a fun read, and I can't wait for more!

I'm loving this...Update soon..

what did kagome see????!!!!!!!!!! OMG please update quickly. also luv the plot/storyline and u made sesshomaru perfect as a college 21st century demon! :) (playing hockey!!! so hot!) ^.^

I did enjoy this chapter. Bleh! Kouga's such an idiot. For him, ignorance is bliss.

Oh, and I don't recommend using online translators for foreign languages. But, I'll help you edit the sentences in French, if you want. Wouldn't want angry French people trying to kill you through the Internet. lol totally kidding.

Your Sentence:
vous êtes si beau. nous sommes si heureux de vous avoir suivre notre équipe humble cette année, et particulièrement notre tenez le premier rôle, Sesshomaru.

The Fix:
"Vous êtes belle!" - first sentence.

"Nous sommes honorer que vous souhaitez suivre notre equipe cette année, Sesshoumaru en particulier."

That sounds about right.

OMG this story is just.......... AMAZING!!!! i LOVE it!!!!!! plez update as soon as possible!!!

I am still enjoying and seems to be moving a good pace. A side note for italics i > and / i > without the spaces.

Oh could you post a translation of the French. I am barely mono-lingual.

Emily

When are going to post the next chapters?!

THIS STORY IS GREAT SO FAR!!!!

wahh!
its "the look."
XD
yay! i smell chemistry crackling between them.
wooo. can't wait til the next chappy.

I'm really enjoying this fic! Loved the eye-locking there at the end of the chapter ^_^

i really do enjoy your story. keep up the good work! Update soon...

It's great please up date soon!!

Update! ^@^

please write more

Usually I dont like reading sport themed fanfics, but this one has me hooked!. When i first saw it posted i thought it was gonna flop, but u proved me wrong. Really good story, good writing. I luv it!! =]
Oh, and ur other story, the blood countess one. amazinggg. keep on updatingg! lol. i'll keep checking back to see if it has! ^_^

o.0
you totally hooked me already.
that's cute that you made Kaggie a ballet instructor and how Sessho gets a wee bit jealous when she's not paying attention to him.
hmmmm. not use to girls ignoring you, huh Sessho?
XD
update when you can!

Thanks for the cute chapter and quick update! It could have used some proofreading, this time. Nothing major, but there were a few mixed up pronouns and whatnot.

Aw! I must confess, I have recently found myself and avid fan of yours. You can take a generic plot that's been done several times before, yet somehow find a way to make it totally stimulating and original to read! (Your lemons are quite delicious to read, as well.) I especially like this story! It's developing so cutely! I can't wait for the next installment, so DON'T TAKE TOO LONG! *Mumbles* I might have to hunt you down...

This story is so good. lol
It makes me happy!
Please continue writing!

I really like this fic. I like how you have the characters set up at the moment and it has so much potential. I personally would love to have this fic carried on to the finish.

I really like this fic. I like how you have the characters set up at the moment and it has so much potential. I personally would love to have this fic carried on to the finish.

can't wait until you update. Please do so soon :)

Sounds like a great start....
Its different, please continue...

Hello.
Please, continue this fic. I really enjoyed the first chapter.
First of all, I think it's awesome that the "naughty thing" Kagome did is publish an article on the environment.
I don't think it's a stretch to see Sesshomaru as a hockey player. I do have reasons why, but I'll hold my tongue. I'd rather see where you take it.
Cheers! ~ twitrek

ahh, your writing, witty and enjoyable. great way to start the story off...you know your one-shots are my absolute fav's!

I enjoyed it. I that Kagome's character isn't a push over.

im rele likin it... plz do continue.. i think u got something real good here!!