That was great. Really. I can't wait for the next one.

hahaha. I've got to say... i think that's one way to torture Sess w/o any bloodshed. I can't wait to see how he gets out of this one. Will he fall for Kags? And what will Fumi cook up? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

ah i love your story please continue writing
your fan
SKTL

I realize that most males hate shopping but I have to pity poor Sesshomaru. This is a bad day for anyone!

I've got to hand it to Inu no Taisho... He got sess and he got him good. I wonder how fast Sess will be begging for Kags to return to him. I look forward to reading about Sess and Rin bonding like father and daughter. :P

Wow this great!!!!!! DOES THAT LASY EVEN KNOW HE IS???? MAN I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!! ^_^

I think it was about damn time she quit. But I'm glad that Sess prevented Kags from making a big mistake by marrying Koga. I wonder if Sess can ever find someone to replace Kagome? Keep up the good work and I look forward to what u have in store for Kags and Sess :P

LOL XD OMFG I reminder saying almost the exact some things as Sesshoumaru! RTFL The most I used was 'Can we finish this thing so that we can go back home!? Please.' Yep four hours later and a twitching eye.....FREEDOM!

Wow you improved so much with this story. I can't wait what other torturers Sess is going to go through. Later! :)

I WANT MORE THIS FIC GET BETTER EVERY CHAPTER!!!!!!!!

Bitch! But I love how you wrote Sesshoumaru's control over his discontent over that irrational woman's behavior at the live of the case register. I greatly enjoyed reading this chapter especially when he tried to discomfornt and get a rise out of Kagome about the "beauty of breastfeeding". Thank you for the lovely and quite entertaining chapter!

Now i thought that this was very funny .
I loved the store. if i were him and that woman said that to me i would have told her that i did not have to talk to her child.

You are soooo funny!!!! Omigod, that last chapter (7) had me cracking up. Especially these parts:

“Well Rin,” she imagined telling the girl when she was older, “your father wishes to kill your jiji because he kind of just dumped you in his lap one day. It’s not that your father doesn’t love you or anything like that, it’s just that he hates his father even more. I hope there are no hard feelings about it. Sesshomaru really does love you. . . I think.”

AND...


Sesshomaru wished for nothing more than a bottle of aspirin in that moment. Better yet, a gun. Yeah, a gun sounded pretty tempting. Maybe he could get away with murder if he just shot all of the witnesses. Kagome wouldn’t know any better and then he could get away with not paying for Rin’s items.


Oh please oh please update real soon. I'm loving it. The tabloid lady is going to have fun with this.

I can't wait to find out why Sesshomaru's dad did this. We are going to find that out right? And Rin's background. Update Soon

Loved it! I laughed through it all. it is a great chapter. update soon!

Ladysafire

@ Chapter 4

HAHAHAHAHAH.... Sesshomaru vs. The Tea Boiler

Funny. Very funny. Lol, Sesshomaru just got punk'd into adopting a baby... but why? Well going to read more...

Later

OH MY GOD
This chapter cracked. me. up!
I was laughing so hard by the end, the imagery was hilarious- especially with the little girl flinging her clothes off and screaming- that was great!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

@ Chapter 3

I hate that I didn't start this story the first day you put it out. Ah well... more to read for me now. I really like it.
ROFLMAO.
That was so funny. This part had me crying laughing:

She could imagine it now: “I’m sorry Higurashi-san,” the police officer would say, “but your daughter’s death seems to have been caused by too much blood rushing to her head. I’m afraid that your daughter blushed herself to death.” And then her mother would drop to her knees crying in a sudden downpour of rain and scream, “Why, Kami? Why? In the name of all that is holy, why did you have to take her away?” An abrupt determination would then overtake her mother’s usually calm appearance. “I swear on Buddha’s belly that I will have my revenge on the man who has caused my daughter such a fate. Taisho Sesshomaru, your death shall be mine!” Thereupon such a declaration, her mother would run off into the darkness of the night to search out the foul villain who had taken her baby away from her.

Genius.
Well just wanted to share that. Now I'm going back to read.
Oh and the engagement... funny as hell. Yeah I wouldn't forget that either. Well later.

Gods, poor Sesshoumaru! That's awful ::snicker:: Great chapter!

I absolutly love your story and can't wait for more .. and good luck on your final!!!! =)

Lol ... Poor Sesshomaru!!

haha i love this chapter! please update soon!

Ok that was one of the best chapters ever. It's fitting that Sesshoumaru had to be tortured in the children's store like that. Especially after all that he's done to prevent Kagome from getting another job. lol LOVED IT!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_~

aw poor sesshy. i hope u update soon

please update as soon as you can....

It is an interesting story. The whole addition of Rin was huge plot twist that was totally unexpected, though I thought that the idea would be really odd, I find it entertaining and cute. Pretty good use of detail when you are describing Kagome and Sesshoumaru's thoughts but I noticed that you don't use as much detail regarding the character's movements/actions. You may want to get a beta for a few typos/grammar mistakes. Overall, I think that it is a pretty good story with a pretty original plot. I really like it and I look forward to reading more.

Hello,
I really wanted to send you a review to tell you how much I ahve been enjoying your story. I think it fantastic so far and I alwyas get quite a laugh out of it. I eagerly await the next chapter, after all simply the image of Sesshoumaru shopping for an infant sends me into a fit of giggles! Not to mention the delicious sexual tension, oh my! I have been reading it on AFF.net, but now that I know it is here, I may read it on A Single spark. Thank you for your hard work, and creating such a great story. Keep it up, and I will look forward to more delightful chapters.
Charlie

omg i love this chapter!!!!!! plz *on knees* write another one soon *sob* *sob* i love you!!!!!! lolz . hehehe but seriously i am completely in love with this story. it is amazingly written and i hope the next chapter is up soon!

Heyyz, i enjoyed reading your story, a lot. It's really well written and easy to understand. -laughz- i think i sounded smart for a second there... Can't wait to read more. Update soon please ~! 3

please update soon

LOL Sota! I'd run too :) I'm really getting into this story! When Rin showed up I thought she would be older but a 4 month old is better to torturer a youkai with. *snicker*

Poor, poor Sesshy, having to go shopping at a baby store. I went once with my mom for my bro and I thought I was going to kill her after the first three hours just looking at blankets! I may be a girl but damn! I can't wait for the next update!

BE STRONG SESSH AND RUN WHEN ANY FEMALE ASK 'WHAT THEME ARE YOU DOING!?' RUN!!! Sorry.....

omg this is like one of the best fics i have read in a while (a long while at that excuse my absence) i hope that you post the next chapter soon cause i love reading new refreshing plots!
your fan
SKTL

I hope you update soon!!! your story is very good!!

I love this story!! Update soon!

I really like this story. Can you email me when you update? :) You know if you wanted you could like join this other website www.justexpressing.com and then if your fans joined and added your story to thier alerts it would save you the trouble but ya. UPDATE SOON!!!

If you could see the feral grin on my face right now, I'm sure it would rival Kagome's! I love how you pull readers in to your chapters so effectively.

Woah, hahahahha, i love the last two lines, Please continue, ITs Great!

MoniQ

beautiful.

I just started reading your story today and I have to say that I'm hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens with both Kagome and Sesshomaru. I'm really excited about the idea of Sesshomaru having to go baby shopping with Kagome too. I love how you bring the characters to life with their descriptions and interactions, it makes the fanfiction more interesting and well-written. Keep up the great work and update again soon!!

this is clearly AMAZING work!!!!! so keep up the good work and put up another chapter as soon as possible (shaking fist) IM JUST KIDDING!!!!!!! but still very nice and i cant wait till the next the chap!!!!! ^.^ :) ^-^ (=

love, love, LOVE it!!!
I went on a fifteen minute hunt for my glasses just so I could clearly read this!!! I do not want to miss a word!
:D

I have to say I love this story seriously!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! you got talent in writing!!!
KEEP THE CHAPTER COMING PLZ:D

When I first saw the summary, I thought this would be so different from the norm. The first three chapters where slow...and a little disappointing. But, the characters in your story are almost perfect in the way they act and react to one another.

I don't know what happen between chapters 3 and 4 but it was a happy change. Breathing new life into your story. Now I can't wait for you to add more to it!

This story cracks me up. I'm really enjoying it. XD The last chapter was especially fun. I hope you won't let those reviews discourage you.

I like it.
The wait is worth it.
Good luck with the next chapter.

I don't even have to tell you how hot that chapter was. AMAZING is all I can say. Please keep up the wonderful job.

Another Lovely Chapter ... Funny As Hell Too ... Kagome Is So Going To Kill Souta!!!

Whew, hotness! Great chapter, very nicely done ^_^

yay awesome chappy....now i go to mom's house to escape anoying neighbor.

i've been waiting and waiting and you certainly didn't disappoint. wonderful job...update soon!

I love the idea of Sess declaring war on the teakettle. I often find myself doing the same thing. I have found the best way to get a piece of machinery to cooperate is to threaten it with some sort of physical harm. Yay, Sess!

LOVE IT! ha, i cant wait to see why sesshomaru has a kid. lol please upate soon i cant wait!

he is so toast.
i hope he makes up to kagome,because he will be such thumbs with a baby...especially after he threatened her.
you're doing well.
take care.

I am so very caught up in this story! I love how wonderfully you've captured the characters, down to the tiny details and quarks.

I just know that I will be checking for updates repeatedly (no pressure- really). As I was reading, I hit what I like to call my nervana reading point- where the words were no longer text on a page, but me watching the story unfold as I scroll. Awesomeness. Truely. I got to the last of the last chapter, and it was like a DVD skipping at the best part.

My immediate reaction- NO, No, where is the rest? Where is the 'Next' button????
After that, I just had to review and let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. It makes for a great distraction from midterm stress.

Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe

PLEASE UPDATE!!!
I hope Kagome doesn't beg back to Sessh, even if she is having a hard time...

LOL that was hilarous! I can only imagine the look on Sesshomaru's face after realizing what his father had done. Poor thing...anyway, I don't blame Kagome for leaving her brother in jail for what he did. I would have done the exact same thing; some people have to learn the hard way. I'm glad for the update!! It was a great chapter, and I don't recall finding any mistakes so excellent job!!

~*Elisa*~

Like you said, on with the good stuff...the meat of the story. I 'm really getting into this and looking forward to more updates soon.

Great job!
*hugs and smiles*

Too funny! Oh my, poor Sesshoumaru, he sure has his hands full! What a fantastic chapter; I can't wait for the next one!

ooo wow....thats something i would do to someone...get them to adopt a baby just like that..
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one question though were did his father get a hold of rin?
she didnt come out of thin air...

This Is A Pretty Good Story I Am Enjoying It Update Soon!

WHOO!!!
I'm late for class now, but that was so worth it!!!

Awesome. Enter Rin, and soon welcome back Kagome. Love the Pops.

hmmm... Taming of the Shrew... "asses are made to bare and so are you"... Unfortunally, I despise shakespeare so I remember it with clarity.

First of all, you will get low ratings because your story is Alternate Universe. Since most AU haters aren't bold enough to come right out and TELL you they hate your story, the rating system here gives them the cowardly legs to diss your story without having the balls to say it. Don't worry about it. I'm seriously considering creating the Alternate Universe Preservation League or something...LOL! Damn haters.

Anyhoo, loved it. It was well rounded and full of detail (I'm partial to the foot thingy...*snicker*) and again the length doesn't bother me. The back and forth dialogue is wonderful. I enjoy that Nick and Nora-type of banter. Don't worry about the ratings - I get low ones all the time for characterization and whatnot. Write what's in your mind and the ones who dig the story will follow you.

i can't wait until u update the story soon i wonder what will happen next kagome finally quit but will she find herself another job please pleasae please update the story soon

AWSOME! please udpate soon i cant wait to find out what happens next

Please do not make us wait any longer than we have to. It is just gettting to the interseting part. You are too good of a writer to be a tease.
As for the title of this chapter I believe it is from "The Taming of the Shrew" and also was used in the musical "Kiss Me Kate".

i loved it

Taming of the Shrew -- William Shakespeare.

And I have to say, it makes a wonderful chapter title.

Very nice. You have some really great set up here, including some nice hints and foreshadowing. I like how you've set up their relationship (yes, business I know) but with hints at more from both sides. I'm really looking forward to more of this.

lol Good chapter, and I believe the title is from Shakespeare's Taming of the Shrew (one of my favs). Anyways, love this story so much I actually reviewed which is hard to do with a baby in my arms :P Keep up the fantastic writing.

ooh. that was a pretty intense chapter. i don't blame kagome though, under the circumstances i would have do the same thing. thanks for the update and btw you are doing an amazing job with this story so far. i'm really enjoying reading it.

I'm really enjoying this fic please bring on the new chapter quick

I'm glad the low ratings don't get you down. :]
I've seen too many authors just get up and quit because of that. This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to see what happens next! You keep these guys in character better than I can. haha

This is amazing!! pure and simple. I cannot even fathom why anyone would rate this story with anything below 10, the persons who gave you low ratings must either be illiterate or completely juvenile . The title of chapter 3 comes from The Taming of The Shrew, spoken by miss Katherine. This story is definitely going on my favorites and I implore you to please continue and update soon!!! I love that Sesshomaru has a foot fetish by the way, hahaha naughty puppy! you should have him chew her shoes. Love it !! can't wait for more!!!
3 Vanessa aka LoveIsAMovement

i luv it i want more

i LOVE the plot :)

Love this story! I'm actually speechless... I've sat here for, like, five minutes, trying to come up with something to say -- but I can't! It's just that good! You ROCK!

That was quite appealing as it held my attention toward the entire read of the two chapters. I look forward to your next update.

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

This story is fan-tab-ulous.
Can't WAIT to c what happens next!

please update as soon as possible

Nice story. It had to end this way otherwise it wouldn't be a S/K fic now would it? *giggles*

Nicely written...update soon.

*hugs and smiles*

i can't wait until u update the story soon these are really great chapter and all of that stuff u burin it up i hope u update soon i wonder if fluffy has feelins for kagome since she has work for him please update

wow, my relationship is so like her's...except...he's not filthy rich or have anger managment issues. and neither do i work for a rich and famous buisnessman *tear* but yeah...u put it into words where i couldn't. it's interesting, i never thought to find my own thoughts in a fanfiction romance.
Aside from that however, your writing is beautiful and wonderfully plotted out. It's refreshing to read, even if the majority of the chapter was in argument, lol. i can't wait till you update. chow!

That was very interesting...the length didn't bother me. Nice job...

I'm really enjoying this so far, I can't wait to see where this story goes! Keep up the great work!

OMG i love it...you NEED to continue this story....hehe please and thank you^_^

Pretty damn cool. Can't wait for the next installment, enjoyed reading the first two chapters, sounds like a good plotline aswell. =]