Did I mention that you should do more humor? I really liked this one.

oh, please tell me you're going to continue this! I absolutely love it!

i only have 3 simple abreviated words 4 u-L O L!!!that wuz hillarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!write more plzplzplz ps:peace+;uv+respect=happienss

This is AwEsomE! I couldn't stop laughing when I neared the middle of the fic. I hope you will continue to write more. =D

Great one-shot! Only, it could be so much more than a one-shot! Please extend to multiple one-shots or full story length? Anyway, sorry for the short review, but I just had to let you know how much I enjoyed it -- very funny with the modern terminology!