| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
loretta- Thu 17 Apr 2008
| this is a great story so far and i've only read up to chapter two. i will read the rest of the story in a moment, but before i forget i need to make one comment. i think you skipped to far ahead inbetween chapters one and two. in chapter one inuyasha was sealed up in a hut, kagome had just cared for sesshomaru and rin and was on her way to the village. in chapter two kagome is on her way back from the village to sesshomaru and rin and inuyasha is with kikyo. i really think you should have told what happened in the village, why they let inuyasha out, if he did or did not throw a fit after smelling sesshomaru's blood on kagome, and how and when inuyasha went to see kikyo.
I love it! please update soon!
KiraNova
Asia- Sun 10 Feb 2008
| AHHHH! WTF! Why did you put that song in there now it's stuck in my head! (geee thanks alot!) Anyway I hope you update soon : ) Thanks
elvira- Sat 09 Feb 2008
| loved it!..please update!
| shirt (haori) pants (hakamas) little thing that wraps around a womans waist (obi)around a mans (sash *like sesshou-chan's yellow and blue one*). if you need any more help just ask me!
danny- Fri 01 Feb 2008
| i like it but also you need a beta if you want i could ask one of my betas to help or not just remeber to ask
Please update soon. I like this alot and I hate kikyo! sorry i put that on all my reviews lol!
Kira Nova
Noacat- Fri 01 Feb 2008
Just an FYI and totally not a flame -- Proper names like Sesshoumaru and Kagome need to be capitalized. This also applies to 'I'. EX: I went to the store.
Happy writing!
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