It reads just like an anime episode. I would like to read more.

i'm loving this piece so far. it's new and edgy; i love where ur going with it. can't wait for the next i nstallment!

Just got finished with the first chapter, I like it a lot so far.

I can't believe this is your first Inuyasha fic. It's soooo goood. Like . . . chocolate cake good. It's dark and sensual and it makes me feel a little bad but I don't want to stop until I'm done.
Your characterizations are so deep and intriguing. I've seen both Sesshoumaru and Kagome in a lot of different roles but this particular combination is something entirely different. The portrayal of Kagome is heart-wrenching!
Goodness, the last part of that second chapter was so perfect. Very sexy but also very poetic.
I can't wait to see more from you.

This may have been your first in the Sesshoumaru and Kagome fics, but I must say that this was really well written. I really enjoyed reading it. You should really think about continuing this just a little longer. Great job!!!

I really love your fanfic! i think you should continue it!

it is so cute!!! i hope you do continue to write. i think your doing very well.

In the words of that purple dragon from that show my brothers watch, Loooooove it~!
I hope you update it soon.
-Snickers- Puppy dog..

Even as an introduction into the Inuyasha fandom, you have a wonderful start! I would love to read more as you go along.

Well,you've done a good job.
It's a fine to beginning to a longer story.
But it is rather cute on its own.And it stands
well.
So,if you figure this is your niche,don't worry.
You can do it.
Take your time with what to do,and I'm
sure you'll be alright.
Take care.

This story is off to a good start. I'm very interested in how the gang came to be in Sess's home...very interesting. You must continue. I have a feeling it might be a worthwhile gem of a story.

Excellent job for this being your first fic...keep up the good work.

*hugs and smiles*

This is your first? You should be proud. Not only well written with excellent spelling and grammar, but properly researched as well? I could die happy right now.