Megan Consoer- Tue 25 Mar 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

LordSesshomaruLover16- Wed 27 Feb 2008
i love where your going with this story please update soon dying to find out what happens soooo plz update !!!!!!!

The Happy Hentai- Wed 27 Feb 2008
Wah-tah! So so HOT! This is a positively gorgeous piece of writing! I enjoyed it immensely! Thank you for writing!

whispertoo- Wed 27 Feb 2008
nicely done. i loved it. to bad it wasnt longer, oh well, keep up the great work ;D

adea neri- Tue 26 Feb 2008
i truly enjoyed every moment of that. wow. very wow. cant get the words out but wow.

BeautifulDeception09- Tue 26 Feb 2008
Goshness That Was An Awesome Lemon ... I Realli Think U Should Continue There Is So Much U Could Do With This Story And As Ur First Fan Fic I Bet U It Would Be Serious Hit Since This One Chapter Is Just That Awesome!!!

Lee- Tue 26 Feb 2008
very nice for your first fic. I wish I was this good when I first started. You have a lot of potential. Keep it up!

CrimsonRose- Tue 26 Feb 2008
Fuck that was awesome keep'um cumming!

Tainted Sins- Tue 26 Feb 2008
Awww. They didn't.. stay together.. That was sad. It was a good fic, though, good lemon. Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

piratequeen0405- Tue 26 Feb 2008
I read it twice in a row. I'll probably read it again tonight--which is kind of a big deal--I'm busy as crap. I'm not really sure why this affected me so much...it's definitely not a touchy,feely story...I guess the emotions just seem so unforced. The sex scene was intense and tasteful, especially for the nonconsensual nature. I am quite impressed at how the whole thing was handled, but the end really amazed me. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for writing.

JosieKnox- Tue 26 Feb 2008
I have to say I really liked this. I'm not usually a big fan of one shots becasue most one shots that have lemon in them are basicly smut with no story line, I've stoped reading them, but I thought I would give this one a try. It was really well done, not rushed at all and there was meaning behind the lemon. Maybe lacking in detail but it is just a one shot so huge amounts of detail are not really needed. It was also a really good ending, it makes you want to know what happened next and I'm sure readers would love a sequel. But at the same time the ending is perfectly fine the way it is without a sequel. So in short Good Job!!

jestergirl- Tue 26 Feb 2008
Wonderful!!!!!

Kagome357- Tue 26 Feb 2008
That was pretty damn good. Hot, actually...keep up the good work...

Andha Chan- Tue 26 Feb 2008
that was sooo sad..

ECMRamos- Mon 11 Feb 2008
that was one of the best incharacter Sesshomaru kagome lemons I have ever read. thank you.

jazz- Sun 27 Jan 2008
please write more!! That was amazing!

Lady Amaya Ken- Sun 27 Jan 2008
I liked this fanfic alot. I so think you should continue it!

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