no smut? but that's my favorite xD

hey Shadow, I'm trying to do alittle reading while I got a free night to myself. My home is awaiting the weather to stay dry so the work can begin and I'm just missing my fanfics something fierce. I really loved this one shot. The poem was so beautiful. It talks to the heart in the purest of ways. You should be proud he drew attention to it. You have a true gift for words and I know a heart full of the love and desire you so often write about. Smut or not, talent is talent. I was sure Sessh would have left her some reply, but that one was so funny. I thought this was a perfect night's end for such dream to come true. Jen

beautiful. Very, simply, beautiful.

awwwww

That was a beautiful poem, and an even more beautiful story! Wow, Shadow can write non-smut! :D

Oh! That was so, utterly, unbearably, sweet! I love it! The poem was amazing, I wish I could do so well! An extremely wonderful Valentine's Story!!!

Very nice. I have read some of your work before, and I think you are an excellent author!

P.S. Don't forget though, a little smut is gooooooddd!!! LOL!

that was beautiful! I loved it.

That was SOOO sweet! *sigh* wish there was more to it....o yea..Happy Valentine

Simply incredible. Thanks for the lovely read.

again, beautiful...you are just so talented.

i love it is is sooo good o_~

Not much to say other than it was wonderful. I read it twice.

Excellent writing and the poem was exceptional.

*hugs and smiles*

Loved it. It was.. heartbreaking, to me, and sweet.
The poem was awesome. I don't know why, but it inspired me to write a haiku. It goes {Yes, I am going to subject you all to me terrible poetry!}
|When the heart will bleed
They shall wish for a new dawn
Tears fall to the ground|
It may seem emo, but it's.. not. You have to understand what it's about..
Anyway, continue to write~!

You are on a one-shot writing binge and I am on a one-shot reading binge! Works for me. This one was sweet. It made me want to smile and hug myself. I loved it! Thanks for the read! ~Rin

Oh my lord. I absolutely loved this and it made me cry. I'm officially going to read all your stories!! Brava!

Very well done. Heartbreakingly bitter sweet.

Great poem! And Great story! A perfect Valentines Day treat!

ya know, it would be a great story if you conyinued this, i can only imagine, if you need any help at all just ask me.I just got this new account and so i haven't posted any of my stories yet.Anyway.......Peace!

I think you should title it: "Hope in a lonely Heart"
Beautiful story!

Aww... Touching. He kissed her and left; that is such a Sessy thing to do too. Very good as always.

Nikkari

Holy Moses!!! Wow, I guess you ARE on a one-shot kick - how fortunate for your readers!!! This was sweet, yes, but oh-so-satisfying, even without the usual, somewhat hentai, nature of your other stories. I LOVED it. And that you built the whole thing around a poem, written for a class... sheer brilliance.

Thank you so VERY much for sharing this with us... you made a lousy day into an all right night!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

This story was absolutely adorable :] What Sesshomaru wrote at the end was really cute. Keep up the one-shot binge because they are all awesome.

This would be a nice story to continue :] or maybe just turn into a series of seasonal one-shots.

Keep up the good work!

I liked this. It was very sweet and heart warming. I really do hope that you get a chance to update your other stories that are unfinished still, Vying for dominance and Sins of the Father. I love them both so much and cant wait to read more of them. Keep up the wonderful stories! I love em'

Yay! That was good. Good job. ^-^

Yay! That was good. Good job. ^-^

Oh my gosh. This one shot is very lovely. This has been different from the other ones you've posted lately, like 'Forced Submission' and 'Assassin's Seduction', but it was really, really good. I loved how Sesshomaru brought back her poem and left the small note at the bottom of it, that was so sweet. I have to say, that I absolutely loved the poem as well. Overall, you did a fantastic job :]