There's always such power in your chapters. Sesshoumaru, though seemingly emotionless, is anything but in your stories ~_^ Loved it!
Woman, you are going to make me pull my hair out!!!! I cannot wait to find out if it is Patrick or the unknown presence thats the bad guy or even if some how they are working together. And why does Maru not like Patrick, besides the fact that he is interested in his daughter?
Tilayha
Sesshoumaru changing a diaper! I love you! But really, it was incredibly sweet and touching. Lovely chapter--family moments, family tension, humor, thickening plot...and I can't wait to see what you do with Patrick. My B.A. was in early Celtic/British history and folklore. I assume his name Maeve has some significance? :)
Lisa- Tue 15 Apr 2008
Oh how I love your story!!! Wow, it is amazing how you capture Sesshoumaru's growth without being ooc. Also, how you capture the moments and feelings, just wow. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa- Tue 15 Apr 2008
I just got finished with chapter 6, I love that chapter! Oh I was so excited. I haven't read TSNNAM, will it affect much of the reading in this story?
*A-Kay*- Mon 14 Apr 2008
I think it is safe to say that I'm a little bit more than confused at the moment. Hmm... I think I'll keep my thoughts and speculations to myself this round and wait for a change.
I did like this chapter. Aww, poor Yoshiro *hugs*
And the moment Sesshomaru had with his grandpup was just adorable.
*imagines Inuyasha barking out orders* Man that would be hilarious.
Lol. Sesshomaru telling Satori to bound, gag, and hang Inuyasha from the nearest tree was funny.
Like I said, I'm holding my questions waiting instead. But don't think I don't have questions. I have them... oh yes... I have them...
FleetingDream- Mon 14 Apr 2008
Shame on you EP leavin me hangin like that at such a good part argh! Lol nice chapter it was a strang mix b/t happiness, comedy, sweetness and sadness (at the end)all in all I liked it I really liked the part with Sesshou talkin 2 the baby it wuz so funny n sweet really cute well datz all Im bout 2 call it a night
you are such a tease! the way you lightly skimmed over the danger and ancient power. are you REALLY sure you want to end this tale?
tilayha
Beautiful chapter and as always, so very well written! Everything happens for a reason, ne? Keep up the fantastic work!
Jean- Mon 31 Mar 2008
I'm confused. Who is Rin's mate? Does Norio = Shippo? Is Norio the mate and Shippo in love with Rin but didn't get the girl? Or maybe Norio is the doctor? I am just not clearly getting it.
Demonlordlover- Mon 31 Mar 2008
Lovely. I like how it ties nicely into the recent happenings in TSNNAM. It isn't karma that Rin was saved. More of a cycle of life. The choices that we make now can comprise the outcome of future events. In this case, because Kagome had taught him to bend in the past, Rin was saved in the future. The ending quote was quite candidly true to this case.
The same could be said for poor decisions, and the regret of 'what-if's' that can haunt someone when a misdeed is done or an opportunity for greatness was squandered.
I am a bit curious about Sango's conversation and thoughts on Sesshoumaru's coming actions.
FleetingDream- Mon 31 Mar 2008
Fantastic! Great as usually, new life is such a beautiful thing, I'm so happy for Rin and Shippo
I'm glad I forced myself to wait with this story until I had caught up with TSNNAM. I feel so invested in the characters; it's good to know they are leading satisfying lives. The interactions are all suberbly done, and the kids are great. Patrick...what's he hiding I wonder? Can't wait to find out!
I Hope Rin Is Okay ... But Shippo And Her Got Their First Baby!!!! Yay!!!!
*A-Kay*- Sun 30 Mar 2008
So I just went back to re-read the chapter. I see what you're talking about. (zips mouth shut).
I do have one more thing to say - ok, maybe it's a few more things to say. Sango and Sesshomaru's conversation was funny. Seems they become friends haha. And - and this is the big one - when is Sango's party and when are we going to meet her "man" and her son. I understand the story isn't really about her, but the way you were setting things up about her party it seemed like it would be something big.
Pervert? Hm... Miroku? or Masaru? This is a tough one. We all know Miroku, our beloved monk is a pervert. And judging from that last chapter in TSNNAM we know that Masaru have sex appeal and like to make a woman squirm until her legs are about to go out... so which one could it be? *winks* I can't wait to find out. Hopefully that would be soon - or something like it.
*A-Kay*- Sun 30 Mar 2008
When I read this the other day, I was in all out panic mode for Rin. I was so worried for Rin. Aw, a baby girl. Damn four tries?! Kag and Sess are grandparents. Wow nobody like Patrick - hahaha.
Well, I guess that's about it.
Great update. Update Soon..
Since I had to find this one by myself (scowles and EP :-)) I was gonna complain but, after reading the story I find I can not be mad at you! This is wonderful, captivating and fluid. I love it! Just let me know when the next chapter is up silly!
Tilayha
u r a true wonder, do you know that? Reading this makes the ending worth waiting for!
Tilayha
Well Kagome Was Ummm A Tad Bit Scary For Padraig ... Sesshomaru Is Using Him As A Dog Toy LOL ... Loved The Update!!!!
snowbird- Mon 25 Feb 2008
This chapter has a lot of mystery in it. I know Patrick is a thousand year old Druid warlock, but what is this other entity? Not understanding completely about the tree. And why is it such a danger to reveal himself? Is it because of the entity? But he told Satori that he was connected to the entity. More questions than answers in this chapter, unless it's just me.
FleetingDream- Sun 24 Feb 2008
I love your portrayal of Kagome she's seemly harmless unless your a lying Warlock oh well poor Patrick things are just not boding well for the man but its his own fault for assuming himself smarter than the lord and lady of the west well good chapter and a mean cliffy
Wow so much information! I loved it! You are truly creative, thank you so much for the wonderful read. Keep up the amazing work ^_^
Jean- Sun 24 Feb 2008
Ah, so the boyfriend is a magical being after all, although it is still unclear what his intentions are. I loved Kagome in her "I have the Power of Grayskull" mode. I know I am showing my age with a He Man quote. However, you just do not lie to a Mother, especially when the main point of the discussion is about her daughter. Great scene. A jealous Sesshoumaru in true form at the end of the chapter was a vivid image to behold.
ROFLMAO.
"Meet the Parents" Inuyasha style. lol.
This chapter was funny and getting deep.
Inuyasha and Ayamme are funny.
*giggles* (Imagine's Sango hanging from a tree in spy mode)
Patrick is in deep shit it seems. And Sess in heat and jealous. Poor kid.
Yes you have been away for too long. I think we (the readers) are going through withdrawals. Your stories are like a drug and have us feigning for more.
Did I ever ask how your b-day went? *shrugs* Hope it was fun. Update soon we are waiting.
Jean- Tue 19 Feb 2008
OMG we go from total angst to being "treed." Did I even spell that correctly? Is that a new action verb? Although I am making fun of the term, the action it is intriguing . . . . I hope you had a great birthday Valentine Girl.
ZOMG!! "Snogging the living daylights...?" LMAO!!! I soooo LOVE that line! And "walled" as opposed to "treed?" Bwahahaha!! You are definitely a bright spot in my reading browsing, m'dear. No doubts!
As always, thank you so much for another highly enjoyable chapter - looking forward to more!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Lovely Story ... Patrick's Got Me Worried ... Sessho Is So Going To Slaughter That Boi!
I like this story. The only thing that I was confused on is the setting until the tv show was mentioned.
I love Kagome and Sesshomaru's dynamics. The fire and desire nature that they display is sexy and I love just LOVE how the brothers bond over the game. I look forward to your updates!
Loved it! Great chapter, ahh hormonal teenagers, and right in front of her parents too! Keep up the great work!
Oh and it is also very cute and adorable to see Inuyasha in protective papa mode. Warms my heart. lol. Ayamme would have surely killed him.
Lol, Yes, I know I'm a BRAT. It's awesome!!! Haha.
So, like seriously the wheels are turning more and more and I'm feeling really good about this story. You say it's gonna end in time for valentines day? Hmm.... that's four days away right now. Are you sure it's going to end then?
I really like this. It's so funny and interesting. Man do those two ever give it a rest. And awww... .Raiden, what a cute name. I see you too are creative with the names as well. I'm not. It's whatever I find on the net. Lol.
What is up with this Patrick guy? I'm with Sess. I don't trust him. It's funny how he called Satori and Patrick indecent. Look at him. He should be the one to talk. But then again, he's Sess. He has that I-Can-Do-Whatever-I-Want attitude. I love it.
Sooooo... Sango is with Masaru....? (wink wink) hmm. Still, where is Miroku? Guess I gotta wait for TSNNAM to be updated to see right?
Ok, the kids. Tsuki is Inuyasha's right? And Yoshiro is Sesshomaru's. Raiden is Inuyasha's. We all know who Satori is for. I saw another name... give me a moment let me go back and check...............-----Kioshi, that's the name. Who is Kioshi? I would make another assumption, but I'm not even sure if this particular character is a child or not, but if it is a child then I suppose you already know who I think he belongs to. (WEG) lol... haha
Update again soon.
snowbird- Sun 10 Feb 2008
Thank you so very much for bringing this to my attention. When I read the last update on TSNNAM, I meant to check it out. But my stomach began to fuss at me to feed it breakfast and I forgot afterwards. I like sequels and continuations of any kind on stories with deep emotional depth to them. It's like you get involved in the lives of the characters in the story and don't want to let go of them. You've got me dying to know who Sango's mate is. It has to be youkai for her to have lived so long. It just has to be Masaru. Yes? Yes? I don't understand it. I've just become a Masaru addict, I guess. Woe is me! hahaha
Jean- Sun 27 Jan 2008
Kagome sending looks "to kill" (as they are called in my family) to Sesshoumaru over the dining table with the family sitting there trying to behave as if everything is normal was so funny. I love it! Oh the memories. I digress. Sesshoumaru being called up short by his own pup also brought quite a chuckle out of me. The solution to the fight, sex, was totally not fair and, as the males know, works every time. Sesshoumaru's ability to scent her response gives him an advantage which he has no scruples using to gain the upper hand. I gather the end result will be Kagome will not remember what she was fighting about and Kagome will be "knocked up." Or rather Sesshoumaru sensed that Kagome was ready to procreate due to her scent and by recent observations of her behavior and he, being a good mate, obliged her and filled her needs.
Miko53- Sat 26 Jan 2008
As always your stories are delightful. May the muses continue to assist you in the creativity of such wonderful pieces regarding our favorite couple.
Q: Are you going to update on the original story soon?
Alicia
What a cute story so far! I love all the relationships with the family members ^_^ Keep up the great work, I hope you had fun on your trip!
Red-Smartiez- Sat 26 Jan 2008
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful ^^
I apologize for not reviewing for past 3 chapters. I have had a week of exams non-stop, so I was busy as the devil.
As always, excellent job and keep it up ^_^
Great update EP. The kids are cute. Sess and Kag still got it.
Question Time! *Runs around like Foamy the Squirrell (an awesome squirrell I tell you that)*
Is uh.... Sango not with Miroku? I noticed you never really mentioned our lovely pervert, but you did mention she have another half. Meaning she's married and if I'm going in the direction my mind is taking which is at the moment where u are on TSNNAM Miroku is really having some issues... that's bad. Sango is kinda sorta attracted to Masaru (still love hat name by the way - Victory)... a demon.... who I think she have some sort of connection to, some kinda way. Anyway she's attracted to him and Miroku, but could it be possible she lived this long because she and Masaru got together? Hell even Souta mated a demon. Hmmm.... something to think on.
Patrick huh. I foresee that after this is story and TSNNAM end... we will be having another following in it's steps? Hmm.... more to think on.
*Gasps* Shih Tzu pups in a cold lake!? SAVE THEM! lol. oh and can I have one? lol.... not like I can really get one, but it is fun to dream. I'll be content watching my hamster Taz try to figure out how to escape from his cage. Really funny, but he's determined.
I'll be waiting for the next part of BOTH stories.
articfire69- Thu 24 Jan 2008
i love it, it is a very good story, please keep up the good work
Priestess Skye- Wed 23 Jan 2008
Oh Sesshoumaru's in protective papa mode, does not bode well for Satori *g*
and poor Jaken, but I love beating on that little toad, he's fun. Ah at least he knows his lot in life *g*
Jean- Wed 23 Jan 2008
I think Satori and Sesshoumaru should be getting their butt in gear and arrive on time at the Council meeting. Kagome can be hell on wheels if crossed. I just love Sesshoumaru, he is already trying to figure out a way to kill off Satori's love interest due to his unworthiness. This household would never be boring.
AKay- Wed 23 Jan 2008
*squeals in delight* UPDATEi
I love it. I like how you have the relationship between father and daughter. It's cute. Poor Jaken... poor poor Jaken. lol. Awww Rin and Shippo gonna have babies. Oh oh and I too am curious about how is it the humans lived so long? Out with it woman! Spill! LMAO.
I'll be waiting.
I had to laugh at the last few lines of the chapter. It's part overprotective father, part teritorial Taiyoukai, part following the path that has been set before them and, ultimately, funny. Not because he isn't serious, but because he is and I'm not sure whether to feel bad for Patrick or Sesshomaru when he tries what it is he's planning to do and his daughter and wife catches wind of it. I'm really loving this story and really can't wait to see where it goes.
Peace.
~Ivy
Hahaha! Sesshoumaru reminds me of my own Dad.
"Ashley, I just want you to know something..."
"What is it. Dad?"
"Then man that you marry...you just make sure he knows I have a gun."
"Ummmm...."
"And if he breaks your heart...I'll break his skull..."
"....uhhh..."
"Don't forget to mention my shot guns, .12 gauge and .22."
"D-Daddy..."
"Wait--Who's that boy?"
"Daddy no!"
Yup, just like my Dad.
Patrick? Is she in love with an Irish guy? Dude! I'm totally part Irish!
'Tis de pride of the Irrrrish, lass!
Later, gator!
--Ashley
This Ashley is back!
Awww! This whole story is so cute! I love it! Adorable! Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha have this little...unspoken relationship. Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside!
The kids are so cute! Like puppies! Heeheehee...I love it!
Hmmm...are you doing all of these chapters in drabble form? That's a good idea. Way to tease your readers!
Heeheehee...
See you in Chapter the Third!
Dun dun dunnn!
--Ashley
Oh wow! What a cute, short little chapter.
Wait--? What's this?! I'm actually alive?! I'm actually reviewing! Oh dear God! What a miracle! This is totally unheard of! Ack!
Heeheehee...
What a cute little beginning...is it really the epilogue to TSNNAM? Is that story over all ready? Now way! I think I have a couple of chapters to still read. Oh, school is such a bitch! Pfft!
Okay, I'm going onto the next chapter! See you there!
--Ashley
FleetingDream- Mon 21 Jan 2008
I agree with Jean when reading this story I couldn't shake the feeling of a leap to the future by tsnnam, but away so far so good, I like the calm mature nature you bestowed on Inuyasha it's a nice change and who is this male that has Sesshoumaru all super dad on. I can't wait to find out ta-ta
*Grins* I have to say that is one of the loveliest, truest scenes between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru I've ever read. Yes, they've both matured and come to terms with each other, but they still have their innate qualities. Very well done.
Peace.
~Ivy
Jean- Sun 20 Jan 2008
Hmm. Satori with siblings, Inuyasha calmer due to a feeling of belonging, Kagome and Sesshoumaru have been mated for a long time, and Kagome treats Jakken better than Sesshoumaru does. This sounds suspiciously like TSNNAM 600 years later. Now that is established, it is nice to see the half-brothers getting along. Their banter is cute in a very "male" way. Of course, it probably took most of those years for them to get along. Sometime details will have to be provided to your faithful following or I won't be responsible for what happens. Who is Inuyasha's mate? How are the humans still alive? Are there still hot monkey shenanigans between Sesshoumaru and Kagome going on, which you are so talented in describing? And lastly, are you dedicating this story to dogs in general or your dog, Barklay?
A-Kay- Sun 20 Jan 2008
it was great EP. I see this takes place some time after TSNNAM. Awesome... keep em comin
al- Sun 20 Jan 2008
I could get used to this kind of story.
It's nice,and it flows well.
No misspellings whatsoever.
Good luck and take care of yourself.
Aww.... so short. Hmph, well whenever you update I'll of course be looking forward to it. So do so soon please. *pouts with puppy eyes*
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