It was cute. I liked it a lot. If I were you I would rethink the rating considering the last line.

For italics you put i > directly in front of the word and / i > at the end. Without the spaces.

Emily

wow loved this story

Aww, its so cute. The only problem was spelling and the ending was so fast. Thanks for the fic.

That was funny...

I liked it.

I liked it.. it was good. and very cute

LOOL

I loved it, and i don't think Kagome was too out of character, i liked it and you can even leave the story ending like this because i'm trying to place my feet in your shoes, and i can't think of anyway to forward the story. Though.......as a fanfic reader you know i'm still going to say, please write more lol