wow this was awesome! i mean reallyit was great job and i am heading to check out your other stories! and agian great story!

Wow. That was absolutely stunning! It was quite long, but totally worth it! Thanks to Demonlordlover for being such an awesome writer, and thanks to you for posting her brilliant work!!!!

that was really good..

Wow that was great! Definitely a roller coaster of emotion. Thanks for this wonderful story.

i loved this story. i liked it alot!

absolutely beautiful

Okay that. was. the. longest. one. shot. EVER!!

But I loved how you carried an entire lifetime in it. It was masterful from beginning to the end.

The only issues I had with it, and they're very very tiny, was Shin and Inuyasha. I didn't see if Shin lived into the 21st century nor was it clear on how Inuyasha died.

Chaining Sess to the floor for some hot freaky deaky?? Damn that was inspired! Kagome is a dominatrix after my own heart. Congrats, Wiccan and DemonLordLover. Outstanding...

A very nice and amazingly written story. The first few paragraphs grabs you and keeps you reading on til the end. I would not mind reading a sequel this story. *hint...hint* :-)

This rated a 10 across the board in my opinion. You are a very talented writer.

*hugs and smiles*

you have to come out with a continuation for the story!!!!!!!! i want to know what happend next you are a great author btw!!! i love how you can word every thing.

That was beautiful. Great writing as always.

OMG another great story you are wonderful!!!!

I can honestly say that it is far more than I had expected, and completely unexpected, as well. I must say that when I first came up with the concept, the idea in my mind went in a completely different direction. It is completely amazing to see the direction that different minds can take similar concepts, with just a few suggested ideas.

The idea of the spell, the crane youkai, and the presentation of the agreement between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was quite a surprise and I loved every minute of it. Thank you so much for the great story.

goodness.......that was....um....uh....amazing is the word i think im looking for. very discriptive and inticing. you had me hooked within the first few paragraphs! please continue doing other fics....this one was outstanding.
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Wow.
I really really liked this fic. It is rivaling Hollowed Desires and damn you write well!
That was so sweet of Sesshoumaru to give Kagome the immortality fruit..
Fanfic writers like you make the world a happier place for obsessive saps like me.

Comforting, I know.
Continue to write other fics, please!

I absolutely loved this fic. It rocks!

I like how you keep sesshomaru in character. and the lemons were steamin'.

Keep it up!

I really enjoyed this story, pass it on to DemonLordLover...

p.s. thanks for posting it here :)

Fabulous. Demonlordlover's work is amazing.

Wow. I loved it. I hoped to see other stories in the near future because this one was amazing!!!! ^_^ Great work!