woww!
i criedd by the timee i finishedd readiingg itt
veryy good

do it!

wow,
your words are so sincere it made me tear up a few times you are very talented

I absolutly love your story. I havent had a good cry in a long time. That is just so sad. I hope you write more. I will be looking for it. :)

very sad and happy at the same time! good job!

Oh please continue this, it almost made me cry and I imagine the rest will. I really like the outline of this story , so please continue I don't normally beg. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

ohmagod!!! that wuz soooooooooooooooo sad but i luved it write more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ps:peace+luv+respect=happieness 3

wahhhhhh i cant stop its too sad, poor kagome poor sesshoumaru. (^_^sniff sniff)
beautifully written
RedRoseRuby

I loved the story very sad but very well done. I would love to see this made into a series or even just add another chapter or something, The story has a lot of potential so run with.

i love the story. u should continue it.

this is good. udate
update

Post the next story PLEASE. This one had me In tears and I loved it please continue with it !

you absolutly cannot leave this as a one shot. you have quite a few directions you can take with this one. I hope you continue this one. tilayha

God look at me I'm in tears. This was very sad but well written. I'm still gonna cry for a while longer.

Very sad :(
I liked it.

*hugs and smiles*

I haven't read this. It looks short and like something that relies far too heavily on elipses, which I find to be a pretty solid indication that the author doesn't know what she wants to say. But I thought I'd throw you a bone - no one is going to read a story if you can't even spellcheck your title. SACRIFICE. English can be a wonderful friend if you treat it properly.