Yay a lemon! Hey! We're all hentai at heart kayz? So why not just tell the truth, who's a hentai here? (every one raises their hands) See? Please update soon!

Oi! Scorching!

What an interesting way to get the muse kicking! I loved your first chapter...keep up the good work!

... and if that didnt work I dont know what would.
That was hot. You had a few misplaced words. Nothing really drastic or hard to figure out. All in all it was great. You're awesome. Update soon.