Your story was a little intense but very interesting. I enjoyed reading it and it was nicely written.

Thank you for a lovely story.

*hugs and smiles*

i really like your story and i hope there are more to come

Omg! I love your story so far it is amazing! I was in an awful mood today b4 i went 2 work and your story totally cheered me up. Lol. But really you are an AWESOME writer :)