Reviews for Stuck by Kagome-Chan

Ice Angel- Sat 29 Mar 2008
Soooo? Does this mean it's done? I guess I'll be reading your other stories then!

Ice_Angel- Sat 29 Mar 2008
Really cute ending! I'm also sad to see this go... Aw... Can't wait to read your other stories!

Ice_Angel- Sat 29 Mar 2008
Like I said, I'm catching up with lost time! Nice chapter btw! I even listened to the music while reading the chapter! lol I'm going to read the next one now!

Ice_Angel- Sat 29 Mar 2008
I haven't been reading in a while and right now I'm trying to catch up. I'm still lovin' this story! I'm going to read the next chapter now!

Ice_Angel- Sat 22 Mar 2008
Hi Kagome-Chan! I'm still lovin' dis story! Myoga never quits does he? I'm lookin' forward to da nxt chapter!

Kagome357- Thu 20 Mar 2008
Girl, you know I was heated when I saw she stole your story! I called her a loser before they took her profile down.

Anyway, keep on doing your thing - we got your back...

Bethany- Tue 18 Mar 2008
I knew this person. She was a member on FanLib.com. Keyword: WAS. The matter has been solved by Sunset Miko, who broght this to my attention.

Please continue. I really like this story...

~Bethany

*A-Kay*- Tue 11 Mar 2008
Hey K- Chan,
So this morning elle6778 put out an alert about plagerized stories on fanlib.com. Some chick by the name kagome_inuyasha has stolen a number of fics including your story, Stuck. I've never read your story yet, but I recognized the summary. Just thought to let you know.

Ice_Angel- Thu 28 Feb 2008
I like your story! It's one of my favorites! Keep up the good work kayz? And can't wait for the next chapter!

Tainted Sins- Sat 23 Feb 2008
You spelled it correctly. I'm not even Catholic, really.. That must be good, because my resolve broke after 8 days. I love chocolate. Sesshoumaru, a sap? Never thought I'd see the day.. Ick, morning sickness. Poor Sango. It's been a while since I read Fruits Basket. I need to finish that series and check out her other works. Update soon, pweasy! Love and fudgesicles~

Kagome357- Wed 20 Feb 2008
I enjoyed where your story's heading but I agree with the one reviewer regarding your first person style. I tend to avoid stories written in the first person but you've been very supportive of my work so I wanted to show you some love. I did enjoy it, however. The plot is interesting and I can't wait to see where you take it.

The second thing I want to caution you on is the POVs. There's a way to do POVs without them looking like POVs that will keep your story flowing and you do that by writing it as normal conversation within the story. Readers will pick up that it's a POV unconsciously and keep flowing.

I used to follow this one guy on FF.net who had a great story but past the 10th chapter he got caught up in POVs to where the last 30 (yes I said 30) chapters were POVs. He's now I believe past 55 chapters right now but I gave up around chapter 45 because it was simply unreadable. That happened with him because readers wanted the characters POVs and he just got caught up and overwhelmed to where his story was completely lost IMHO.

Too many POVs will make you lose track of your original storyline and it'll get confusing for you and the readers. You have make it like floetry. Trust in that...anyhoo, take care of your busy schedule and I'll wait for you to continue.

Tainted Sins- Thu 07 Feb 2008
Hurrah! {I forgot to review for the past few chapters, didn't I.. Forgive me!!} Yes, very good lime. ♥ Yay for sandwiches! Fudgesicles for all! But not me. Not for thirty-eight more days~
Loved this chapter, update soon~!

Tainted Sins- Mon 21 Jan 2008
Yay, happy 16th birthday!
Good chapter. But.. Where'd Shippou go? And Kirara? Maybe I just missed the part that said where they went. -Shrugs- Can't wait for chapter 16!

Inusbabe- Mon 21 Jan 2008
I am enjoying this story but you need to get a beta. There are a few unanswered questions, one has been asked, but another would be were was Sess living before he moved in with Kagome? Wouldn't he still have that place?

MissJess- Mon 14 Jan 2008
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Hope you had a great one, and that all your wishes came true!!


sandy- Mon 14 Jan 2008
happy b-day !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

elizabeth e hogan- Mon 14 Jan 2008
great story and jan 14 happens to be my son birthday to

NeoYoukai21- Wed 02 Jan 2008
I love your story!!! It is brilliant. Keep up the great work! can't wait to see what happens.

Tainted Sins- Wed 02 Jan 2008
That felt too short. T.T

Chapter 15 will be good, though! (Right?)
It was funny/cute when Shippou and Kirara snuck into the future. x3
Hope Miroku will be okay.

Tainted Sins- Mon 31 Dec 2007
Oooooh! I love it!! Love it love it love it!

There should be a steamy sex scene where the dog walks in and says (thinks) something funny. (I feel like such a hentai, but oh well!
Kagura should be chained to some really ugly poor guy for the rest of eternity.
Can't wait for the next chapter!! I'll become a regular reviewer, honest!!

stephanie- Mon 31 Dec 2007
why didnt seshoumaru save inuyasha with the tensaiga?
and make kagome happy?
i dont understand

black moon inu- Sat 29 Dec 2007
hey this is a great fic. oh and the differents is: Story: lemon full out sex secne lime or citris just the begginings of a lemon. Fruit lemon yellow and sour lime green and I don't recomend eating it on its own its worse then the lemon in my opion. I wasn't sure which you wanted the differences of not your falt I just haven't slept and it's 5 in the morning so Im not all together at the moment. LOL well post soon.

hugs and puppies

emalee- Thu 27 Dec 2007
nice =] you asked for a tiny review well here you go lmfao

Sakura- Wed 26 Dec 2007
This was awsome! I hope u write more. I truely enjoy reading it over and over. Please write more.

Kimmy-chan- Tue 25 Dec 2007
Kyaa!!! I love your stories. But, this takes the cake. Post, post, post! I want to read more.

chicke- Mon 24 Dec 2007
Liked the story! keep up the good work

Jonell Torres- Mon 24 Dec 2007
kagome-chan,
I love your story so much I will be waiting for your next posting I will lok everyday for it I love it so much!!!
thanks for writing I can't wait to see what happens next.
Jonell

Kim- Mon 24 Dec 2007
I only read this for the first time today, and am enjoying so far. Just FYI, you used costume not custom in the last chapter. I don't mean to be mean, just letting you know so can correct it! Update soon!

Tana-san- Tue 04 Dec 2007
Hi, Kagome-chan. I have read one of your fics before and I like the storylines but I do find it difficult to understand why you write all the characters in first person in this new fic? I think this if a fantastic storyline beginning but you really need to get out of the first person prospective for everyone. Or before you enter into that perspective let us in on who you are in the beginning of that paragraph so we needn't guess. Please do consider a well known beta to help you if it's difficult. I'm not very good on language structure and such but I feel this fic has such a great potential and it has me hooked even though I'm having difficulty with your writing style. I don't remember ever reading having Kagome AND InuYasha trapped in the future WITH the future Sesshoumaru. (at least not like this. And I have to agree with you that a tuxedo makes practically every man/youkai look great. And InuYasha is correct, tuxedoes ARE stuffy. As well as most formal gowns are uncomfortable and shoes are murder to wear when you're a bare foot and slipper kind of girl. I tend to wonder why Seesh manhandled Kagome's arms so harshly after discovering she knew him and then he did a total turn around. He then proceeded to tell her to contact him or he has ways of finding her. Hmm, alittle suspicious to me. Anyway,she avoided a blow-up between the brothers so Kami was on her side there. Can't wait to see InuYasha pull his famous tamper tantrum. Poor hotheaded boy. Well, hope to see more of this and I hope you didn't take my remarks as flame.(if so, let me know and I get the water fairies to put out the flame and I'll get some salve to ease the sting) Jen

singingrain- Sun 02 Dec 2007
I like it; it's interesting so far. Watch how spell women, though; you tend to switch the 'o' and 'e'. Keep up the good work!

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.