Great story! Can't wait for the next update.

not even the might sesshy is imperviouse to the little onna? i loved it thus far and can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks and I will, as aways!!!
Bye

hey. so ive been reading yur story and i like yur whole 'slow seduction' idea. its interesting. im really looking forward to the next chapter. so stay encouraged to be focused. because i feel a vibe of a great story. Peace.

Eskamo.

hey. so ive been reading yur story and i like yur whole 'slow seduction' idea. its interesting. im really looking forward to the next chapter. so stay encouraged to be focused. because i feel a vibe of a great story. Peace.

Eskamo.

goooddd!

I liked the beginning part following Kagome analyzing the guys she knew and preparing to turn stalker.

But the shopping section seemed pointless and excessively discriptive.

interesting start. i look forward to more :)

In your summary I think you should take out the part that says that you suck because it is a good one. It caught my intrest.

I like the approach that you are taking with this story I think I will enjoy watching this unfold and I hope to see more soon

Mm... Did the person supply you with the prologue? Your two years later part is very short. I understand prologues to be short, nonetheless, yours is too short. You need some meat in there. Please plan this story through. I feel that you have great potential.