I love yoko Ishida to I have on of her CD's. It's so cool

OMG i was cring on the last chapter !!!(sniffel sniffel) i loved that story yay it was sort but it was graet !!!ok my my space is (display name) 2 goiod 4 u (name) adriana magalhaes (email) anime95@comcast.net
good night 2 u!! of and why did it end the story it was geeting beter each chpter !!!

WAHHH?!!! I want all the boys to like me.
:[
hahahaaha

but yeah, I get what you mean. stupid high school. hahaha

three chapters????
where have i been? haha
anyway, these were good. and thank you for not being one of those evil authors who stop stories once they stop getting reviewed. there ARE people out there who just like to READ the fics and not review. i do that a lot :P
ok, constructive critisism [not much, tho... ].
the last chapter was good, but it seemed kind of like these new evil girls that i just want to KILL for being mean to kagome.. just popped in. with oc characters [yes, even with the minor ones...] there needs to be some kind of character development. like... why were they mean to kago? whats their history? names? lol 'cause i was kind of expecting to hear some kind of reason from her as to why they made her cry. but good job! you made me want to strangle 'em!

wow... this was a long review. have fun reading it!!

:D

ok sory 4 the late message but ive got 2 go 2 bed (10:14pm) school day . ok look up my email and my myspace display is 2 good 4 u !! got to go message later !! Ja Ne !!!

hii again ppl always say im crazy or hyper n stuff but thats just how i am!!!!!!!!! so i say deal with it !!!!!! chaa as sakura says (from naruto) i lov anime yup deal with it !!!! i love turkey on turkey day too!!!!! oh do u have my space ??? oh and thank u !!!!!!

I love your story so far!!! it kicks some major ass.... and i totally love the quotes you have in the beginning of your chapters, you totally rule lol :D

i luv you u r like my # 2 best friend !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and my #1 bff is lourna she is the 1 thats writing a change for you (i think thats what she name it) her user name is animelover21 (i think thats what she called it ????) oh and she is grounded so don't expect the 4th chapter in a while (don't tell i told u any info pleaz ??!! she will kill and i do karate and i am older than her but she is still probely cabable of kicking my ass or butt if you prefer that ???? oh and update update update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Ja Ne !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARE U CRAZY! KAGOME BELONGS TO SESSHOUMARU!

"Japan Made Easy"
for some reason I find that deliciously hilarious.
hahahaahaha
XDDD

WOOT for longer chapters!!!
:D

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love the way you write the story. It's like Beauty & the Beast but little bit different. Please update more i just can't wait to know what happen next.

god i love you this storie is so good please you must update even if i just red this storie i love it and i am now hooked!!!!! update soon or i will cry

Unsure of your age though I'm assuming under 21 you have... Firstly let me clarify myself. Age does not necessiarly mean an improved writer. You still have a long ways to go. Your writing style is a bit choppy and you don't develope your ideas for long peroids of time. The over all plot is acceptable, just really not developed too much. Work on expanding your ideas some. Seems like a childs story to me, that's all.

I read the whole thing in 1 go & the plot is good although you have some spelling goofs & stuff, the 2 I noticed the most are agenst which should be spelled against & I've mostly seen the old miko's name spelled as Kaede not Kiede. Hope this helps.

haha. I just might :P
good for you! just focus on now. forget college, it'll always be there. and going to a nice community college before running straight into the big leagues is A LOT cheaper. trust me.
people change majors all the time, and its better to spend a couple hundred instead of thousands when that happens.

what a good story this is! i am enjoying it so much and i can't wait until you write more.

i have been reading your little blurbs at the bottom of your chapters, so they aren't a waste of time. i find your thought process interesting. i would like to make a suggestion or two, though.

i understand the desire to live for someone else and make them the center of your universe, it is so romantic a vision. however, i think it would be a better thing for you to live for yourself and love yourself first. once you come to love yourself, you will realize how valuable a person you are in this world. you will recognize that when you choose to love someone you are giving them a gift of great wealth: yourself. you need to keep this in mind when you choose your beloved, that person must be a person worthy of so great a gift; he must be able to recognize your value and treat you with respect and consideration. he must do this because you deserve such treatment and no one who gives you less that what you deserve is worthy of you and your heart.

what do you want to be? i've been asking myself that question for more years than you've been on this earth. i am finally getting some answers, ones that i like. sometimes we don't know exactly what we want to be in this life and that opens your life up to the adventure of possibility: what do you love to do? do you love computers? drawing? design? engineering? geology? anthropology? accounting? what you do and who you are in this life are choices and you can choose more than one thing, you can choose anything! and your age doesn't matter, you can choose anytime, anywhere, anything. just remember "first do no harm."

janer

THAT WAS SO BEAUTYAND THE BEAST!!!!
the castle!!! XDDD
AND THE SINGING!!!
*dies*

being a kid is fun in'it?
haha
dont worry if you dont know where your life is going right now, it actually is NORMAL.
a lot of people i know still have no idea what they want to do, and theyre in college! so, i think youre on the right track.
:P

and you know... while reading this chapter, I kept humming that beauty and the beast song... and holy khrap, t'was beautiful!

hehehe kagome trips on air
XDDDD

"And May I Suggest De-Caffeinated Coke?"
NEVER!!!!!!!!!

and back to the chapter...
*ahem*
Sesshoumaru cries?!?!?!
XDDD
thats actually a creepy image.
but then again, I'm imagining the kind of ugly cry where you like... lose an arm and everythings all bloody and the pain is pretty much unbearable... poor guy.
hahaha!

Hey... you should start answering your phone the way the Japanese do. "Moshi Moshi!!" It really messes with whoever calls you. Or alternately, you could answer it like the Chinese do: "Wei." Both are guaranteed to get a prolonged silence from the person who called you.

And yes, I have read the story... but I prefer to comment on the author's notes. Don't know why. ^_~

hahaha
sun-san???
XD
girl, you are hopeless. haha

but this was a good chapter. its a LEETLE bit confusing when you switch from kagome being in first person and then switching off to third, but it doesnt make it impossible to read.
and now, if you'll excuse me, it is time I strap on my wings and fly off into the sunset. BATWINGS AWAY!!

....i should really stop drinking coke.

So... how IS the new carpet?

haha sometimes your topic of discussions make me giggle. i find them entertaining.
:D

your good moor plz

Liking it a lot please update soon.

how do you get these ideas so quick???
hahaha
this one has great potential!

Well written, good flow and very few grammatical errors (which is ALWAYS a plus!). Hope chapter 2 is as entertaining as chapter 1.
:o)