Jean- Thu 11 Oct 2007
Wow, I think I need to read more of your stuff.
odango- Thu 11 Oct 2007
you should deffently keep this one good it is realllllllllllyy good
Winters_Snow- Wed 10 Oct 2007
hehe..I like it very traight to the point and sensual
elle6778- Wed 10 Oct 2007
Your hentai muse is certainly doing his/her job! I like your use of italics here. It certainly adds to the atmosphere, if you know what I mean. Beautiful smut!
Kurokajin- Wed 10 Oct 2007
I'm very glad you decided to feed your muse. Hopefully I'll be reading more from you soon. Very well written.
Prietess Skye- Wed 10 Oct 2007
That was absolutely exquisite. You can feed your hentai muse anytime with pieces like that ;)