that was great! please update soooon!!!!!!! i love ur story!!!! it is my fav story ever!!!!

Please update soon!!!
Arigatou

I understand the worry you have about ppl taking your plot line. I have some on here too... but I love this story and i hope you dont take it off. It is awsome and I cant wait to see what happens in the end. PLEASE post soon with a new chapter.

your story is one of the most beautiful I ever read. please update the new chapter here too. :D

hurry up and post the chapters!!!!!!!! i cant sleep at night with out finishing this! i love it tht much lol. I literally cant sleep. :P i know pathetic. oh well too bad. lol

hey when will you update next i realy want to read the next chapter i have been checking every day.

this is an awesome fanfic!!! you are a wonderful writer... please post again soon i am dieing for the next chapter to come out :)

i truly love your story please update as sooooooooon as you can. please dont make us wait for to much longer.

great story and keep up on the great work!! Can't wait for more and also can't wait for the mating time!! So - are you going to turn kagome into a youkai when they actually mate and is she ever going to go home into the future??

please hurry and do another chapter i have waited so long to read more so please dont make me wait another 3 weeks or so.

I truly enjoy your story. Thank you for taking the time to share it with so many. Have a wonderful day.

Another GREAT chapter ! I kept looking & waiting for any updates everyday. I'm just anticipating for your next chapter. Keep up the Good Works .

Thank you for another great chapter to your story. I have to say, even though i don't write fan fiction I agree with what you said in your AN"s about others stealing from some one elses work. i personally think that is deplorable. I hope that all is well with you and yours. Till the next chapter, keep up the wonderful work.

I have to say this story just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for the next update. Congrat on your nominations, you deserve them:)

Aw... kawaii chapter! Lolz can't wait for the next one! ^_^

WOW! what a great story the way that you wri 

Once again great chapter!
But outta curiosity, how many chapters are there in total?

Chapters 20-21 was great reading.
Looking forward to more updates.
I knew Sess would win her over sooner than expected. Here's hoping that their mating will go smoothly without interruption.

Keep up nice writing...*hugs and smiles*

yummy ..... please update soon

nooooo D; , im addicted to this story! lol, omg, you're such an amazing write > and this story is by far one of the best stories i have EVER, EVER read D;. thank you for updating :] i hope the next chapter > shessy and kagome :] will be mated, or at least be VERY VERY close too x] 3

-angel-

Yay!!!!!!!!!! That was very hot, and wonderful!! ^-^

The only thing is... tenses... again, please choose either past or present and stick with it.

Lovely job, loved it ^-^ hurray! Keep up the good work

wow you are amazing i love it, it was great update soon, are your days going fine? or are u having a shit week lol cya next chapter

i abso-friggen-lutely love this fic!!!!! the only way that it could get coolier is if you were to update...^.^

Hi Cindy Girl,
okay for chapter 20 I really loved it=). I am curious as to what happens with the up coming army?? Is Inunotashio going to die fighting this battle. I was wondering how this is going to impact Kagome's and Sesshomaru's bond between them and if Kagome is going to be captured or something. I didn't know if Inunotashio was going to die or what and if that would usher in Sesshomaru's rule of the western lands. However that affects Sesshomaru's mother if that did happen because they would be bonded together for eterenity sense they are mates. I know my review is long. I like where the story is going. Please update soon. I love reading this story and please do not pull this story down it has major potential. Just keep writing.
-Anna=)

Yay! Things are getting good! Whoo hoo! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! I saw some grammer errors, but you can't really notice them so it's still fine! ^_^

I have really enjoyed reading your story. It is really good. However, I feel bad for Kagome having to follow what everyone else has wanted her to do. All through the story she has been forced to obey the wishes of others. As intellegent as she is supposed to be, it just doesn't seem right that she can't come up with a way to out think the other characters in the story. It just seems as though everyone else should be giving her some slack and more understanding about how things worked in her world in comparison to how she has to be in theirs. I suppose it confuses me that she is all powerful physically, mentally and with her powers, yet she seems as weak as a child emotionally.

Yay!!!! Kagome Finally Gave In!! I Like the Maids BTW Nice Little Touch There. Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Kagome-Chan

i absolutely love your story. i read then during the day to give myself a smile to last me through the torture of lectures from professerd and teachers. thank you for writing and please continue writing. please dont take this story offline. it is one of my absolute favorite fanfics and i think it is the sweetest. i enjoy the way you have written sesshomaru and kagome. please write more of this enchanting story and i hope your mother and dog get better soon.

OMG! Dont leave me hangin! I love this story! ^.^

go kagome-sama !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pls dont pull the story out, its one of the few stories that have a good plot as well as matching character portrayals along with fighting, funny/tender moments, and maybe even lemons as you continue to update :P ur story is really good and it was rude and wrong of whoever put ur story up w/o ur permission. btw, how long ru going to make this story?

Yay!!! Another chapter, and this one was longer than the others, thank you for that ^-^.
I am sorry to hear about your mother and your dog :( that is not good.
Also, thank you for updating, people are bastards sometimes, and should be shot. Thank you for being the better person and updating ^-^
THANK YOU!
it was wonderful *dances*

i loved this story from the frist chapter and i love it more and more with each chapter you write. please update soon.

hey..im getting worried, are u ok? its been a long time since u update..it never happen b4..

please update. i love this fic. update. i have to find out want happens next. update.

Are you ok?? :(

hey, great story btw, but i'm starting to get worried about u,this is unusually late chap. :( is u ok's?

please, please, please update soon!!! ^-^

please,please,pleas,PLEASE!!! up date soon! i am really anticipating a new chapter, not to mention Shessys' sexy bum!! haha rofl, love the fic! keep up the goodly work!!

Wonderful story. I really can't wait to see how he wins her over. Please update quickly.

plz update~ its been more than one wk already.. T.T i cant wait~
love tis fic alwayz~

please update! ^-^

update. i love this fic. update.

Excellent story. I love the plot and climax's that are thru out the story. I also love how you jump even thru the different points of views with the other characters with each situation. I cant wait for the next chapter to read what happens and see if Kagome gives in to Sesshomaru and see how they come together and attack the evil.

Hello. I was sondering, do you by any chance have an account on a place called FanLib.com? This story is posted there, by a different writer. I believe it was plagerised.

I just thought you should know!!
~fluffy

I like the idea of the story. It's just that only two things bring down the enjoyment factor. But other than that I say 'MORE PLEASE!!!' I just love the way Fluffy-sama and Kagome keep missing each other.

1: The reiteration, I know that they are facts that are import for the story line; but it gets old to be reading the same thing over, and over, and over again. I started to skim when something was repeated.

2: Kagome. She seemed too much like the perfect person. Where are the flaws? It to me makes her fake. And she has to not know something!?

When the guards told her to take the pups away and she didn't fight all of the youkai alone like before. I was happy to see that she was not going to rush into battle just because she could. On many levels that is foolish to go into battle only to lock away any backup that could have helped win the fight. If there where more youkai out there when she fought last (not in chapters 18-19) she would have been killed... 'Fight smart and you will win.' 'Save energy and you'll have a better chance to see another day.' I forgot who said that, but they are good words of wisdom.

But I will love to see the next chapter of this story soon. You just can't help but to get into it.

KICK-ASS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE fight was great ! thanbk so very much for the update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i absolutely love this story! sorry to hear about your internet, yet the chapter was worth the wait!! please keep up the good work!!

OMG! You really need to update! This is a REALLY good story! Kya! I can't wait to read chapter 20! Good job!

i want to finish reading this book..... please write some more chapters
please. oh, you need to add a kid to the end of this book or this many chapters is not worth it.

Well, we should have known that Sess would win the battle. Now to win Kag's heart and soul. Will he be successful?...sure he will *LOL*

Very good battle scenes. This chapter (19) was a very enjoyable read.

Looking forward to other installments soon. Fantastic!

*hugs and smiles*

Naked Sesshomaru? (Shifts Eyes) ....I'm Not Exited 4 This....I Don't Know WHAT Your Talking About....(Laugh) PLEASE Update Soon!!!! Honestly, I Can't Wait 2 C How He Proves His Luv!! Hurrah!

Kagome-Chan

YAY! Another chapter in *dances* I love it :)
Please update soon, and I am sorry to hear about your internet :(
(Again, tenses, please watch :) )

YAY! Another chapter in *dances* I love it :)
Please update soon, and I am sorry to hear about your internet :(
(Again, tenses, please watch :) )

Wow, that last battle between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was intense. I'm so happy that he won the right to dominate her! I hope that the Northern Lord teaches his pup a lesson for acting like a fool! And poor Ayashiko, I bet she was beside herself having to witness both of her pups battle it out huh. So Kagome is going to see a naked Sesshoumaru huh *giggles*. I can't wait. Nice to have you back too! =D

That was an awesome chapter.The long wait was worth it. It was nonstop action.You did a Great job putting the fight scenes.
I'll be waiting for the next update!

please update again soon i wondering what took you so long to update great story keep up the good work

please,please,PLEASE!!!! update really soon!!!!

please oh please write more i really want to know what happeneds next

THANK U SO VERY MUCH 4 THE UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its me again! I just finished reading your latest chapter. It was truly amazing, better than I was hoping for. I can barely contain my excitment for the next chapter. Im sorry for you getting sick and all, and that I am gld you are better. Well, I cant wait till you write the next chapter. I will be waiting!

Ja Ne!

Oh yah and update! I'm sorry to hear that you've been sick too! I'm glad your feeling better! Wow, your fic always seems to have me on the edge of my seat and glued to the monitor. Great job ^^! And I can't wait to see the outcome of the battle.

i love the story i need to know if naraku will be in the story. i love the part about koga thats the first time i have heard about him being so agressive.please update soon and dont leave me hanging for 2 weeks like last time. your best and most loyal reader kiekie290.

Yipee! another chappie.I love your story and good for Kouga.I wish he got fried a little bit more for being arrogant. I'm looking forward to a new update and do take care so you won't get sick again.

omy~ u sick? no wonder the posting of tis story is delayed.. got to take care kay? love ur story the most^^
hope the winner is sess~ haha
thx again for the fic^^
take extra care! 3

Hmmm...this story is so intriguing and I know it has been a while since I've reviewed. I have enjoyed this fic from the start and now the big battle scene for dominace is finally here. Sess has finally declared his love for Kags and I will totally freak out if he does not win her for his mate but then it would not be a S/K fic would it?
I am so looking forward to the next chapter...I hope you upload it soon.

Great job! Hope you are feeling well.

*hugs and smiles*

Please write again soon, :-)

Yay! Another chapter, it was very very good, but poor Kouga... oh well, lol. Great job as usual, and I like your vocab, you don't just repeat the same words over and over. ^-^ Bravo, please post SOON :)

i love this fic. please update really soon i can't wait to find out what happens at the fight thing.

i love this fic. please update really soon i can't wait to find out what happens at the fight thing.

i love this fic. please update really soon i can't wait to find out what happens at the fight thing.

OMG I'll B So0o0 Mad If It's Not Sesshomaru!!!! But Even If It's Not, Some Way or Another They'll B 2gether!! This IS a Sess/Kag Fic! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Kagome-Chan

i love this fic. please update soon.

Please please please update SOON

:) :)

I am patiently awaiting your next chapter, i check everyday to see if had written the next chapter. Your story by far is the best on this site! All I ask is that you pritty please, hurry up and write the next couple chapters. I understand it takes time. And I am willing to wait. I just hope chapter 18 is going to come soon!

i love the fanfic pleeeeeeezzzzzzzeeeee
update soon!!!!!!

please update. i love this fanfic. please update.

Please write another one! ^-^

i have to say, this is the best fic I've read so far! CAN NOT! wait for the next!!!

very good story. very detailed. you're a very good writer. update soon.

awesome ! keep on updating !!!!!!!!!

Please send in the next chapter SOON - pretty please :)

OMG!!!! This Was My Favorite Chapter In This Story So Far!! And I Think It's Only Going 2 Get Better! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

- Kagome-Chan C:

i love your fanfic and i cant wait till next chapter but is naraku going to be in this fanfic or koga? please post soon.

That's great news about the awards that u have been awarded and these 2 stories are really great work!!
Can't wait to know who kagome gets as her mate and i really hope it is sesshoumaru!!

hi cindy :],

wonderful chapter ^^. GOOOOO kagome x]3. i hope her and sesshy can :] be mated3 can't wait till next week > lol thank you for updating :]!
-angel-

Hi! I love your fanfic! Great story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
I have something to say about the last chapter, the part in french that you use is a great idea to put it there but you made a few mistakes. I don't want to criticize it in the least because it is great but if you want to improve the best way possible here is how the sentence should have bin: Que diriez-vous d'une certaine dentelle faite à la main? I am telling it to you because my mother tongue is french and would like to help you there ;). Keep up the good work!!

Yay! Congratulations!! Oh, I loved it. The burlap touch was so awesome. I can't wait to see what the Ladies of the West use all that fancy material for & if they get to show off the creations to the hawk youkai? I'm so excited to see what happens next. Hope to see another update soon! Once again congratulations!

Hello! I just wanted to tell you that you can't say ''main a fait le lacet”. It means like... nothing in French. ''Main a fait'' means approximately, hand has done, and ''lacet'' is what we use to tie shoes!!! For what you mean to be right, you would have to write : ''Que diriez-vous d’une certaine dentelle faite main?” And still, that is not an expression commonly used, but it's the proper way to say it. Please, don't take this as an insult or anything, I just wanted to help, and if there are faults in what I wrote in English, I am sorry.

I like that burlap topic.I think it's funny. I'll be waiting for the next update.Finally,Sesshy can tell her.I hope there's more action on the next chappie.

i love this story. update

please please update.

next chapter i beg of u please

srry bout that wrong name lol same email thx srry bout the mix up

great story mine and love for the moon brother bugged us to read this but with both us being in college its hard to find time to read love how long the chapters are can't wait for the next keep this up email me when you update please at silverfoxhara@yahoo. com thank you keep up the great work

Awesome story!, I've never seen a plot quite like this one and you've done a good job of making it easy to read. watch out for some words though such as angle/ angel and keep in ming the connotations for some words, like withering which insinuates dieing in a way...
Keep up the good work! :)

it's a very interesting story i can't wait to read more and also can't wait till you update!!
Keep up the great work!!

I loved the chapter keep up the work, I can't wait for more!

:)

-FangedBeasty

I Luved the Last Chapter!!!! But What Kind of Gift Would B Kept In a Whorehouse? That's a Little Scetchy!! (Laugh) Please Update Soon! The Next Chapter Is the 1 We've All Been Waiting 4!!!!

Kagome-Chan C:

aww > i really hope sesshy ;[ will be able to get Kagome >.!! lol :] and great chapter cindy :] cant wait till next week
-angel-

Yay, an update. I'm so excited to see if the nobles accept Kagome. I hope they do cuz it will be very interesting to see how the battles progress. Plus I can't wait to see if Sesshou wins how he's going to dominate Kagome. Its going to be very interesting indeed. Can't wait for the next one. Oh and thanks for letting me know you updated. I really appreciate it!

I enjoy your story plus the chapters are long as well so it's worth waiting.I hope the story progress soon bec it's starting to drag.

Yay! Another chapter gone, good lord I want to know what happens!! But the suspense is awsome, the fact that there is a storyline to this, and it is complicated... Yay! ^-^ Keep up the good work, and keep writing (just remember the tenses, you keep getting better ^-^) Bravo! :)

i don't know how many time my twin brother bugged me to read this i am glad i did can't wait for the next chapter great job keep it up.ur a good writer

Great development of plot

Can't wait till next update

i'm a little confizzled so could you help me out? OK i know sesshomaru is a twin tail and that Kagome is something else...but what is she exactly? a tenshi? youkai? and if she is somehow a human that has the wings does that mean she and sesshomaru will have hanyous? i'm sorry but i just got a little confused

Advi, I've enjoyed you addition to this wonderful tale. Thank you.
Very exciting addition and I particularly loved the siphon aspect between Sess and Papa. Poor Sesshoumaru; he is overwhelm was the desire of mating, but now he is seeing Kagome for who she really is.
ja ne and looking forward to more.

I LOVE This Story and the Last Chapter Was Really Good. But the Story Is Going SO SLOW!!!! They Keep Fighting Demons and Kagome Keeps Getting Hurt....and That's It. I Like It But I Just Thought I'd Let U Know It's Getting Kinda Boring 2 Read. Anyway, Please Update Soon!!

Kagome-Chan C:

i love this fic. i must know what happens next. update.

i absolutly love your stories :]. especially this one right now. it makes me fustrated since Sesshy can't be with Kagome yet :[. but thats okay, within time, right? lol i hope you post soon, i really love your writing :] and your imagination too :] thank you so much for posting!

-angel

another amazing chapter.I always check if u updated.Will be looking forward to your next chapter.

It has been a long time since I read a story that has actually kept my attention for over two chapter . congradulation I hope that you update soon

but but but i cant read the next chapter untill you post it sob sob cya love it

Ah its so cute, it about time mayb now inu will stop fighting the inevitable and help them be together after the meeting of the lords!!!

More Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

Chaos

I also check... several times a day to see if you've updated ^-^
(To reiterate someone elses point)

Brilliant!
And thank you very much for the tense changes, I found it much easier to read.
Absolutely brilliant, please write again as soon as you can, I am enamored with your story ^-^

I love this fic! but when are u goin to update????!!

I love this fic! but when are u goin to update????!!

Please update sooner.

AMAZING Chapter!!!! I Wonder Y Kagome Is Afraid of a Thunderstorm? Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

XOXO,

Kagome-Chan C:

Great Job Cindygirl! I am enjoying it. Akurei is a wonderful addition and she is very interesting. Their battle was wonderful and with great details.
I am liking the way you are tying in Kagome's behavior due to her childhood relationship with her father. It is very intriguing. I am understanding her internal need to be loved for who she is as oppose of what she can do. Looking forward to more.

i absolutely love this story, i check it every day to see if you have updated. When you do it's the highlight of the week! keep up the good work!

i absolutely love this story, i check it every day to see if you have updated. When you do it's the highlight of the week! keep up the good work!

love it

I love it! Please write another chapter soon! ^-^ And you actually are giving them enough time to get to know each other, unlike some stories which they rush far to much. The only 2 major things to work on are your tenses, make sure that you stay in the past (you have gotten better as the chapters progressed) and don't flip to the future. Also, spelling, you spell the word correctly, but it is the wrong word, for example when you wanted to say "angel" you put "angle" ^-^ Great job though! Keep up the good work. Have an awsome day ^-^

Wow, I really like your fic. Its so awesome. When Inu-papa got hurt and Kags made the anitode for him I almost balled my eyes out. I think your doing an awesome job and I hope to see another chapter soon. Do you notify readers of updates? If so I was wondering if you could notify me w/an email. My email address is lllotrfan@yahoo.com. Thanks a bunch =^_^=

I absolutely love your story. Love the scene where Kagome let her grief out about her father. I love the reaction of Inu-papa! I love the caring nature of the mother. You really got my emotions going. Thank you for your talents. Peace!

Another fantastic chapter. I can't believe that Sesshomaru scent marked Kagome while she was sleeping, he's such a dirty dog. I can't wait until the next chapter. Update again soon :]

nice chap! love tis fanfic the most! hope can juz read ur whole fic in a gulped!! lolx
update soon again! of cuz wif extra chap >

I really love the story and I hope you update really really soon. Can't wait

update. like i say every time i review " i love this fic". i cant wait to read what happens next. what will happen to kagome. update.

Poor Kagome!!!! I Feel So Bad 4 Her!! I Can't Believe Her Father Did Such Things! Please Update Soon!!!! I Can't WAIT 4 Sesshomaru 2 B a Hentai!!

C U Soon!

Kagome-Chan C:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY dat was awsome keep up the good work dis has made me happy and the only thing that will make me more happy is another two chaps in one week ;D i promise to reveiw more if u do( if i remeber)

i thats so sad what kagome went though when she was younger. i cant wait to read what happenes next. update

I don;t know what happens to Kagome's father but i do hope that inu gets a chance and does kill him... I would have kill him a long time ago if i were kagome...
Any ways great chapter, it was nice and long i loved it.

More plzzz!!!

Chaos

hey please if you can update sooner than next week, oh and if u want tones more reviews allow non ff.net accounts people to leave reviews oh i love it its great.

Okay I will review, I love this story please update sooon!!!! I love your twist the the plot and characters, yet still staying true to the characters. Please update sooon!!

THANK U SO MUCH 4 UPLOADING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WAS SO HAPPY BECAUSE I WAS AT CHAPTER 12 AND WHEN IT SAID NEXT CHAPTER , I JUST WENT CRAZY !!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP UPLOADING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U DO AN AMAZING JOB ON THIS STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man i Love ur story hope u update soon i really wanna now what happens next

Another great chapter. I felt so bad for Kagome when she talked about her past, but I'm glad that she'll start to heal from the abusive relationship with her father. Sesshomaru seemed really angry at Kagome for erasing his scent and not noticing him. I wonder how he'll confront her and deal with her later on. I'm so curious to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work and update again soon :]

I love ur story and have been following it religiously please update soon.

I love your story & i am please to say u have done outstanding job of writing this fanfiction story. I can't wait till you update your next chapter soon. Please hurry i'm dying to know what happen next.

Oh My Goodness!!!! Just WHAT Will Every1 Say When They Find Out Kagome's From the Future?!?! THAT Will B Quite a Shocker!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!

See You Soon!!!!

Kagome-Chan C:

oh my god this fic is so good . it is the best one i have read. please update soon.

update. i love this fanfic. i most know what happens next. update.

Please update soon :)

OMG, Gr8 Chapter!!!! I LOVED the Otousan Part!! That Is So0o0 Cute! Kagome Really Does Need a Father!!!! C: Please Update As Soon As U Can!! Thanks!

Kagome-Chan C:

i love this fic. update

I'm liking where the story is going, and I'm happy that you're keeping Kagome's character steady and strong. In some fics i've read, i can't help but feel that Kagome's character sometimes dramatically changes and I'm so disappointed. I'm like: 'Now why'd you go and do that??'

I hope you make Sesshomaru work hard to get her - there's no fun if there's no pain, and no gain ;) lol

I hope Kagome's battles are awesome. Loving ur story

Keep up the fan-tabulous work.

yay.cool story.I hope to read more of this story soon

lol ahun dont have wings XD
poor kags almost died *sniffle* sesshy needs to get his girl ^-^

Luna lover

update. i love this fanfic. this has to be the best one i have ever read. and i have been reading them at the age of 12 and i am now 19. update

update soon could you please send me an e-mail whenever you update so that i can read it as soon as it comes out it would be greatly appresheated oh great story so far glad sess's beast is showing that it is not just a lust driven selfish who cares if anyone gets hurt as long as i get what i want, an your protraying sesshomaru wounderfully love his beast keep up the great work e-mail is sara.k.robertson@bigpond.com

thanx

Gah!!!! InuTashio Needs 2 Like, Let His Children GO Already!! What Is This Like....the 4th Time Something's Happened 2 1 of Them b.c He Won't Let Them Be? Grrrr....Well Anyway, Please Update As Soon As U Can! And, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!! The Year of the Rat!! Horray! I Wonder What I'll Wish 4 On the First Sunrise....Well, About 4 Hours 2 Go B4 Then. (Sigh) I'm SO TIRED!!!! Anyway, See U Soon!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

my brother happened upon this site and read your story he recomened i read this cause lord knows i love to read but i am very picking i fell in love with this story very well done can't wait for the next chapter mecheiri

i love this fanfic. update please. and soon

HAPPY NEWYEARS!!! I hope the newyears will bring alot of new and longer chaps for this fic

OMFG!!! your fanfic was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! i think it was the best one i have ever read in my entire life i mean im 14 and i started reading fanfictions when i was 7
, but omg! this was just the most exciting story ever! it had me jumping up and down in my seat in anticipation, and i am so excited to read the rest of the story after you write it!! i cant wait until you post more of your awsome story!!!

-- inuyasha_obsessed_13 ( a.k.a. Kaitlyn)

hey i was wondering if you could send me an e-mail whenever you update Her Destiny? my e-mail adress is sara.k.robertson@bigpond.com

thanks

I enjoyed this chapter very much. Please update soon.

Happy Holidays!

*hugs and smiles*

You do know that Ah-Un doesn't have wings, don't you?

well,I can't blame Kagome.I'll be totally furious with all those restrictions & them choosing who to marry/mate.I'll be looking forward to your next update. Update! update!

Would you mind sending me e-mails whenever you update Her Destiny? My e-mail is tempest UNDERSCORE onhs AT yahoo DOT com. Thanks so much. Happy Holidays!

update upate update

update update.i love this fic.

YAY!!!! They Finally Get 2 Talk Ahain!! Gr8 Chapter! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

love your story can't wait for the next chap

Hey!
I know you probley dont remember me.
But me and my mom read your Fic, Destined for me. And always reviewed. Im surprised you put another fic up. Im going to have to let me mom know!
But anywho!
Keep up the good work.
Cant wait till the next chapie!
Amber

Wow!!
Arrgh you stopped! I kept reading and getting so excited to see the next twist. I really like how you are making the two interact. Are the chapters already written out then? Ah you evil torturer! But I think I adore you.
Seriously I love Sessho's cute little inu type obsessive behavior.

Omg please post more. I can't wait to see wat happens next. I love the plot

Love the plot and the whole fic in general. Keep up the awesome work

Very good battle! I really enjoyed the enemy being shadow youkais. I'm looking forward to finding out why the inu youkai believes that Inutashio isn't the rightful owner of the west.

It was wonderful! Sesshoumaru and Kagome battle of power was enjoyable to say the least. I love the whole relationship between Kag and Ayashiko.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

hi i thought i had updated yet when looking through your view reviews so i hadent oups... i love the story, i is brillianent, update as soon as possible k, oh and just an idea insteed of making his beast just a lust fulled creature, have it be sesshomarus most emostional side, so it trys to make up with kagome, even tho the rashional part of sess knows he shouldnt and trys to stop his beast having any control over their body as he beleives she needs to see a calm, stronge male not an emostionally week one so in other words a consterpated one in stead hehe...cya

I can't wait until the next chapter, this is an awesome fic.

chaos

oh plz hurry and do another story i really wanna know what happens

You're too good!

Excellent chapter 6 + 7

and you saying u would finish the story makes me sooo happy!!!!!

Arigatou gozimasu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

These Last 2 Chapters Were AMAZING!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

Loving your story and look forwards to the updates. I hope Sess's parents do not get killed off in this story because I just the mom & pop. It would be so sad to read of their death *hint, hint* *winks*

Well written *hugs and smiles*

THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Nice story, but how was it that Kagome was considered a polite and delightful child but yet had a nasty temper?

Update soon!

poor kagome. stupid servants. they are just jealous she could fry them into oblivion if she wanted. Plus she has sesshoumaru's interest. I hope they feel bad for being mean to her soon. Update soon plz.

okay so the tied, but hey sesshoumaru is beginning to like her. This is getting really good. You are also really good at describing fight scenes. keep up the good work

Inuyaha's in big troule now. I hope Kagome kicks sesshoumaru's butt if they fight. Good chapter

Ayashiko got mad at Inutaisho. That was pretty funny. Do not mess with an angry mommy.

poor kagome. i hope that she realizes that they do not want to keep her in the dungeon place.

i enjoyed this chapter as well. You are a really good writer

this is an awsome fanfic. I love your writing too.

i love this story. i hope you update it soon.

OOOOooo....Yes! The long waited encounter has finally occured!! I REALLY look forward to the next chapter so please update soon!!!

Please update!!

I love your story so far its really, just, well, wonderful. Your truely amazing.

Oh It was so funny what Inuyasha did to his brother.I can't wait until you update.plz make it soon.

omg!! i still luv it!! im so glad that kagome accepts ayashiko as her mum even though it was a given...but dont change anything!! keep it goin! i wanna know what happens!! and i wanna know how inu no taisho and ayashiko will get sesshomaru and kagome together!! update soon!!

dat was so awsome please have it updated sooner den last time

wow! that was a cliffhanger and very exciting.Pls update soon.

update!!
me like!!
update!!!

update!!
me like!!
update!!!

Please write more this is a wonderful story.i truely can't wait for more!!

LOL

Plz plz plz plz update SOON!! I can't wait!

AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! NOOO, you cut it off right when the met! Your evil! ;) lol jk I was soo happy when you posted again I can't wait til your next one chapter! Inuyasha is so cute playing tricks on his big brother, can't wait to see how he gets himself out of that one!

awsome fan fic it was great and I enjoyed reading it. I hope oyu update ASAP! Can;t wait for the next chapter. great story though...keep it up and i luv the long chapters^_^

please write the next chapter.......................I beg of you(gets down on hands and knees) PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH yea I loved this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow i love this story u got to let me read more lol normally i dont review nomore but i started reading urs n i had too so yupz plz continue n its really a good story n i also love the mother thing kindna make u feel da same emotion look at me writin too much plz update!!!thx!!!ohh n da email adress is non existant!!!

Hi!!!! I REALLY Luved This Chapter!! I Just Wanted 2 Tell U Tho That the Word 'Youkai' Is Singular AND Plural Like If U Have 1 Demon It Would Be "I Have 1 Youkai" But If U Had 2 Demons It Would Be "I Have 2 Youkai" Get It? The Word Is the Same In Singular and Plural Form. I Hope That Made Sense! (Laugh) Please Update Soon!!!! I Cannot WAIT 4 the Next Chapter!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

this is a great story. I can't wiat to see what happens next. I hope that you update soon. Untill Keep up the great work.

this story is awesome. i hope you update soon. can't wait to read what happens next. oh and if you have an update list please add me.

I love this story!

This story is so totally gr8 please
update soon and i cant wait to
see whats instor for Kagome and
Sesshomaru.

this story so rocks ^__^

Yosh! What a great story!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Chapter 4 was great! I actually was hoping Kagome would pull a few intelligent strings without her miko powers - so that was gr8.

Oh and the whole jealousy thing wiv Sessho and Kags- not that's something i wanna look forward to.

i can't wait until u update i wonder what the prank will be when inuyasha does pull the prank please please, plese update the story soon

i can't wait until u update i wonder what the prank will be when inuyasha does pull the prank please please, plese update the story soon

Very good stuff here i like it a lot and can not wait fo the next chapter.
I think its awsome hoe you put a preview in for the next chapter!!!
Hope to see a new one soon.

Chaos

That's a very exciting chapter.Can't wait for the next one.

Very captivating story! Can't wait to see sparks flying when Sess and Kag meet for the first time! Good work!

what happens next? this story rocks

You are doing 1 hell of a job on this story.I just loved the part were InuTaisho took Kagome. I just hope you update soon

I would like to offer some constructive criticism. You constantly use the sentence "He/she understood the words he/she was saying." You use it way too much when it's not even needed and use it in the wrong context. If it was a long explanation on something with clear detail, you don't have to use those words. And unless there was a misinterpretation or a difficult time in comprehending something, the "understood" part is implied, so there is no need to say it. Also, if you intend to write a situation from more than one person's point of view, you should do more than rewriting the same sentence and simply changing the gender to fit into the person's POV that you're writing about. While you do have potential in your story-telling, you do need a little more work in expanding your grammar and sentence skills. If you don't have a beta, I suggest in getting one to help you improve. If you have one, maybe you should look for someone else. While it's good to have someone to bounce ideas off of, if they're not helping you to improve, then it's a detrement to yourself. Of course, that all doesn't matter if you really don't care about writing better and only want to tell a story. It's up to you. So, good luck either way.

I hope you do have some nice twists and turns for this story, because it sort of sounds like your other multi-chapter Sess/Kag story. Kagome making herself stronger and being 'overly' powerful in need of an equally powerful mate. And Sesshomaru searching for a powerful female as powerful as him to be his mate. Does that sound familiar like your other one? If so, then I guess there will be similar misunderstangs between them when there shouldn't be and after 'useless' suffering, they live happiliy ever after. I'm only saying this so you don't fall into a pattern of using the same plot over and over, and only changing the setting of the story to make it seem like it's original (other authors have done this, except they use the worst portrayal of characters over and over, as in unkind, weak, and cruel; so luckily you're not in 'that' group). This was just a suggestion, maybe more of an opinion, to help you improve. Take it either way, or just ignore it.

I love your story so far - i like the fact that finally someone has made Kagome strong and powerful that would actually grab Sesshomaru's attention.

After all, power is definitely something Sesshomaru is interested. Keep up the fan-tabulous work.

I like this story because it gives insight to another side of Sess and Kagome, also, I like how you are portraying Inutashio and his mate.
I like how you made Kags as strong, powerful and smart. I get tired of reading stories portraying her as weak, clumsy, and slow witted at times. This is different.
Could the other pup be InuYasha by any chance? If so, this makes the story more interesting.
Excellent job and well written. I will be looking forward to your updates...if you have an update mailing list, I would like to be placed on this list. Thanks.

*hugs and smiles*

that was good please update soon

what happens next

Thats SO sad!!!!!! poor kagome i understand the reason behind why he put her there but........POOR KAOGME!!!!!!!!!!!! i feel so sorry for her. PLEASE UPDATE SO I REALLY REALLY want to see what happends.

please just update soon keep those chapters coming

what happens?

your story caught my interest and can't wait for next update.

can't wait until u update the chapter so please please please update tada! ! !

please just hurry up and update

i beg you. write more to this story very soon.. i have to know what happens. this is a great fic.

wow keep up the good work update soon

WOW! I loved it! Great chapter. I've never read something like this before. Not to mention Inutaisho is int his story and he has a part. Great job! Update soon. Is Sesshoumaru popping out anytime soon?!! I hope so. I can't wait to read about that hunk of meat :) Lol. Great beginning. I certainly enjoyed it alot. I hope you really update soon and make my unpacient mind happy. Sorry for any spelling words. I'm typing as fast as I can and I'M OFF TO WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Claudia

please update soon!!!

i like the story you have here ....please write more and fast.

i love this story please update soon

WOW!!! Awsome!! (^o^)
This story is well organized and has great description. How you put it all together was amazing! After the first paragraph I was hooked! I really look foward to the next chapter of this intresting and beautifly made story
'Her Destiny'
Keep up the good Work!!

i hope u udate soon so luv the chapter it was long and i enjoyed very much so please please please update the story soon so just keep going

i hope u udate soon so luv the chapter it was long and i enjoyed very much so please please please update the story soon so just keep going