lol I LOVE Your Story!!!! But YEESH!! The Spelling and Grammer! PLEASE Try to Work On That!!!! But AMG Its So0o0 Funny!! I LUV Mejaad's Jokes! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!
Ai Shi Teru,
Kagome-Chan ♪
skikon goddess- Fri 05 Oct 2007
just lovely now i really cant wait to see the other chapters
sharilynn- Fri 05 Oct 2007
lol this is really funny please keep up the good work i like this series lol .
Sharilynn
i love it!
i love it!
chaos_queen77- Wed 03 Oct 2007
i very must enjoy this story and con not wait to see how it turns out in the end. The next chapter should be good and i can't wait until love finally knocks the two of them over the head.
chaos
summer- Tue 02 Oct 2007
Great Story! Keep updating!
amanda- Tue 02 Oct 2007
you are doing really good so far keep up the good work!!!
sharilynn- Tue 02 Oct 2007
olo i liked that last part,now its stuck in my head please keep writing i think your really good.
Sharilynn
I'm still liking the story, but I think it would have made more sense to drawl out the change in feelings for both Kagome and Sesshomaru. I think your method is good but maybe you could have added a bit more substance it was really fast. And frankly you can completely ignore how people rate you all together. I find that part of this site completely useless, it's never done right. I've seen really and when I say really I mean really bad stories rated high and good stories that have a lot of potential rated low. And what really cracks me up is when I see a person that moved to a new screen name and moved over their old stories and didn't change a single thing about it but their rating is completely different. Rates are pointless if they won't tell you what they think is wrong then their opinions don't matter. You could really do something with this story, but you should slow it down and proof read, that would also help a lot but I know how that goes when I write I know what I want my story to say so I skim it and not pay to much attention to it. So if you want a beta I'd be happy to help just let me know.
Geez this was long for me and I hardly ever even leave comments. = )
Aimee- Tue 02 Oct 2007
it's a good idea but she caved entirely to easily
sesshysbabygurl- Tue 02 Oct 2007
really like this story keep up the good work. hope to see a new chap soon.
Trice- Tue 02 Oct 2007
I am really enjoying reading your story. I waa wondering if you got your idea from the movie Beast Master? I know your rating is low but do not let that discourage you from writing. I look forward to reading more of your story.
Anonymous- Tue 02 Oct 2007
Very nice start.
Please update ASAP
I really like where this is going so far, it's different and the plot seems to have something to it. I'm really looking forward to seeing what's coming in the next chapters.
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