| love the way the story is going keep it up if you can make another or atleast email me when you make a new either chapter or story thanks bye for now
Ana- Wed 24 Oct 2007
| more defined spaces between paragraphs and thoughts, but overall, its really good! I do hope you intend to update soon! I'll be a lookin, aight? ja ne!!
elvira- Fri 21 Sep 2007
| ah..the ways of brotherhood hatered....lol...more chapters please!!
elvira- Fri 21 Sep 2007
| ah..the ways of brotherhood hatered....lol...more chapters please!!
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