I liked this very much. Wonderful creativity. Though I did find the ending a little rushed and confusing - I wasn't sure if I had missed a section or not. The part with Sesshoumaru "dying" and reclaiming the western lands and whatnot. But I re-read it in a "different tone" if you will, and found that I understood it better. This is one of the best written/easy flowing stories I've read in a long time, and I like how you separated all the scenes. Very well thought out.

That was hot h-o-t hot! ^_^

*jaw drop* I'm (almost xD) lost for words!
Such a great story. I envy your talent. Writing it so fluently. Gentle but strong at the same time with depth and humor.
I was a litte confused by the love scene but it didn't disrupt the flow of what imo is a great story.
Thank you for sharing ^_^

I HATE you. HATE you I say! That was... beautiful. I can't manage myself to say anything. You've left me in tears and deep in thought, I certainly hate being in this position, especially since I can't do anything about it, thus here I am, reviewing for no apparent reason than to say I'm utterly inconsolable. I don't even know why I'm sad or whatever... it's just something about Sesshoumaru, it's... ugh... sorry I'm confused. I hate seeing anyone so sad... so lonely... and your story striked my heart. Especially some things lacked explanations... it just drove me into a thicker haze... damnably confused and... sad. It was just so sad and beautiful.. thank you for writing it, I never cried with such emotion before and it's refreshing and again I say, confusing.

Very nicely done. But I am still curious as to why she was in the office of an Ob/Gyn.

GREAT AMAZING and all those other descriptive words. Really, it was wonderful!

...WOW ...WOW...OMG
this is awsome AWSOME
this fic is SO great
this is amazing
...WOW lol
no seriously
awsome
awsome

BEST DAMN STORY EVER! i love it. i love it. i adore it. damn awesome job!

Wow.. Thats like the perfect story.. The Rin thing scared me a bit though..

I absolutely loved this story!

Amazing. Wonderful. Beautiful. Stunning! Need I use more words that simply mean the same thing? This has to be one of the best fics I have ever read, and to top it of it's a one-shot! I never read one-shots, and I absolutely loved this one. It is perhaps the only one I have found that seems finished. BRAVO! Absolutely lovely!
M

LOVED IT. Too cute, the whole Rin thing was a bit strange but it all worked. This story was a nice change from all the others, something different. Again, LOVED IT

A beautiful story. For a moment, I was terrified I would not be recieving a happy ending...and that would NOT do! Despite the beauty of a story, I can be left unsatisfactory if I recieve no solid closure. But yours was just as good as the rest of this beautiful piece ^_^

I liked the reality of the two having to find their own ways to love one another..it just seemed to fit their characters.

I especially loved the backstory for the raven and the swan. Did you write that yourself? A poetic little thing, it is :) If you wrote it: A nice job! If not? Damn! How did you write this story to match that with absolute perfection? ^_^ You must be good at interrpreting little pieces, and have a great mind to work out a story of it yourself.

Anywho! I found you through FF.Net, naturally. So if you ever see this name reviewing another one of your stories...yes, thats me ;)

~ Tinuel ~

Well done! I couldn't help but giggle at Inuyasha as Cupid...heee! Well written, believable characterizations (even though Sesshoumaru as an OBGYN made me pause at first), and although I'm not a Sess/Kag shipper I thoroughly enjoyed this. Beautifully integrated with the original work. Thanks for writing for us!
iPoe

A warm a wonderful story.

I loved it! :D So much emotions. I recommended it if it's not yet done.

Wow!! great story! i really enjoyed it.

that was a very good story. i've never read a better one paged story in my life. i liked so much that read it in one night.you are very talented writers and i wish you the best with anything else you end up wanting to write. yours truley, squirrelly squirrell.

Beautiful fic, with a patient and loving Sesshoumaru for Kagome, and with sense a humor. The love scenes were written with taste. I hope you write more about S&K.

Wow, this was a good story. Some parts of it were very funny, like Sesshoumaru wearing shorts had me laughing for seveal minutes. And the death of Shippou before he was brought back was sad, but I liked how when Rin died she became Inuyasha's lover.

And yes, I do have a weakness for Sesshoumaru-in modern-times fiction.

Again nice story!

I loved the way you wrote this! I love it period. Very good story line and very well written. I hope to see more stories from you in the future.

I absolutely loved this fan fic. :) I also like your "embracing ice" fic :D. i just read this one w/o looking at the author and after finishing it was amazing, then surprise surprise its you :). Keep going on!

this story has good potential, but there are too many loose ends and events that dont have proper transitions from one to the next. there was just too much left unsaid to really get the full picture.

*sniff* that was beautiful. I started to tear up, when Rin came for Sesshomaru. This story is just perfect!

awesome job. :o)

That was so beautiful. *sniffle* I'm going to read it again and again. So well written, timed wonderfully. You did a great job with the build up and the end. It is difficult to please me with work that is not action oriented, but you managed to do it. ^_^ Snow

That was art.

Brava!
Magnificant!
Wonderful!

I simply loved it! There are no other words to describe the story. It was a well-rounded and perfectly sculpted sotry of romance and drama and devotion.

Brava!

~Sandreline

Mmmm....lovely as usual. :) Well written and kept me hooked 'til the end. And I'm liking the happy ending.
Look forward to reading more from you!

Excellent! I've even saved this one on my PC :) 'nuff said

Wow, this took me 25 min to read! I love long one-shots!

Loved the whole Rin/Inuyasha depiction. It was nicely done, and also answered the question on whether or not Kagome and Sesshoumaru would have a longer time together than her limited mortality.

Tsuki and Shippo, both being the cause of Kagome and Sesshoumaru's heartache was nicely done also. Both had proven to have a soft spot fro children, so it is completely believable that he would have been devestated by one being killed while under his protection. Kagome, well, she's just a soft spot all over. :-)

The lemon was sensual, very tasteful and just...I don't know. The emotion they had yet to show one another was evident in each caress.

As for the interactions, I have to say that it made this story. The intimacy of sharing your life with another person as closely as they did...I knew they were in love before they did. LOL

Love it. Thanks for a great read!

That. Was. AWESOME!

Some things I found extremely funny in your story, I have tears in my eyes:
*"she said, still wondering if hamburger was a codename for butchered stag."
*"Sesshoumaru wouldn’t be a doctor. He’d be some sort of secret, undercover assassin for the government"
*“Do you remember the day we killed Naraku? You tripped on a rock.”
*"Who drinks blood with ice cream? What kind of sick, twisted mind came up with-?"
*“Well, I don’t know many youkai who work with babies.”
*I can’t cancel on pregnant women
*The whole wearing shorts situation.
*The bus questions.
I think I'll stop there because that's just from the beginning. Just know it is really really good. Awesome.

You were able to expand and add such depth and relate a four sentence story to Kagome and Sesshomaru so well. It's a nice and surprising character development that you added to Sesshomaru, making him trying to blend in and become human. I really enjoyed this one-shot and I hope to see other one-shots be written!

Mir

wow... I don't even know what to say besides I love it! Such profound story telling, and characterizations, you hit them head on! Absolutely wonderful!!!!

A worthy read. Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru's endless search for redemption over the death of one of Rin's descendant's tugs at the heart strings. His method, denying his nature and attempting to become the perfect non-human human, is an unusual (if not unique) plot. Kudos for a very well done story.

Wow. Another awesome story, way to go! So well done...I enjoyed it immensely. ^-^

Hi!

Your story was very good! I am tempted to read it again. :)

-Alyssa

OMG!!!! THAT ROCKED!!!!!!! That was sooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! That is so going on my favorites list!!! But ya know, it was a bit much to take in in one sitting. Might I suggest dividing it up into a multi-chapter story? Its certainly long enough to get a few different chappies out of.
It was amazingly well written, and I loved how you incorporated the fable into it. You're an awesome author, and your other fics rule too!!!! Amazing!!!!! I love Peanut Butter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW!!!

Amazing job!!! This story is absolutely the best, not only is it super well written: the characters are all in character, and everything falls into place at just the right moment, but it actually gave me a sevear craving for peanut butter!!! There is an empty jar of it sitting next to me now!

Keep up the good work, I cant wait to see what you come out with next. Loved how Sesshoumaru was an OB/GYN. NEver would have thought of that in a hundred million years. One question thouggh, why did Kagome go see him? I never found out. Fantastic job through and through.

~Taiyoukai's Lady

Now this...I simply loved so much! You're creative as always dear - and I can't find any problem with how you portrayed Sesshoumaru. Even if he wasn't his usual self, even if he was only human. It was a beautiful and long fic.

How can you even write so long without keeling over. XD

Loved: “I can’t believe she let you kiss her.” Inuyasha gagged. “The world is going to hell.” It was simply priceless.

And: “Don’t worry,” she giggled. “It’s a nonliving substance, so it can’t be considered infidelity and I know better than to make you choose between me and peanut butter. I don’t think my ego could take the blow.

These were simply the best! ^^;;

So I am officially sending in my review.

I love it!

You've already heard the rest of my gushing :)