Reviews for More Than Me by Music Junkie

al- Sat 05 Jan 2008
Just chill.
And when you find time to write,then write.
Until then,I'd think about putting this story on hold..make it an official hold,and study.
Your education is more important than this story as of now.
This can wait.Your learning cannot.
So,take care of yourself,and good luck with your senior year.

Elli Mac08- Sat 05 Jan 2008
Hey, I know how you feel I'm a senior too. and ihave alot of stuff my mine to especially appling to different college. But hey you just do what you got to do. To make your story great, which by the way your story remine me of Ugly Betty. Hehe I just love that show.
Antway I wish you good luck your graduation and your story~

kuma- Fri 04 Jan 2008
finally a story where kago is chunky there needs to more writers out there willing to chunkify there characters good job

sysclp- Fri 04 Jan 2008
The first chapter was quite enjoyable and showed a lot of promise, but you need to make your updates longer. Perhaps save the short bits up and combine them into one longer chapter? It is just very annoying to look at an update and only find a few lines that just leave you wanting more.

ginrei- Fri 04 Jan 2008
School is very important. If people don't understand that then t('.' t) them. Your story is funny. It's a great change from all the seriousness there normally is. I don't mind waiting for more chapters. So take your time.

ME- Thu 06 Sep 2007
lol I know exactly what you're going through!!! although for us it was called senior project, but take your time!!!!! lol graduating is more important than the story!

mistress butcher- Thu 06 Sep 2007
would you mind making your updates more than one-fourth of a page. You see this is a great story, but your doing it a sever injustice by hacking it up the way you are.

shikon goddess- Thu 30 Aug 2007
nice story im really looking foward to the other chapters

Leah- Thu 30 Aug 2007
Hello! I would just like to tell you how much I'm enjoying reading your story. I like the plot, big girl against herself and against the judgements of society. Please don't stop this one as I can see many good things for a plot like this. Hope you continue!

mikiwashere- Tue 28 Aug 2007
Love the writing style, voice, storyline-it's new and original. ;) Please continue, your doing an awesome job!

Lady Symoné- Mon 27 Aug 2007
HAHAHAHA!!! I nearly fell out of my chair laughing so hard! I LOVED the 'preacher' scene! Being african american myself, I found it particularily hilarious! WHOO! Keep up the awesome work, and update soon!

gen'ei honsho- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Short but sweet. Can't wait for Sesshomaru to meet our girl. He's obviously bored and not happy with his current love interest.

Elli Mac08- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Wow! That was off the chang! PLEASE UPDATE for your faithful READER! yOUR GREATNESS^_^

gen'ei honsho- Sun 26 Aug 2007
I can't wait for Kagome to kick Kagura's boney little ass. I can really relate to your version of Kagome at least she's taller than I am--try being 5'4" and a size 26. Anyway, Can't wait to see what happens next.

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