Amanda- Mon 08 Oct 2007
Wow, just wow. Its so silly. I love it! xD tehehe

mariel- Fri 14 Sep 2007
hahahahhaha!thats cute!hurry and update!

Nydanna- Fri 14 Sep 2007
I love this story! I think it's absolutely adorable how Kagome and Sess act together. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more.

Lilith- Fri 14 Sep 2007
I’m really enjoying this story you’ve written. It’s quite an attention grabber with its humor and its character inactions. The second chapter was pretty humorous but at times especially towards the end Kagome’s childish “antics” seems a little excessive and overboard. But the overall development and genre to the story is quite well written and structured. I’m truly enjoying it.

demonlordlover- Fri 14 Sep 2007
This is a fantastic read. The humor is rip-roaring and the situations endearing.

The scene in the second chapter with Naraku wrangling an admission from Sesshoumaru reminded me of a Bug's Bunny/Daffy Duck moment. LOL


Hime17- Sat 18 Aug 2007
^_^Love this stoy please continue.♥

Hime17- Sat 18 Aug 2007
^_^Love this stoy please continue.♥

Physical Graffiti- Sat 18 Aug 2007
That was one of the greatest fanfics I read in a long time! The freshness! T'was like daily stocked produce!

sakuyo's smile- Thu 16 Aug 2007
ah the sarcasm and witty banter! what would the world be without it? give me more!!!

Maru-KunKun- Thu 16 Aug 2007
Oh I love this !!! XDD I had so much fun reading it. Update soon please !!! XDDD Ja-ne.

SesshysChic23- Wed 15 Aug 2007
This is a really cute fic, Sess is a little OOC like you said but I think it actually fits well with the way your fic is going. On another note, I have a job at a supermarket, and for the most part you've got the guidelines down. Umm...the only thing I can think of is that employees have to clock out before and after every shift; and depending on when you work like if you close you have to speak to the manager every night before you leave. The only thing that wasn't quite realistic was the Sess putting Kagome on his shoulders 'cause if a manager caught anyone doing that instead of using a ladder, we would get in a LOT of trouble. All in all great chapter and I can't wait for you to update. ^_^

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Wed 15 Aug 2007
Awwh! This is so cute, and fluffy, and funny, and flirt and...awwh!

It's just one of those stories that makes you smile the entire time! Great job on the first chapter. I think you have a really good idea going on!

So, is Tendo someone we all know or is he a made up character? I love it, though! You seemed to have picked the cliche of bosses and that tickled me pink.

And Sesshoumaru is so flirty! I completely love it! I can just imagine a Sesshoumaru/ Kagome transformer. Oh, would that be weird.

Any way, please update again when you can and keep up the awesome work!

Laterz!

--Ashley

crazygirlforlife- Wed 15 Aug 2007
i have a job at a supermarket and i will be helpful and give a few guidelines for the job. we are not really supposed to talk to a fellow employee while doing the job. we are supposed to the customer but we never follow the rules. well anyways this is a good story...update soon please!!!

Priestess Skye- Wed 15 Aug 2007
I just had to read this as soon as i saw it because dun dun dah, I've worked part time in a supermarket for 10 years! I'm actually a deli clerk in one of the major Canadian grocery store chains, so I can certainly help. While i've never wanted to write a fic based on my grocery store experience, I've certainly wanted to write an original story on it because man, the things i've seen could be used in a best seller!

So, some guidelines. I love Tendo btw, i've had a store manager like that. Okay, you're doing good with the disposable gloves, as food safety is a must. without food safety, the store would close. So good call.

I'm trying to think of whatelse because there is so much. I don't even think of it anymore, I just follow through.

You can always e-mail me or send me a PM if you have any questions. spookys_girl2000@yahoo.com. I'll be more than happy to answer them

Leafeknight7- Wed 15 Aug 2007
Lilith-sama, you have captured my attention once more!. This was hilarious! I can't wait to see more. ^_^Ja ne!

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