i look at the reveiw you got i know it not my bussiness but don't listen to them they stupid you got talent and you' re great writer and i love it so far. I really can't wait till you write again. i go check everyday to see what happen on here and to see who wrote and to find your story but like i said they don't know what they talken about and please write again i can't wait to see you on the update list bye.

i look at the reveiw you got i know it not my bussiness but don't listen to them they stupid you got talent and you' re great writer and i love it so far. I really can't wait till you write again. i go check everyday to see what happen on here and to see who wrote and to find your story but like i said they don't know what they talken about and please write again i can't wait to see you on the update list bye.

I think the story is good so far but i do think you should get a beta because you have a lot of gramer errors. But i do think you have the talent for writing!