Reviews for Mukotsu by Azurena

Lady of the Mist- Sat 17 May 2008
Please don't discontinue this story! I love it way too much and it was just getting really good.
I'm sure that you can continue, it just may take some time. Don't do what I did. I regret it now. If necessary, have someone take over for you. Someone that you know will do it justice.

Solaira- Fri 16 May 2008
I really love this story and I truely hope that you do not end up discontinuing this great fic.

Ice_Angel- Tue 08 Apr 2008
Aww... but I like this story... When are you going to update again? I hope it's soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!

LadyinRed- Thu 27 Mar 2008
omg thats horrible!! i hope you are able to get the schoolwork done in time, or at least come to an understandidng with your teachers... backup disks are a lifesaver!!! dont stress out to much over the story we readers may be impatient but a good story is worth the wait! best of luck!

tir3dgurl- Wed 26 Mar 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! ur story is wonderful and great work!!!! but i am sorry about u losing everything. hope us loser readers (me of course) get to see u soon!!! :) ^_^ (=

Ice_Angel- Wed 26 Mar 2008
hi! so who is this new incarnation of naraku's? is he going to be a challenge for them? can't wait for the next chapter!^_^

Ice_Angel- Wed 26 Mar 2008
Hi, this is a really good story! I like it, really! It's like one of my favs! This chapter sounded a bit...rushed though. You should try taking as long as want, revise it, things like that. You can take as long as you want, we're all here for you!^_^

jade- Wed 19 Mar 2008
so...what is the darkness that is coming?

snowbird- Sun 16 Mar 2008
The scene with Shippo and Rin, hilarious. Sesshoumaru and Kagome, I get warm and sweet feelings from them. Goshenku gives me the willies and I'm leary at why he needs their descriptions.

Kagome-Chan- Sun 16 Mar 2008
Hmmmm U Would Think Shippo Would Have Smelled Sesshomaru Coming Into the Area. Ahh Well. Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Kagome-Chan

Jean- Sun 16 Mar 2008
I thought at first Sesshoumaru was sensing Kagome's lack of mortality. However, a new baddie is in town. What does he/it look like, what are his/it's abilities, and why did you end the chapter where you did?

Kagome-Chan- Fri 14 Mar 2008
Awwww!!!! Thank U SO MUCH 4 Dedicating This Chapter 2 Me!! Your SO Nice! I LUVED It!!!! I'm Glad THIS ONE Is the 1 Dedicated 2 Me!! (Hee hee) Please Update As Soon As U Can! (BTW, Your Flow Was GREAT In This Chapter!!!! Keep It Up!!)

Kagome-Chan

elvira- Thu 13 Mar 2008
AHAH!...please!...update soon!..

jo- Wed 12 Mar 2008
that was so...so...so...
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

snowbird- Tue 11 Mar 2008
Hey! I think Sango and Miroku should know about them. What would be wrong? If Naraku wanted to know, all he has to do is send his killer bees to observe them or Kanna's mirror. I bet Rin either fell on Shippo or pulled his hair by accident while admiring his bow.

K,T,M- Tue 11 Mar 2008
they were really a panther demon tribe

Vicious Grin- Tue 11 Mar 2008
update!
so... did Rin pounce Shippou? haha

Fred- Wed 27 Feb 2008
Just thought that you should perhaps clarify your alternation of the battle between the Lord of the Panthers and Sesshoumaru. He did not use Toukijin and the 'Dragon Strike', which as an attack is only in the third movie. He used Tenseiga, at the swords own urging, freeing the souls from the Panther Lord, taking his power away. He then let Inuyasha use Tetsusaiga to finish him off, as he walked away from the village.

Kagome-Chan- Fri 22 Feb 2008
Oh No!!!! This Could Ruin Kagome and Sesshomaru's Chances At Being 2gether!! Darn the Fates....Oh BTW, U Shouldn't Sell Your Story Short By Quickly Typing Up a Quick Chapter Just So We Can Understand. These Things Take Time, and We Understand It Takes a While 2 Make a Good Chapter! Slow Down, Take Your Time, and We'll Still B Here!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Have Done So, I Look Forward 2 It.

Kagome-Chan C:

Violetcarson- Tue 15 Jan 2008
Oh, that was really cool, but a bit weird, but still cool! So yeah, it was good. Go Kagome!!! lol

Kagome-Chan- Mon 14 Jan 2008
Hey!!!! These Last 2 Chapters R Really Good!! Sry I Didn't Review When the Last 1 Came Out. My Computer was Fried. I Had 2 Get a New 1. So Here I Am. By the Way, Don't Get 2 Discouraged If No1 Reviews On Each 1 of Your Chapters. I've Written MANY Stories 4 Online Sites (Not All of Them Fanfics, Mind You) and I KNOW That Sometimes, You Don't Get Reviewed 4 Like, 7 Chapters Sometimes. Don't Worry, It Doesn't Mean Ppl Don't Like It Necissarily It Just Means They Don't Feel Like Leaving a Review. b.c On Some Old Computers It Take Like, 20 Minutes 4 the Review Page 2 Pop Up. So Don't Worry, Those of Us Who Luv U and Have Newer Computers Will B Here 4 U! Anyway, Update As Soon As U Can!!!! I LOVE IT!!

Love You!

Kagome-Chan C:

MS Cascata- Thu 03 Jan 2008
This chapter (2 I believe) is far too much like the actual storyline of Inuyasha. You're taking it a bit far with the whole "follow the basic story ideas". It's one thing to state the events passed, but it's quite another to write out an entire scene...or several really...that takahashi-san herself had created.

You may want to be careful with how much "author licensing" you're taking liberties with.

Thanks for the attempt. Good luck with your writing endeavors.

Violetcarson- Fri 28 Dec 2007
This is a really neat little fic! I love the humor in it, I thought I was going to pass out from asphyxiation (sp?) at some points. And your writing style is quite fascinating. Great job! Can't wait for an update, and for the group to find out about her and Sessh. I mean, Naraku knows, there's no point in keeping it a secret! Keep writing!!

Kagome-Chan- Fri 28 Dec 2007
Hey There Azurena!!!! I Just Read Your Whole Fic So Far and I LUV IT!! U Have Gr8 and FUNNY Ideas! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!! I Want 2 C Y Kagome Just Like....Exploded Like That!!

Luv,

Kagome-Chan ♪

elvira- Tue 16 Oct 2007
wow...that was so cool!..

more chapters please!!

snowbird- Thu 04 Oct 2007
I love it, I love it. Don't you dare give up on this story. I'll hire Naraku to come after you. Seriously, this story is too good to not finish. I love how you're showing another side of Sess's character. Also, for once, InuYasha is more understanding. He had what you would call an epiphany. So please update.

elvira- Sat 29 Sep 2007
way..to funny!!!...more chapters please!!

Rosenkreuz- Sat 29 Sep 2007
yaay...good thing you continued...really worried me there when you said you might not continue this fic...really appreciate it & I know many do too...so thanks for all your effort to create this interesting fanfic..KUDOS

amie- Sat 29 Sep 2007
hey this is a good story please update soon as possible i really like to know what happens next

Shanalir- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Well, I for one, am most certainly interested in seeing how this story turns out. So, PLEASE do update, if you can keep the inspiration for it.

yo- Thu 20 Sep 2007
more please.

Clara Taisho- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Duh, of course I like your story. Keep going. Take as much time as you need but don't you dare to abandon this fic or I'll bombard you with reviews, emails,...

BabyGirl- Thu 20 Sep 2007
I'll cry if you dont finish this story. It has been so unique in the way that it has ben written so far. How a single event turns the tides on two being that are so different. I just hope you continue. Thanks

Jennifer- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Please continue this story! It is an interesting plotline, and if you truly don't like what you've written so far, you can always revise it. I think it would be a shame not to continue it.

Shaedow- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Keep going! ^^
I absolutely love your writing style...and plotline..(basically everthing)
Keep up the great work and please update soon!

Porsche- Thu 20 Sep 2007
i like ur story it sounded weird at first so i didnt start reading it when u started it but when i did i really liked it and i satill do so dont stop updating cause its reallllly good

Dakomis Sebrof- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Please continue this story!!!!!

savewolf the angel of death- Wed 19 Sep 2007
love the story sofar can you make a few lemons especially in the next chater and so on please? oh and if you have yahoo send me an email to normamourani@yahoo.com then if you have yahoo beta we can chat and maybe even rp if you like

ShadowChick- Wed 19 Sep 2007
it is soooooooo cute i luv it plz keep updating

RenigadesLady- Wed 19 Sep 2007
C'mon! Please continue? I've been following this story since you started it and I just did a bit of a marathon read of it tonight! I'd love to see the end of this one. Please?

Kagomes_Inner_Beast- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Yo! I really like it!! please continue it!
Hope this gives you motivation!


K_I_B

shadowcat- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Oh please don't stop this is a wonderful piece. I beg of you to continue.


crimsonwings- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Please continue the story! It's very good, and should be completed.

elvira- Thu 06 Sep 2007
aww!!!! so kawii!!...he didnt have the heart to ruin thier little thing!!...aww!!!love this chapters!!more please!!

Jean- Sun 02 Sep 2007
I think Kikyou fits perfectly into South Park's "Kyle's Mom is a Bitch" song. I enjoyed the last 2 chapters I just caught up on.

elvira- Tue 28 Aug 2007
this is awesomw!!!....more chapters!!

lindsey- Sun 26 Aug 2007
Wow...
it was really good...
i like how she has something of his..
it's really cute...
i love it =]
hope u write the next chap. soon...
[= : =]

Vicious Grin- Sun 26 Aug 2007
wi-chaaaaaaaa!!!!!
[yeah... just ignore than random sound...]
meep! oh the fluffy goodness!!! I just want to pinch their cheeks off!
...but they might not like that...
ANYWAY...
great chapter! now they gotta make a baby! woot!



man, I had too much coffee.

Jean- Sun 26 Aug 2007
Interesting plot. I would like to read more. Sesshoumaru does seem to keep showing up at the right place at the right time.

Vicious Grin- Sat 25 Aug 2007
ok, that chapter cleared everything up. hahaha
WHOO!

Vicious Grin- Sat 18 Aug 2007
o man... I was so confused until I read your A/N hahaha

AND YAY!! Mukotsu FINALLY comes in.
:D

Otome-kun- Sat 18 Aug 2007
This is an interesting story so far. Good luck on the next chapter.

BTW: The cat's names are;
Toran: blue haired leader/ice user
Shunran: illusion/flower user
Shuuran: male/lightning user
Karan: fire user
and they were Panthers, instead of lynx's.

I hope I don't sound annoying by letting you know that. But hey, now you know!

Junko- Tue 14 Aug 2007
Well, this was interesting. It sure is taking a while to get to the actual 'Mukostsu' part. Oh, and since you didn't know... the female panther's name was Toran (not sure if that's the exact spelling).

Tiegrsi- Sat 11 Aug 2007
You're quite welcome :) I liked reading the new chapters. (One of my favorite parts of Sesshomaru in the anime was him telling Jaken to 'pull himself together'. I always thought it showed that he had a sense of humor, though dry.) I am looking forward to reading abot just what was going through Sess' mind when he saved Kagome from Mukotsu...I have used that scenario as a starting point myself in a few fics. Great job so far :)

reina- Sat 11 Aug 2007
roflmao, i love the last line:

and shippo screamed like a little girl.

priceless :)

eternallove_495- Fri 10 Aug 2007
Dear Azurena,
I think they both lost it, yeah, I really think they does, anyways ^^ please continue this one soon? I want to know what will happen next, though Mokutsu guy was still not here.

^^

bhe

Tiegrsi- Thu 09 Aug 2007
I absolutely love your first chapter! It's funny, but also sets the mood for the story very well. Please continue! I can't wait to read more. :)

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