i like the first story r u thinking of making it its own story. if u r which i think u should cause it would be a hit make it full of adventures and lemons plz dont make kagome or sesshoumaru die. plz dont make kagome turn out to be a wimpy charcater even though be this first chapter she doesnt seem that way.

WOW your storys are so deep and so amazing!!! I hope you do fallow up storys on these two or just the first one. but I cant conplane your work is the best. I MEAN THE BEST Hope u keep writing!!

i liked the first one waaaayyyyy better than the second!!! this is awsome you have to update soon!

Nice. I liked both of the stories. Very interesting. Although, I did like the first more. Maybe you could expand on it, explainig how exactly Kagome ended up in a relationship with Sesshomaru. I would definitely read a fic about that.