i have some comments and some conserns...wat the hell happens 2 the rest of the crew, where's rin? where's jaken? make a sequal or somethin or i'll explode. neways good work plzplzplz write more.

so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it!
your such a good writer

well done.... love it...

This was a very bittersweet story. I like the style in which it was written. I especially loved your portait of Sesshoumaru. He seemed determined not to make the same mistake twice when a young girl asked for help. This time he helped and in the process found love. Sweet!

Well done...Keep up the good work :)

p.s. A sequel would be nice *hint, hint*...*grinning*

THat is one of my favorite one-shots. I love the style you wrote it in. But, I must say, this is the third time you have posted this story. You do know that right? The first time you posted it under the title 'Life.' Then you reposted it under 'Land.' I believe you actually had a second chapter on the second post, but I didn't get to read it. I have reviewed on all three of these posts, and the story STILL rocks!!!!

quite elegant in it's dispair