| I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
| http://jfrazi.livejournal.com
Great story! I stumbled upon your profile while voting for your story " they" on Dokuga. I hope you win.
HeartStar- Sun 09 Mar 2008
| Thank you.
MAddie- Sat 08 Mar 2008
| i like it....ALOT!
lolo- Mon 15 Oct 2007
| great story! I will try and wait patiently for the next update :) Good luck with your nursing classes!
This is a very interesting story. I will wait patiently for your updates. After all, education comes first. Good luck in your schooling and goals.
Good job! *hugs and smiles*
sleepy- Sat 13 Oct 2007
| :o woot! This is so good! More please! ;_;... Would it be too terribly bothersome to ask you for an update reminder of when you do update?
an- Mon 17 Sep 2007
| i really love what i read so far, please update soon!
How long I have waited for this update... And it was so worth it. Especially with the last line. I think I will be grinning this stupid grin for at least the next hour. This stupid, meloncholy grin that comes from one truly touched by what you have written.
Peace.
Ivy.
| very good so far! can't wait to read more so update asap.
I have to say that you have me enrapt with this story. I love how you are moving around temporally and through perspective. It languidly flows together into something akin to poetry. Your word choice is beautiful and there is a great deal of skill present in every scene you paint. I always love stories where Kagome grows and shifts either in the direction of a fully developed, confident character or a jaded, bitter and still confident character, but for entirely different reasons. Both she and Sesshomaru are so well rounded in this story. It's simply beautiful and full of angst and drama. You leave just enough unknown to grip the reader, however you reveal enough to keep the story interesting and preserve its momentum.
Really very brilliant. Keep writing. I await the next chapter.
Peace.
~Ivy
| very good so far! I can't wait to see what happens next.
lunaticneko- Sun 22 Jul 2007
| Wow. really intense. can't wait to see what happens next. >.
aimee- Sat 21 Jul 2007
| Very well written. You actually get your reader to "feel". Very few grammatical errors...I love it! Please update soon!
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