tif- Mon 17 Mar 2008
lets kill sessh pls pls..pls... how cruel can he get

KagomeFreak28- Wed 02 Jan 2008
i hate the fat that sesshoumaru is cheating on kagome . i think that she shouls confront him , and leave ! if i had a bayfriend and i found out he was cheating on me i would leave to !!!!!!!! it's common sense , right ? i don't understand why you should stay with someone who constantly causes her pain !!!!

HakunaMatata- Tue 25 Dec 2007
great, i think we should have a confrontation soon

Megan Consoer- Tue 13 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

BeautifulDeception- Tue 31 Jul 2007
I Feel So Sorri For Kagome In This Story ... Sesshomaru Is Doing Her Soo Wrong ... Well I LIke The New Chapter Can't Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next ... Update Soon!

orchid- Mon 30 Jul 2007
so when will kag leave sessh.....

Ava 365- Mon 30 Jul 2007
OH MY!! The jerk!!! What is he having, the fourty year old crisis all men seem to be having? Kagome has to gain some self respect. I just don't gt it, how can someone be so in love with his mate but cheat on her with another woman? And when is Kagome going to stand by herself? Is she going to let the others do the job for her? GRRR!! I'm pissed!!! You better update soon 'cause I don't know how much longer I can hold my beast in the cage!!!

K,T,M- Mon 30 Jul 2007
soooooooo sad u have to update soon please

Vicious Grin- Mon 30 Jul 2007
sesshoumaru needs some sense knocked into him. mhmm
::nods and grabs hammer::

TONI- Mon 30 Jul 2007
WHY DON'T U FINISH THE STORY IN FANFICTION.NET SINCE U R AT 28?????

BeautifulDeception- Sat 28 Jul 2007
Lol ... Two Updates Go U!!! Woooooooooooooooo!!! Anyways Kagome Needs To Jus Cuzz Sesshomaru The Hell Out ... Pent Up Anger Is Not A Good Thing ...

BeautifulDeception- Fri 27 Jul 2007
Good Chapter ... I'm Really Starting To Feel Sorry For Kagome ... She Is Really Really Hurting ... Damn Sesshomaru!

orchid- Fri 27 Jul 2007
please update soon

orchid- Tue 24 Jul 2007
so when does kag leave sessh... or when will kag kill the little slut sessh is cheating with... kag needs to stop drinking, put her foot down or shove it in sessh's family jewel, and leave a cheating demon.. not a good environment for her daughter.... update soon and let us know what kag will do...

orchid- Tue 24 Jul 2007
so when does kag leave sessh... or when will kag kill the little slut sessh is cheating with... kag needs to stop drinking, put her foot down or shove it in sessh's family jewel, and leave a cheating demon.. not a good environment for her daughter....

attackedbyangrysocks- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Oh my god its back!!! I was so in love with this story on fanfiction.net but then I couldn't find it anymore and thank god its back!! See i knew your name sounded familiar for a reason.

BeautifulDeception- Mon 23 Jul 2007
Awww Poor Kagome I Feel Soo Sorry For Her ... Sessshomaru Is Just Doing The Unthinkable ...

Kanazawa- Sun 22 Jul 2007
wow, great second chapter!! You are right... it did get longer-- whoo hoo!!-- only now I have to wait for chapter 3-- cry cry cry.

Beautifully written-- I feel so sad for Kagome... and Asahi! I really really want to know what is up with Sesshoumaru... but at the same time, I kinda don't want to know what is up with Sesshoumaru... although I have an idea.

P.S. I love Asahi-- so cute!

marufan- Sat 21 Jul 2007
this is really good i like where this is going you have to update i'm impressed with this story, i haven't seen a story with a plot like this one, good job!

BeautifulDeception- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Awww Poor Kagome She Has Got It Bad ... Why Is Sesshomaru Such An Asshole! Goshness ... Update Soon Pwease!

alaine- Sat 21 Jul 2007
i hope kagome dumps him and take their daughter anyway cant wait for your next update

Cafekko- Sat 21 Jul 2007
omgsh I didn't realise you uploaded hereee =)

I read this storyy on fanfiction.net and I tell you that I love it ^____^


tif- Sat 21 Jul 2007
seshh is an ass maybe it would be better if kags leaves or try to kil herself .......

Taiyoukai's Lady- Fri 20 Jul 2007
DOOM!!! DOOM! DOOM! DOOM! DOOM!!!
You're on here now?! Awsome!!! I love this story, in fact I created an account on ff.net just so I could send you reviews! (But I couldnt figure out how to do it...sorrie!)
LOve your story! I have been hooked since march, and I religiously check to see if you have updated. So I will now have another place to see it on. Hummm...I'll just have to see how long it is.

By the way, Sesshoumaru is such a DOG!!! I seriously wanted to beat him when I got done reading your first couple of chapters, and I had tears in my eyes at the end of several. It was amazing. You have this awsome ability to weave everything together and let the read not only follow the characters thoughts, but also feel their emotions!!! So very good, better than chocolate, Better than Cheesecake!!!
Better than CHOCOLATE CHEESECAKE!!!

Ignore my randomness, it takes control of me at the worst of times. Anyway just wanted to say Awsome job, Keep up the good work, you inspire other authors like me and make us Me espically> believe that there is hope for our stories.

TTFN> Taiyoukai's Lady

Maerwen- Fri 20 Jul 2007
I was just wondering, when reading this chapter, if I could point out that at the point where Kagome is talking to the neko maid, Kagome mentions that she still loves Sesshoumaru, but then the maid asks if Kagome still loves him. It seems to me that that question is a little redundant and slows the reading a bit because it makes the reader sit there and wonder if that question was just answered. It also has the effect of making the maid look either stupid or enjoys inflicting emotional pain. Just thought I'd point that out since you said you wanted to edit this one.

~Maerwen

phonology- Fri 20 Jul 2007
I'm always looking for this type of stories. T_T (dramarama me)

Your story is interesting and so far there are no grammar errors / typo.

Raychel- Fri 20 Jul 2007
Yay! You have this over here now too! I am already subscribed over at FF.net :D I love this story, it actually made me cry. Keep up the wonderful work!

clover_babe- Fri 20 Jul 2007
ahhh.

so sad. but i always do love those stories where Sessho makes a huge ass mistake and has to make huge ass reprimands. loved it.

alatera- Wed 18 Jul 2007
I love this story!! Glad to see you here. Welcome to the site!

Maerwen- Wed 18 Jul 2007
AHH!! *glomp* I LOVE THIS STORY ON FANFICTION.NET!! I've just been so busy that I didn't realize that you had put up more chapters on FF.N! YAY FOR LADY ARTEMIS!!

SesshomaruCrazy- Wed 18 Jul 2007
OMG....Welcome to this site...
I love this story ,,, it's awesome...
One of the better stories i have read lately...Hope your gonna update soon... I hope I'am your first review... Can't wait for the rest of the story...
Take Care
Mari

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