:) i really liked that it was cute. I made me smile lol. U rule

You got a spelling error in your summary. This is what you wrote: KAGOME Wights a Letter to Sesshoumaru.

It should read: Kagome writes a letter to Sesshoumaru.

Just an FYI -- don't take offense. I'm the kind of person who'd tell ya if you had a piece of toilet paper stuck to your foot.

I think that your letter was very sweet and I loved it. The only fault that I see, which is a minor one, is the spelling/grammar. English can be a tough language to learn if it is not your primary language.

For example, in your first sentence, when the unknown person announced to Sesshoumaru that "their is a letter for you"...the word 'their' should have been 'there'
other than that you did very well.

I try to encourage people, not put them done. Just ignore the arrogant reviewers and continue on your path to writing stories. You have potential and you are just in the learning stages (like me) *grins*...at least you are giving it a shot and that's the only thing that matters...yes?

So keep up the good work and leave this one up as a learning piece because as you progress and get better at your writing style, you can always look back at the first story and see how far you have come to be being that great writer that you will be some day. Give yourself a break and don't be so hard on yourself. I'm going to put you on my favourite author list and this story on my favourite story list.

*hugs and smiles*

that was so sweet!!!..

it was really sweet and the last part was funny " it turns me on!" lol great job!

dont take it down! its awesome!

hahahaha
that last sentence!!!
I love it!