Tess- Sat 17 Nov 2007
Loved it!! Can't wait to read more. So update soon please!! :)

Megan Consoer- Thu 06 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some chapters?

midnighthaven- Tue 21 Aug 2007
cant wait for u to update ur a very nice writer

Catherine- Tue 14 Aug 2007
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read Inuyashas' reaction to Kagome leaving with Sesshomaru.

midnighthaven- Fri 10 Aug 2007
its cool update plz

marquishawright- Sun 29 Jul 2007
that was hot i hope u update soon

Megan Consoer- Tue 10 Jul 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

toni- Sat 07 Jul 2007
good story but i have read one similar to this so orginality would be low

Fortunesque- Sat 07 Jul 2007
I'm liking this fic. As far as lemon advice, I don't have much to give. ^^'

I learned lemons from reading many of them. My advice would be to read lemons and pick out ideas you like and scrap the ones you don't (ex: I hate it when people say Sesshoumaru 'howled' his release... it's so stupid and cliche).

Your characterization of Sesshoumaru in this fic makes him sound like a seducing serpant. I don't know if that's your intention, but I like the kinda' sleezy factor.

Leafeknight7- Sat 07 Jul 2007
Hmm not bad. I'm rather curious to how this goes. ^_^Ja ne!

DreamingPisces- Sat 07 Jul 2007
This was a great part of your story! I hope you continue soon and be sure to make it really romantic. Oh! dear i'm giving you demands well you do what you want with it I know it's gonna be great!

whiteinu1- Sat 07 Jul 2007
keep going ^_^

al- Sat 07 Jul 2007
it's interesting,and worth another read.
good luck with the next chapter.
i'll check it out,the more you write.
kudos to your beta.they're doing a good job.

Slm_candle- Fri 06 Jul 2007
WELL. We meet again. AND what a meeting it was. I like you and your a VERY good author. UPDATEIES

Chaos_Queen77- Fri 06 Jul 2007
Hot damn, yeah that was hot. Good work, post soon because i want to see more lemony goodness. i know im a perv. post again soon.

Chaos

Kagomes_Inner_Beast- Fri 06 Jul 2007
I love your story and it was one great Lemon I hpe you continue it and know that you have my full support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K_I_B

elvira- Fri 06 Jul 2007
wow..this is freaken awsome!!...but what will inuyasha do?...will he freak out?...or just let them be?..more chapters please!!

Akina- Fri 06 Jul 2007
Plz update.

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