Slm_candle- Thu 05 Jul 2007
Wow that's got a lot of potential BUT I hate to say this but you seriously need a beta I don't mean to offend you but the way it looks and all those spelling mistakes is going to give you a VERY low score and even lower amounts of reviews. I know. I will happily help you. just email me with the subject of beta and the body of tyhe message saying you do want me to help. kk? thx

black moon inu- Mon 02 Jul 2007
not to be mean or anything because whats writen is good but I think you need to add a little bit more to this chap. but post more soon.

hugs and puppies

Slm_candle- Sun 01 Jul 2007
Cool. i like it. NOw i demand and ask for an update. HEHE

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