| wow your story is truly amazing1 i enjoyed in as well as the mystery. oh nyes toward/'s the end you spelled a name wrong. sango is the corect spellin not songo. love your story and please update as soon as possible for you.
judzea- Fri 15 Jun 2007
I think this story will be very interesting and looking forward to your updates. However, there were a few minor spelling and grammar errors but not enough to detract from your story.
Please put in some spacing between sentences to make reading easier on the eyes other than that I believe you have started off brilliantly.
Update soon :-)
C.m.- Fri 15 Jun 2007
Wow You are an artist! I love this fic so detailed and well worded~! Fwa Into my favs it gose ^.^
~C.m.
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