| It looks good, keep it up. Just remember to start a new paragraph everytime someone starts speaking. =)
calla- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| It looks good, leep it up. Just remember to start a new paragraph everytime someone starts speaking. =)
naru- Sat 09 Jun 2007
| Update!!!
luna- Sat 09 Jun 2007
| I really liked the preview, it actually made me want to read the story eventhought most of the time I dont read stories without reading a, what my friend would call "real preview" but hey what does he know! plus I reaaly like the story already and I dont think that I ever read a fanfic that portrayed sesshomaru as the dance instructor type.
Define-Naughty- Fri 08 Jun 2007
| Awesome first chapter! Plz update soon so I can read it.
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