GOD I LOVED THE FIRST LEMON! it was just so fascinating! beautifully written and i loved how you gave just enough detail. kept me reading. lol and the fact that they don't love one another at the moment *wink* makes it even more interesting ^^

lo i completely remember chapter 6 ^0^ Kagome completely ripped Sessh a new one and I remmeb'er being very satisifed with her names and such for him. Of fourse Sessh had to ruin it by kissing her. XD lol i loved this chapter! It's one of my very favorites! just awesomely written!

I know i have read most of this story before, not to mention the first chapter before but since it had been so long i thought i should review once more to let you know how much i appreciate this chapter. i has been forever since I have been able to find the time to read some fanfiction and your story was one of the first i hopped on to read. Of course I needed to refresh my memory. I probably wont review until after a few more chapters to save you time but i do want you to know that this chapter is magnificent! it defines Sesshoumaru so well! and I just adore your vocabulary. i know... the oddest comment ever XD

anywho, I'm gonna go read more of your fantasitc story. See ya in another review ^-^

This last chapter (30) seemed a bit intensed and foreboding. One can feel the approaching climax to this story. It is so enjoyable and well written. For the first time Rin was a bit defiant towards her hero. I liked that side of her in this fic.

Well done! *hugs and smiles*

I loved it! Oh my Word! You know whose writting yours reminds me of? David Eddings. The Belgarion Series. You should read it. And I would be so happy if you were to add me to your update list. My email is the one above. Thanks.

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Well, hey. Sorry for my lack of reviews on this great story, but -- RL sort of got in the way. So one more chapter and then the epilogue (before S:AVS) or is it the other way around? I'm easily confused (as if you couldn't tell :) ) So why was Jaken looking so evil and how the hell did they get Kouga out of the Palace without Kag or Sess or Masaru (I love that character!) noticing? Or are they still in the Palace. And correct me if I'm wrong (which is a good bet -- Monday mrning without Coffee) but why weren't Megumi's children mentioned before this? Or were they and I blew past the info? So does this mean that Rin will become attached to the youngest of Megumi's kids instead of Shippou, or are you not addressing that? I'm blanking out on what other thyings of note I thought about while reading chapters 29 and 30, but I'm sure you'll get the questions sooner rather than later. Oh I wanted to thank you for the cute easter photo that you sent -- absolutely adorable! Can't wait for the next installment -- keep up the good work!

I am most curious about Masaru and Kirara. Something brews there. A forboding or a future? Who knows. :)

Miroku's troubled mind when he spoke to InuYasha is exciting yet also ... startling. What does he see, I wonder. The beginning of the battle's end, or something more that he knows in the mutability of life, as he ruminated on.

I had faith that Sesshoumaru would see reason on saving the life. Rin's opinion coupled with Kagome's influence on his pride ... That to bend is not to break but a show of great strength of spirit and character...

Lovely chapter as always. Am impatient for the next. :)

I Can't Believe This Story Is Almost Finished ... Goshness Can't Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next ... Lovely Update!

Wow. Just wow.

I will be on pins and needles and lots of other sharp, pointy things, awaiting the next installment.

Done with ch 26. So much happened! So many couplings...Loved the early part of the ch with Sango and Miroku. Attmepts at understanding and acceptance, lovely. And I heartily approve of Inuyasha and Ayame. The first kiss was beautifully done.

Just finished ch 22. Very exciting. Kinda scary. Really really good. On with the show

Okay, Elegant One...I said to myself this morning 'Screw Work!' and decided, come hell or high water, I was going to completely catch up with this story. I went back several chapters and started reading. Just finished ch 20 and will no longer wait to review! Love it! Brilliant! Just so fun, amazing, all the new revelations keep coming.

And I love the Tao of Pooh reference. I mentioned that same book recently in a story. Now on to ch 21!

I just found your story and though I am not far in it yet I am hooked. It is very well written and I can't wait to see where the characters end up. I would like to be added to an update list if you have one. Thanks a lot and keep up the great work.

EP, as alway a wonderful piece
I can only hope to be as good as you and Preistess Skye
Hugs
LadySafire

I love the many different levels of this story; truly a work of art as always!

Wonderfully written! =D

Loved the detail you put in the lemon and ...I must say, I loved Inuyasha's character!! I was crying with laughter whenever I read his comments XD

I can hardly wait for next part and the epilogue ^_^

Keep up the great work hun *hugs*

oh what an ebil teaser!! Well, it seems that we've both taken on the role of Bisy Backson as of late. Hopefully things slow down for you and I'll be watchin' your ficcies! I'm hoping to read Sesshomaru's mate this weekend!

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Please, when are you going to return to this story? I'm getting anxious for more updates.

Okay!! So It has taken me so so very long to be able to sit down and re-read this entire story...I had to! I wanted to make sure that I knew EXACTLY where this story is and has been, and though it took about a week of me coming home for work, pulling it up and passing out cold in the middle of chapters out of just plain old tiredness, I've finally finished it! *does a happy little jig*

I was just taken by the story, as I was last time and I could have sworn I reviewed it...but I guess I didn't! Shame on me!

-ish babblin' at 12:40am-

I'll try to wrap it up now though.

The characters are wonderfully developed. I love the personalities and I think Shippou is just so cute! I love the scene with Inupapa, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. That was just sweet!

The plot is developed very well and there are so many unique elements to this.

I just want to thank you for posting this and congrats on the successes for dokuga! You're just awesome!

I look forward to more and hopefully things wont get so busy that I fall behind again :)

Just read parts 11 and 12. I have to mark exams so I can't make this review as detailed as I'd like to - just know that I loved them and I am thoroughly curious as to what was in that mystical box!

Part 10 was FANTASTIC! I'll have you know I was chuckling to myself throughout most of it. Definitely an enjoyable read. There were a few more typos than I'm used to seeing in your writing but we all have those days eh? By the way...CONGRATS ON DOKUGA!!! YAY!!!! You did so well I'm so happy for you :) The accolades were well deserved trust me. You'll be hearing from me again soon :)

- Langus

Congratulations EP! You are truly deserving!

I have not read this story because, well I aint know about it but I saw the Dokuga list and congrats on the win!

I'll start reading it soon.

It has been awhile seen I've last reviewed this story. The chapters of the seven treasures and the underground temple was deep. I really enjoyed reading it. I thought the ending part of chapter 29 was very cute, especially Shippou using Sess's bathing herbs.

Looking forward to more updates.

*hugs and smiles*

Lovely Chapter ... Aww Good For Inuyasha And Aymae! Shippo Is Finally Grown Up And Miroku And Sango Need To Have A Long Descussion About Their Relatioship I Hate To See Them Continue Down This Spiralling Path Of Emotional Turmoil Update Soon Please! Oh And About Ur Message U Are Soo Welcome!

So, Masaru thinks he hates Sango because of her father trying to kill him and giving him the scar. There's emotion there that can easily turn to love. At one time Sesshoumaru hated humans and look what it got him. Maybe I'm on the wrong track, but I get the impression that Miroku is backing away from Sango and encouraging her towards Masaru. I hope I'm right.

Ok my feeling that Masaru and Sango will hook up is even stonger now. Which leaves the question, where is Miroku in the Valentine story? Hmm...

This chapter was very good. I loved how everything played out. Great job!

Can this get any better? Excellent as always.

Great chapter! As always your writing just floats off the page, it's beautifully written. I love the quotes you incorporate in your chapters, nice addition! Keep up the fantastic work!

I Must Say That I Am Sorri For Taking So Long To Read The Story ... I Was Many Chapters Behind But Now I Have Caught Up ... I Love The Chapters They Jus Make Me Wonder About Whats Going To Happen Next ... Miroku And Sango Are By Far The Cutest Thing And I Never Thought About Aymae And Inuyasha Getting Together Till Now ... Kouga Is A Pompous Ass And Jaken Is Becoming Such A Wonderful Caretaker ... Again I Loved The Chapters Can't Wait For The Next Update ... Bye Bye!

Whooo nelly what a chapter! (I'm referring to part 9) Please don't hold it against me that I'm reading at such a slow pace! It's just that your chapters are soooo long (but in a good way of course!)

I really like how you bring us (the reader) into their world. The descriptive detail is fantastic and I find the banter between our two favourite protaganists to be well-placed comedic relief. I'm still laughing over the "A girl can put her eye out with that horse dick" LMAO! Of all the things to say after doing the fluffster...jesu...

Great lemony scene too by the way. Just the right amount of steaminess and humour. Oh that Sesshomaru...does he know how to woo a woman or what? "We will rut." "Get on the bed." hahahaha I dunno what woman could possibly turn down those accolades of endearment!

I've noticed, especially in this chapter, that you have obviously done a LOT of background research into Japanese culture to write this fic. I have to commend you on this because you use tid-bits in your story so effortlessly but I know it must've taken you a while to get the research down. I'm very impressed.

Hopefully I can read another chapter soon!

Cheers!

Jenn

Please please pleeeeeeeease write another chapter it's the only thing that keeps me sane.

Sometimes it's hard to understand how people think when they write with their heart. I understood every word you wrote. Please write more, I am eager to hear the rest of this epic journey.
Signed,
Lautice

Ophthalmic...now there's a new one. I actually had to look it up hahaha What I like about reading your stories is the finesse. I write "he had the balls to..." you write "testicular fortitude" LOL I got a really good laugh out of several parts in Part 8 . When a very drunk Kouga tried to tell off two Jakens was probably my favourite. I wanted to read more than one chapter tonight but I ran out of time. It's okay though...I'll read another tomorrow :) Hope you're feeling better!

It took a while, but I read through all of it again to catch up with what I missed, and I loved it! You write beautifully, if I do say so myself. I love your subtle humor ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next!

Story - great, plot,also very good.

Might you consider using a different word for speech? Sesshoumaru always "intones" - he never questions, speaks, asks, queries, states, commands, suggests or simply says.

You always use "intone" for him, even when the meaning doesn't fit the statement he is intoning. In this last chapter, Kagome also intoned and she is not one to do so.

Also -- Rancor, not "Ranker"

It's nice to see you back to this story, I enjoy it, but for a few issues of grammar and usage. Intone is one as it crops up quite often, nearly every time he speak, he intones and it takes away from the thing said for me, as I imagine the statement being intoned - rather than said, or any of the other possible words that would convey the appropriate mood.

This story is nearly done, is it not? What do you have in mind next?

All in all, good plot development - but if the chapters are going to be short, perhaps you might want to update more often. :)

Yea, a new chapter. I was just re-reading this fic the other day when going over those nominated for Dokuga Awards. You know I could not remember if the story was complete or not. Bad memory, minor guilt trip. Ha! I love the chapter. I was thinking that Kaeda's time was up and that Kikyou was showing up so they could pass away together, so to speak. Apparently that was wrong.

the plot thickens! i VERY much like the visuals your discription of the ritual. i saw each and every motion as if it were on a wide screen tv!

i wonder if Hakudoshi will servive when the infant dies....can one half live without the other?

well worth the wait as always!
many, many questions answered, and just enough new ones to keep us guessing.
tilayha

Oh Elegant One, I have put off starting to read this because of the length, and, let's face it, we only have so much time in a day. But MCMT ended and so I said "Real life be damned!" today and began. And I'm so very pleased I did. I read 4 chapters. Love it! Can't wait to be able to read more. Alas, must abandon lap top for washing machine (pesky real life). Thanks for the fun beginning of my morning.

Bless you, bless you for your e-mail regarding Masaru. I enjoy reading works by talented authors such as yourself. So I shall keep your site open for more future stories whether they include Masaru or not. I rang in the New Year rather quietly doing what I like the most, reading. I'm not much of a partygoer. I wish nothing but good for you in this new year.

Yahoooo!!! You have returned. You covered a lot in this chapter. You cleared up some mysteries only to add more. It seems some things are coming to a conclusion. Whether I get my wish for Sango and Masaru or not, I still am drawn to him for some reason. Also, you did write in an attraction for him from her how ever it goes. If it goes no further, then why? If you don't use him to his full potential in this story, bring him back in another Kag/Sess pairing. It's your fault I'm hooked on him.

Great! Yay you're back and happy new year to you too.
I'm so excited. Can't wait til you update agaim... ell I can, but not all that patiently....Maybe....

Beautiful chapter, my dear friend. It sparkles.
Peace.
~Ivy

Breathtaking. Simply breathtaking.

Okay so I'm only on chapter 8. I started reading this story when you first posted AGES ago but then I got bogged down with school and didn't read much of any fanfiction for a LONG time but hey I'm back at it now and figured I should start where I left off with this one.

So yeah...only on chapter 8 but whoa man what a chappy! I think MY toes were nearly curling with all that lustiness. And a cliffy to boot...jeez woman now I'll just have to read more :) Look forward to more reviews courtesy of me :)

Cheers!

I know that with ASS being down threw you off your schedule. I'm just so anxious for your return to one of my most favorite stories. When you do, please keep adding more between Sango and Masaru. It would be so wonderful for them to have a romance and mate. Kagome would have her "sister" with her through the centuries. Masaru, I believe, would make a good " brother-in-law" to Sesshoumaru. Don't get me wrong. I like Miroku but I've never thought him worthy of Sango.

GREATEST STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!! I NEED 2 KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! THIS STORY IS LIKE A DRUG 4 ME!!!!!!! I'M ADDICTED!!!!!!! O_o :P
LOL ANYWAYS, GREAT STORY,PLZ WRITE MOR, AND UR ALOT BETTER THAN RINSETERNALSOUL. ^_^

chapter one:
Well done and very amusing, too.

Well, i tried to get the the elfyourself.com site, and it sent me to this wierd place that said it was taken off py some buissness of some sort...
And i'll be okay with the pause, as long as you make the christmas stories really good!, and if you could answer one question, are the four parts four chapters, or four seperat kinds/parts parts, like sequals? and is so, will they be done by christmas? and is going to be a romance story or humor story, or both?
just wondering! lol, happy thanksgiving to you as well!
TTFN, joanne

hmmm a Christmas story sounds really cute? I hope it has a right rating (yeah, I like dirty fics, lol), the title seems like it may be a modern era fic too?? hehe. anyways, that elfyourself thing is great! I made one and sent it to my family. lol

I am just so impressed with this chapter!! It is so odd that a shrine could be so deep underground the Western Shiro and that Sesshoumaru had no knowledge of it. Living there his whole life I would have guessed he knew something, even through rumour or fairytales. So, Sess and Yasha were foretold to live. Amazing. I love all the dedication you are putting into making this fic as accurate as you can. It shows what kind of person you are in real life. I want to thank you again, my friend, for being here to keep me not only entertained but making me feel as if what I say means something. You have taken the time to tell me you care and I do believe you do. My new meds are doing somewhat better, thanks. I tend to want to sleep all day and night but they say as my body adjusts I stay awake more often. I don't mind acting the part of a princess lolling inbed and reading fanfics while sipping herbal teas but HONESTLY, life sucks when you can't enjoy being a woman and doing girl stuff on sunny days. So, anywho, all my love and prays on the new fics in the making. TTFN...ps...I haven't heard of that title before but either way, I'm looking forward to a new Christmas fic. These days, holiday traditions are being celebrated from every country,so why not Christmas in Japan?

Wow! Lots happened just walking down a tunnel! I think this is the first story that includes Sango's parentage as a important part, cool! And Ji-ji has a door to the past of his own, (I can't imagine him getting through the well and across that much territory in the feudal age)
I hope you keep Kagura alive in your story, she is my favorite incarnation.
Keep up the good work!

OMG! Destiny, destiny, there's no escaping destiny. Wow, you really surprised me. Everyone in the group is related to each other by their elders. I still haven't figured out where Kagome's father is living. I thought he might show up in this shrine. I wonder if this shrine is somehow connected to that place Sesshoumaru went to for the ritual for Satori.

This story just keeps getting better and better withfull of surprises. I look forward to hearing what tales Gramps has to tell, which I hope will answer so many questions like the connection the members of the group has to one another.

Excellent writing...well done.
*hugs and smiles*

OH
MY
FREAKIN
GOD!!!
That was so unexpected. I'm quite speechless.
wow... I would havee never in a million years thought that... that... *sighs* Great chap. This is all I have to say...

ok, it's not. WHERE THE HECK DID GRAMPS COME FROM?
yup that's the question i hope to learn the answer to soon.

I absolutely love your story! I've read so many Inuyasha stories that have Sesshoumaru falling in love with Kagome, but most of them end up with Sesshoumaru looking stupid and acting like an idiot. You've done such a wonderful job of keeping him in character through all the story. I look forward to the next chapter!

i so did not see that coming!! you are a continued surprise! i do believe you are going to have to fill some very large shoes with your next story my dear! well done, WELL DONE!!
tilayha

Wow! I have to keep my thinking cap on for this story. There's always so many things going on, some very obvious and some very trivial that later becomes important. Whew! Oh pleasel. I want more interaction between Sango and Masaru. Just that small amout was not even an appetizer, merely a tease. So far I find him very interesting. Sango is a warrior and in my opinion deserves her equal as a mate.

That chapter was amazing! :) I love and respect you as a writer...your plotline is so uniquely complex and I love it! Keep up the exquisite work!

You are a very, very, very, *very* evil person to end the chapter as you did! It also shows a detailed, well thought out plot and flawless execution but I still maintain that you are a mercialess and evil author to leave all of us hanging like this.

The only remedy is to update quickly.

Please.

Meara
Bionic Otaku

btw, Contessa enjoyed it too. she insisted on sitting on my lap the entire time I read this ;)

this chapter turned out fantastic! See, that agonizing the other day was worth it. Very interesting take with the seven treasures, shocked me! And jiji?? what an ending, totally unexpected

OOOooohhhh! You are so Evil!!! You better have another update coming soon (like this weekend) or I'll. . .well, I don't know what I'll do, but I'll do something! Woah! Too much caffeine. Anyway, great chapter -- please update soon, and how much longer before the final confrontation between Naraku and Kagome et al? Although, with Naraku (or is it Onigumo?) being represented along with the other ancestors does that mean there is another enemy, more powerful than Naraku? Or am I completely off base? Explain, please!

i LIVE!! haha, it's been awhile but it just couldn't be helped. school's been a pain in the ass lately and unfortunately i can't do anything about it. but, as you can see, i'm trying to catch up with all my readings. i've fallen behind on so many of them that it's really starting to become ridiculous. i love the progression of sango and miroku's relationship. and inuyasha and ayame? lol, that's a first and poor kouga, i feel for the wolf. wonderful job as always and the little quotes are a change. i like it though. ::two thumbs up:: continue soon!!
-hasu86

Can I just that this fanfic is....the best fanfic EVER!!!!!

WOOOTTT!!!!


You are doing an amazing job!! I re-read the whole story twice!! It's a work of art, a master piece!

I loved all the lemons! I am the biggest of fan of lemons and I huge critique when it comes to them and believe me when I say that your lemons are outstanding! -clap-

I love the story outline and the plot! I can't wait for more chapters!! ^_^

Keep it up!! =D

P.S. will there be more lemons? hopefully..xD

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **Showers you with cookies and dances happily with her muse** YAY! IT FRIGGIN ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah oh yeah!

Sorry! I've been busy lately and only got to read two of your chapters at once today. Sorry!!! I like how Sesshoumaru's trying to protect Kagome from himself, it's so sweet, my teeth ache. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!! Inuyasha is as volatile as he always is. Though Sesshoumaru sounded pretty damn funny when he told the palace guards that they could kill Kouga should he prove to be an inconvenience in his absence. So funny...kudos to you Ruru!!!

Sesshoumaru inserts foot in mouth yet again, "primary bitch." Ouch. After you explained his thinking process, knowing he would be giving Kagome a rougher than normal ride, including his fear that Kagome and their pup might be severely injured, his regression to previous Inu thinking is understandable. Of course he was not given a chance to explain, but I find Kagome's reaction quite understandable, too. What the hell, they are the product of their species and their culture. There has to be times when there will be clashes. The intimacy of the situation just brings a spicier angle into the picture. Later, the love making was so awesome that the earth literally moved and opened up revealing an underground cavern. Have I got that right? Actually, I just re-read that part and I see it was Miroku's embedded staff--you see my confusion--with the light of the sun through the rings that opened the earth. It reminds me of one of the Indiana Jones movies where he was looking for the location of the Arc of the Covenant. He used a staff with a headpiece which had to be inserted into a miniature replica of the city and when the light shone through the headpiece it would highlight a certain location. OK it is not the same at all, but it just reminded me of that movie. Moving right along, as for Kouga, he is looking very similar to Inuyasha right now. It's the old "I don't want her, but I don't want anyone else to have her either" thing. Or it could be whenever someone else shows an interest, somehow that person/youkai suddenly becomes more interesting. I'm not sure jealously is involved. Perhaps Kouga wants Ayame to remain part of his tribe so he does not entirely piss off her Grandfather, who we all know is an influential youkai. I think Inuyasha and Ayame would make a cute couple actually, and Inuyasha is a Lord so technically higher up on the social scale than Prince Kouga. They are both canines. There is the little matter of Inuyasha being a hanyou, however he is more powerful than Kouga and most other youkai. I am so pleased that Sango and Miroku are closer. The monk oozes sex appeal and Sango needed to start paying attention to him and taking Miroku seriously. I am assuming that Miroku's injury is not life threatening since Sesshoumaru and Kagome are not wasting any time before going to research the newly discovered cavern.

YaY! I love this story...you have it formed so well...it's such a work of art! Keep up the great work!:)

Each week I look for this story, one of the few I keep track of. Mind you, I *was* all set to chide you for not moving the story along a little faster. Then you had them discover the secret passage that not only grabbed my interest but made for a really nice cliffhanger. Sigh> There goes my well thought out critique...

Oh, and feel free to kill Kouga at any time. His cavalier "hello-I'm-here-Kagome-drop-everything-and-go-with-me" character has always managed to annoyed me. Someone really needs to let him know that his youkai charms are eminently reistable!

Meara
The Bionic Otaku

Hi there, EP. This fic is really getting too interesting to try and tell you of all the things I like. I will say I'm glad Sess and Kags are learning to talk to each other. Even little things will become big things if you don't communicate with each other. You did a great job with them and thanks for putting InuYasha with Ayame. I am really enjoying the quotes you put at the beginning of each new scene. You are an inspirational person. It's a wonderful gift. I'm glad you enjoy writing for fanfiction. I have become attached already and I think that if you need to put your new fic on hold, then do so. I, personnally, would prefer good quality work and just knowing you'll be continuing on is a thrill for me to look forward to. I may be repeating myself here but I honestly want you to know how very much I appreciate your work and each notice you give to keep us updated on posting and delays. Loving hugs my friend, JEN

Oh what a cliffie! An underground mystery! I liked how you handled the misunderstanding between Sess and Kag. It showed how each one worked through it, helping them to understand each other even better. Nice touch. Too many times couples fail to solve a small issue thinking it will pass because it's not as important as a larger issue. Small issues can accumulate into a mountain. I like how you solved theirs. Hooray! Inuyasha and Ayame! I get tired of him being paired with Kikyo. She doesn't deserve him. Also, I like it when once in a while Sango and Miroku are not paired with each other. I caught the short bit where she was admiring Masaru. Could there be a future pairing there? (hint,hint) It would tickle me pink if so. Miroku is too much of a womanizer and I don't think he would be faithful to her. Did they stop at kissing? Or was there more? Nothing was said either way as the chapter progressed. If they're not to be a couple, I hope they stopped at kissing. I'm an old-fashioned romantic. I like the girl to be a virgin for the man she loves. [Masaru+Sango=Mates] Oh well, I can dream.

That was so - as my friend would say "Ca-rute". lol. Another form of cute. Ah as usual another sector to the emotional rollercoaster that is both Sango and Kagome. Lol. Yay go Inu.... Kiss the girl!
Um, do I detect a triangle for Sango... she's admiring someone. Ooh ooh *enter girlish squeal here* Masaru. I love that name.... I used that name.... It's such a cute name. So who exatly is this Tatsuo? i mean I know you're not gonna answer this question but does he personally know her grandma. It would be hella funny if he's actually her great grandpa, or uncle. Interesting.... so many possibilities. So happy for the update.

Oh and have you noticed it's now November? I think You know what I'm saying. If not then let me tell you. Please please do not push the due date for Like Silk back anymore. *puppy eyes* Thanks and laterz. B.R.A.T.

It just gets better with every chapter. And I just adore your lemons and any of your citrus. Please continue..I'm still on the edge of my seat.

HOLY SHIT THE RING!
Way cool. This won't be an ovely long review, but anyway here goes. No, I do not have any cats. It's just have a tendency to linger on things that seem important. though I do like cats, I prefer dogs. This chapter was nicely written. Do I detect a hook-up between Inu and Ayame? Poor Kouga. Yay Shippo! and I want to know all that Miroku knows because it seems to be a hell of a lot. Wow, fire... so that'll make Satori a fire inu youkai or hanyou, or something.... whatever it is she's going to be deals with fire. Interesting. Can't wait til Thursday. Good luck.

I do believe I am running out of words to praise u with! u continue to inspire with every finished chapter. I am honestly going to be sad when the last chapter is written. tilayha

Hey EP...I liked the last chapter. All the bickering and confusion is just such a normal occurance for our InuTachi but I give credit to Sesshoumaru for nor hurting everyone of them who stepped out of line. I know he loves Kagome alot if he can with hold his temper the way he did. Patience really is not one of his attributes.I think I like a pairing for InuYasha and Ayame. Like Kagome, Ayame speaks her own mind and is not one to push around for too long. She may have been going for Kouga because he was once kind to her and made a promise he didn't think she'd remember(heck, he didn't remember) but to persue a lost cause makes her look needy and if InuYasha and she had a mating their pups would be 3/4 youkai bearing the bloodline of two noble families. I don't hate Kouga but I think he is so juvenile at times. Pining over a girl that has on every encounter denied his persuit is pure stupidity. Hmmm, anyway,I just took my morning meds and they are beckoning for me to sleep. Morphine is a hard drug to fight and I wouldn't wish any of this one my worst enemy. Can't wait to get the dosage right. And yes, my friend, I am blessed to be able to lie in bed all day but honestly, after 8 yrs of this I'd gladly have my life back of being a wife, mother, homemaker and all the constant running and cleaning, doing the books,etc. I went from a overactive, life loving girl to this but my husband still adores me as I do him and my girl,PJ, well she is my give of laughter and unconditional love. I can't complain much, I may not be rich or even close but I have a rare and special love with my family. That's why I always try to encourage you all to do what makes you happy and if you have a talent, go for it. The internet is but a start, a learning ground and from there maybe one day you may be whatever your heart desires. I do and always will admire you. Much love JEN

Shippo, what a sweet boy, imitating Sesshoumaru. I loved it when he knocked Inuyasha on his arse. Inuyasha needs to be house broken. His manners are appalling. I am amazed at the control Sesshoumaru is able to exert upon himself. He can resist his mate, while he is in heat, and while she is teasing him by performing fellatio on a banana. EEKK! While I was correcting this review it got sent. That was not supposed to happen. So you will received 2 from me. Sorry.

That was a good chapter...but I do wonder what it is with Sesshoumaru calling Kagome Koko? Hmmmm, perhaps I missed something...well, anyways, I can't wit for the next chapter...I wish I could update as often as you do...sigh...

The pup is just telling you in his own way that he's still there *snicker* I understand though, dealing with my own flatulent pup last night...

Lady Koko makes a grand entrance *g*. A perfect compliment for Ruru, and that banana bit was priceless. I was waiting for it after you telling me about it.

Fire heritage, hmmm, sounds like it'll be interesting.

and I like the way you're portraying Ayame, not whiny at all. a little frigid, a lot hurt and defensive, but not whiny.

I haven't been reviewing very much lol. Anyway, I sense a dramatic showdown between Kagome and Ayame! Though the built up tension at the end was downplayed by Kagome's realization of whatever Akago was. I hope for a cat fight next update!!! This chapter was great. Keep it up!!!

This one, to me, makes me believe that they will truly be united for al ltime. The possesiveness shown by both and yet surrender as well. The cherries, showing that they are yet still new to each other and each discovery is revealing. He, wanting to reclaim what is rightfully his. Her wanting assurence that he still wants her. He, staking a claim, the focus on the mating mark, re-marking her, if you will. Her allowing his entry from behind and his domination of her, signaling her affirmation that she is his and none other shall have her. The blood, a reminder of what had almost been taken because of foolish pride.

It tears, and exhilerates and makes you want to have a love like that. Perfect.

Good grammer and spelling. Great story line...however, Sesshomaru only has one hand. You kept making him do something with one hand, and then another thing with the "other hand".

Ayame is getting attention from both Ginta and Inuyasha. That is nice to see. Of course she is clueless. Isn't is funny how you never notice the one who is interested in you and you end up wanting the one who is not interested in you. At least that is how it seemed years ago in high school.

WOW what an unexpected turn of events in ch 16. I can't wait to read the rest!

Ah dear lady, here is your review. I am currently in a car typing away somewhere deep in Muskoka. I don’t know where, my aunt is driving lol. I had opened the page to your story earlier in the day and minimized it so I could read it at some point on this drive. It was a good distraction to keep me from thinking about the need to find a rest stop somewhere. So, I shall type this review on MS Word and when I arrive at home I will copy and paste it onto the review page for you to see :)

So I adored this chapter, it was like a collection of little moments that may not seem like much, but I’m sure means so much more to the characters involved. Poor 75 year old Bob sitting next to me in the car, I had to turn my computer screen away from him during the hotter scenes, and they were fantabulous. Hot, and very sensual, I enjoy the more sensual lemons than graphic, they add a certain je ne sais quoi to the story.

I was very glad to see the four aspects of the jewel involved here too, I think too many people overlook them and they are a key element of the jewel…now I’m guilty of that as well, but then I’m not focusing on the shikon jewel at all in any fic. It adds a whole new layer of depth to the story.

I think Kouga is being a stubborn idiot, but it takes him nearly being killed to learn his lesson, then so be it. And as for Ayame, I love how you made her cold when she thought of Kagome. Again, a lot of people writer her as being pouty and whiny, and I don’t think she’s that.

And the myriad of characters involved in this, simply wonderful.

Now, unfortunately my distraction is up. Excellent job as usual my friend. I am loving this story to bits. And you can feel special as I believe this is the first traveling review I’ve ever given lol.

"No... She didn't! Not her! Ivy! Convince her not to do it!!"

"Inuyasha, SIT!!!" I smile wickedly and crouch beside him, petting his ears while his face is still planted firmly into my rug. "EP knows what she's doing. Don't fret. We have faith in her."

"Mu af layth en er..."

"What was that?" I ask as he pushes his head enough that his words are not muffled.

"I said that you have faith in her." He tries to bat my hand away and fails.

"Yes. I do. And you have faith in me, right?" I bat my long lashes at him and watch his ears flatten, giggling when he growls.

"That isn't fair giving my the puppy eyes."

"And it's fair when you give them to me?"

He growls again and sits up, gathering me into an embrace. "I guess I can handle it."

"Good boy."

"You're pushing it, Ivy."

I kiss his cheek, he turns red and looks away. Again, I have won.

~
I love so much of what you've done in this chapter!!! Oh, poor, POOR Kouga. He deserves it, but I still feel badly for him. The warmth in Miroku and Sango's scenes is beautiful and tangible as well as in Sess and Kag's, as always. Aside from the Puppy-boy's protests, please, PLEASE continue with your plans, they are by far entertaining and, if you are doing what I think you are doing, they will work out well. You know, oddly, that's a pairing that, though I've railed against, might work out very well... They both just need to grow up and, from the looks of things, they have. Or... Are.
Peace and huggles.
~Ivy

Hi there, my friend. Glad you were able to post a new chapter. Praying that all is going well in your real life. Sometimes life just gets so full and complicated and you must put priorities first. I am in transition with new meds and the first ones I was dreadfully allergic to and wasn't even able to get online for several long days but now we're trying a new one a little more slowly and I'm able to tolerate them so I am back on again. I was so happy to see our characters are getting closer to the conference and the disclosure of why Kouga was abducted. I'm wondering why it was so important to Naraku to have Kouga witness what he did to Kagome. I liked how Sesshoumaru decided to make his brother wait on him and he took more "private" time with Kagome. And it's good to see Miroku and Sango enjoying each other without him being slapped for once. Now all we need is for Inuyasha to get a girl before the story ends. Or maybe before the battle begins because he fights harder when he has someone to protect. I just can't tell you enough how happy I am with this fic. You just seem to have every base covered that keeps a reader interested. It's all balancing out perfectly from my perspective and you will no doubt be up for awards on this. Well gotta go say goodnight to my husband, he's off to work after spwnding 2 weeks monitoring my reactions to my new meds. Love ya!!! Jen

I love your quotes :) I like how you are developing Jaken's character and his relationship with Kagome. Poor thing needs a friend *giggles*

In the last chapter, I noticed you spelled flea as in Myoga as flee...two different meanings and spelling of the word, my friend *smiles* Just a minor error.

Could Yasha be looking at Ayami a little differently now it seems? Will Kouga end up losing Ayami to Yasha? Interesting concept, I think.

Nice chapters (had to read 23 & 24 to catch up). As usual, I can hardly wait for next installments.

*hugs and smiles forever*

almost all the players are gathered. my anticipation grows almost painful!! you have blessed us with insight into what is to come without giving much away. truly pulling my hair out here!! lol
tilayha

I enjoyed the interaction between the characters. The flunctuation seemed to built anticipation for the next chapter.

Having Ayame and Inuyasha together-hmmm? I think they'd make a good couple, if that it what you intend to do with them.

(P.S. I've gotten your email, but mine has been weird about replies. I'm working on reuploading the program to clean it out.)

Ooohhh! You are EVIL! In the nicest way, of course! So when do we learn about Koga and his capture? Did he make a deal with Naraku to get Kagome, or not? Inquiring minds want to know. Now, Akago -- isn't that the person/place that holds Naraku's heart? Or is thhere more to the story? I love this story, and can't wait for the next update -- please make it this upcoming sweekend! No more two weeks between updates (although I can't really bitch considering my horrible reviewing record). I assure you I do read every chapter, but I just don't review every chapter. Anyway, excellent story. . .please update soon. My email is Deborah_Lemieux5@msn.com

Oooh Oooh... Lookie, Kirara's back!
Where exactly has she been?

Anywayz on with the review.

Awesome chapter. I just don't see how you do it? It's so thought out. Well planned. All make sense (mostly in due time). All the details are awesome and make sense (sometimes in due time as well). Man I wish I had that gift. Whatever comes to my mind is what I write. Still I love it and am happy that you started it. Kagome's a slickster and is in big trouble when Sesshomaru gets her alone... and don't have to meet and talk with everyone. Lol. Though her punishments always seem fun. I'm loving the Sango/Miroku moments. Finally, talking without violence. So now Ayamme and Ginta is in the picture. Hm... interesting. What's going to happen. Ayamme really needs to use her nose and she that Kagome doesn't want Kouga. She has bigger and better things. Lol. And Kouga... *sighs* Kouga, Kouga, Kouga.... *shakes head in sympathy as a loud bell ring and a random person shouts:* "Dead man walking!!" Cause that's what he'll be if he keeps oogling Kagome. Wow, Shippo's life was almost in danger... over a hug. I like Totosai the senile old coot. He's a hilarious character. I still can't get over the fact Satori's not even born and has a sword already. I mean who's really going to be using this sword? Kagome, while she is carrying Satori? Or... Satori herself? Which by the way I don't really see happening anytime soon because she's still in the belly and I don't think an infant can weild a sword. This will be most interesting to see/read.

I cannot wait until your next chapter and Like Silk, but as usual I have no choice in the matter. This concludes my review it's two thirty-something in the morning and I am sleepy. May the rest of your weekend as well as the week be good to you. Until next time...

--B.R.A.T.

This story is wonderful and I believe one of the best I have read this year. Some of the newer ff writers write just to put words down which is a disappointment to me but I love your stories. So please continue I look forward to reading them.

Alicia

wow! you still amaze me with your ability to entice then trap a reader within your very talented imagination. it is truly a wonderful place to be. I really enjoyed naraku getting part of what he's got coming. will be patently waiting for the next chapter as I measure out my cuts for my first attempt at making an ikebana vase!! tilayha

Your story is really well thought out, and most interesting. I do have a question, however, about your choice of colour for Sesshoumaru's hair. You keep referring to his hair as being 'flaxen', however, his hair is described by Takahashi as silver. Is there a reason why you have changed his hair colour? Flaxen in the dictionary is definted as follows:
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flax·en (flksn)
adj.
1. Made of or resembling flax.
2. Having the pale grayish-yellow color of flax fiber: flaxen braids.
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I have never seen Sesshoumaru's hair depicted or described as being that colour, and just wondered at your choice.

Jus 2 let u kno ur story iz 1 of my favoritez i luv everything ur an awesome writer and da lemony goodness iz always soooo how do i put it?! Delicious!!! Itz awesome how u can keep Sess mostly IC n capture hiz luz 4 Kagome 2 n Kagome kicks azz 2 thank god u didnt make her all wimpy lol plez keep it up n update az much az possible

Yet another wonderful insight into the working relationship between a Taiyoukai and his mate.

I'm glad you had Kagome realize that she needed to concentrate, even if Sesshoumaru still has a bit of bending to go. Then again, your character certainly seems to enjoy the rebellious nature of his mate...LOL Especially when she choose to dominate him in bed!

Poor Kikyou, it seems that in her lifetime and in death, she is doomed to fail at many things. Alas, could the feather that is of so much importance be from Kagura, I mean she does ride around on a giant one and how else would she be aware of it? *Squeals* Aww I adore it when Sesshoumaru gets all lovey dovey, I mean he has to let up sometimes, and when he does, who better to 'do it' with then Kagome? So much information to process in this chapter, and very good job on the conversation piece about Kagome's heritage. I can't wait for the next chapter, it will no doubt be amazing.

Very interesting indeed. I did enjoy this latest chapter and I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what Kagome is, what spirit is joining with Sess, and just what beings did Kouga sense with Kagome. Very interesting stuff, and I guess I can't really proclaim you as being evil this week. Maybe next time. :) I'm looking forward to next week!

Great chapter as always. I just got my laptop back from BestBuy's Geek Squad. It was nearly gone for 4 weeks. I am now pleased as a pig in mud back in my bed with the ability to lay comfortably and thoroughly enjoy what I read. Thank you for always being so kind to me. I am so happy that you will be putting your new fic out this week and I'll be waiting to read the confab InuYasha interrupted Sessh and Kagome's alone time for. Hugs, JEN

Wow. I knew the talisman was important, but wow... two of them for different purposes? That's deep. Few quotes I thought were funny/hilarious *ahem*:

Before the Western Lord could retort in kind about bitches and their uses, preferable silent, barefooted and pregnant.

--Haha, where does barefooted come from! That made me laugh. Hm, pregnant... that comes with more moodswings. He must like that.

“The honeymoon is over. Get your asses to the library pronto, and don’t pretend you’re doin’ anything either. I CAN TELL you’re not,”

--Such an Inuyasha thing to do. Funny as hell.

“Allow me to kill him miko, this Sesshoumaru will make it virtually painless,”

--Such a Sesshomaru thing to say. I loved it!

I call this the Questions I Know You're Not Going to Answer segment of the review:

(1.) What's up with the two staffs? I see they're linked in some kind of way... but what way exactly?

(2.) How does Kagura know about the feather? What's up with that? She still giving me that hot/cold vibe.

(3.) Am I the only one who noticed Kirara is missing?

Love the chapter... duh. Ta ta til next weekend-ish.

Teeheeheehee.... Teeheeheehee.... Puppy-boy, Teeheeheehee....
Ok, sorry. Inuyasha isn't running off and being an idiot. Yay, he's grown! Maybe... Teeheeheehee.... Sorry, I just can see him at the door, Kouga slung over his shoulder, with this stupid grin on his face, knowing he's causing his big brother annoyance.
The chapter, as always, is wonderful. We're just learning more and more about our little group and what fate has dealt them and that rocks. I love the dynamic that's developing between our dear Sess and Kagome. They are so beautiful together in this chapter and very grown up as well as playful. I just love the whole thing with my beloved 'Yasha.
Another chapter I just read and smiled through in utter delight.
One request, though? And you don't haveta... Cause it's your story and I rarely ask authors, but maybe a consideration? Let Inuyasha find happiness? I mean... Real happiness without Kikyo because she... It isn't that I hate her... (Really, that isn't the reason I am against them being together. I SWEAR IT!) It's that she does no good for him and, really, could she ever be the Kikyo he fell in love with if Kagome (The mammoth part of her soul.) is still alive?
Ok, I'm done with my silliness. I'm just so engrossed with this story. Makes me the happy Ivy.
Peace and be well!
~Ivy.

With every chapter read it gets better and better..though you also provide more questions for all of us to ask. What do you have up that sleeve of yours?
Whatever the outcome, continue..I enjoy your work immensely. ^__^

*snort* the whole end of this chapter just had me in hysterics. Poor Inuyasha, poor Kagome, poor Sess.

Brilliant as usual

kagome is so kick ass, i love it! strong female characters make me pump my fist into the air and shout 'yeeaahh!' haha. and poor kouga, man, i feel for him very much right now. can't wait to read more so continue soon!
-hasu86

I have come to the conclusion that you are evil. Brilliant, but evil. Now I have to wait a whole week for the next chapter to see what's going on.
Great job, as usual. :)

I cried when kikyou made her realization. thanks for that.8) I was right about shou!!! I knew there was something not right with him. the closer it comes to ending the more I wish it will continue!!! tilayha

Very interesting turn of events. Someone is going to get his ass kicked and soon I hope *giggles* I hope Kagura and Kikyou & Kohaku make it out alive. I feel sorry for them *sniffles*

Another excellent chapter...looking forward to more installments from my favourite author and her story.
*many smiles and hugs*

It was perfectly logical for Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha to think that Kagome had just wandered off for a walk. It was amusing to think Sesshoumaru was going to train his bitch to behave appropriately. Good luck on that one. I'm glad Jaken is loyal to Kagome on some level as she has tried to be nice to him. As for the servants who were ripped to shreds, wow, I really liked that part. Yes I'm sick and twisted and I like violence in stories. It was a good idea to have Jaken involved in containing (temporarily) Sesshoumaru with Kaedae and Miroku. Kagome's brief hostage situation at Naraku's brought quite a few surprises. Naraku enjoys fire in his bitch while rutting, he discovers Kagome is more powerful since her mating with Sesshoumaru, she is not carrying the shards, Naraku has offed Kan'na, Kikyou is willing to sacrifice her life if necessary to defeat Naraku and takes Kagome's place, Kagura is waiting for a chance to turn on Naraku, Naraku is back to a bunch of demon parts after Kagome's attack. You have been very busy. I don't know what you have planned for Sesshoumaru with him going off the deep end. I am assuming that he will calm down now that Kagome is back. I am eager to find out what happens next. What will happen when he sees what Kagome is wearing and finds out that Kouga has seen her dressed that way?

I Bet Sesshomaru Felt Like A Complete And Total Jackass Once He Realized That Kagome Wasn't Defying Him But Reali Had Been Kidnapped ... Aw I Like The Sango Miroku Fluff Even If It Only Lasted A Few Seconds ... Aw Kikyo Is Gone!!! Jus When I Was Starting To Like Her. Well I Hope Next Chapter Sesshomaru Will Be Calm And Kouga Will Be Coherent We Need To Know What All Happened ... Update Date Soon!!!

So the knock out drug that Kanna used made Kagome think it was Sesshy between her legs? Interesting stuff! And Sesshy dismembered Shou and Megumi because they knew that Kagome was missing? That doesn't make sense. They didn't help Kanna did they? Anyway, glad she is back and Koga too. I've got to wonder what you have up your sleeve next!

Cheers!

Pitchforks? I gots no pitchfork!!!!
I was enthralled, my dear EP, and I am sorry for not posting a reply in a while. I have been... For lack of a better term, out of touch for a while. I have been reading and writing, but everything is working very, very slowly. I wanted to tell you that I loved this chapter, especially the end. I got caught up in the imagery in the last scene and almost cried for Kagome and Sesshomaru... Then I started to yell at my dear, beloved, brash puppy-boy. What is he thinking going after Naraku alone? They need to work together, damnit! And I know he's going to get there, see Kikyo fall, and lose it and then I will cry because he should not die because of her. *sigh* In any case, wonderful chapter and I am eagerly awaiting "Like Silk." Over eagerly, actually.
Peace.
~Ivy

AHA! I knew Shou was up to something, okay well maybe I read all the suspicious reviews others left, and just kinda went along with them BUT it's all the same. Ironic isn't it? The icy youkai lord once renound for his stoic ness is now an emotional mess, while Kagome on the other hand remained strong. That's pretty unusual as in most stories Sesshoumaru is the hero and Kagome is a bit of a blubbering ninny. So yay! An empowering story for females. Once again an amazing chapter, you find a way to incorperate everything and everyone into you're story. Everything mentioned eventually comes back and bites an unexpected reader in the ass. I like it, it keeps me on my toes. I enjoy you're portrayal of Kikyou, she's not a complete monster, and I believe she deserves redemption, we can't control our fate, but we can cope with it, make the best out of everything, after all life is what you make of it. (just thought I'd throw some profound deep character soul delving back at you) LOL. Anyways, I'm off to read Like Silk now, so tootles!

Wow awesome chapter. So Shou did have something to do with it? And Megumi too? Whoa... who woulda thought? Aww poor Kanna. He killed her? I don't know why but out of all Naraku's incarnations I love Musou, Kanna, and Hakudoshi (for a kid he's so cute... and evil) lol. Kikyo just popped out of nowhere. Where has she been? Ooh ooh and Kagura still her to read her most of the time and you got her down perfectly. One minute she's hot the next she's cold.

Naraku's a jerk. Poor Kouga... it makes me wanna cry. Inuyasha's so brotherly now. It's so cute. Dang Sess really got mad... well I don't think that's the word for it... more like ragefully-pissed. Not really a word, but it gets the point across.

Aww that last scene has group hug written all over it... lol... just after Sess has calmed down a bit... ok a lot and i still dont think he'll let anyone but Kagome and Rin hug him. For that cliff hanger pitchfork is sharpened and the torch is lit... I know I can't ask for you to update soon so I hope the week would pass just as quick as this one did. Great job! --B.R.A.T.

"Never did the hanyou think, he would be counseling Lord Frigid Drawers on how to be a proper mate."

Lol, I was thinking just that just before that line popped up. Methinks Sesshoumaru still has some growing to do.

As for the ending...three words

Sharp, pointy objects

...like a feather

That was NOT very nice! I must have more! lol! Just joking...I am not a blood-thirsty reader...yet...as I've lived through worse! This story is awesome though! Plz update soon! :P

Whew! I finally caught up! Kagome, being so mean and making Sesshoumaru worry. It's bad enough is animalistic side left, then she teases him! For shame...

And they are now back in Sengoku Jidai! Yay for them! And cute little welcoming. I like how Rin also said 'Hi' to Satori. So sweet!

Kagome is just screwing up left and right in this chapter. First, at the beginning, and then defying him in the face of his servants. Wow, she is going to be punished so bad!

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Any way, great updates, all of them. I love this story, it is so well written and flows very nicely.

I can't wait for your next story to be posted!

Please update when you can!

Ta ta!

--Ashley

Awwh! What a nice chapter!

Hmm. But it now has me thinking about Kagome's family. What an interesting bunch indeed. Very...interesting.

...

Any way, wicked awesome chapter! Abso-tivley loved it! Wow, can someone say mood swings? Haha. Advantage to being a pregnant woman: you aren't the one on the receiving end of all the hormonal craziness.

Wanna know something interesting? Two teachers at my school were pregnant. My one teacher is on maternity leave; she had her baby in August.

My other teacher had her baby on...Tuesday the 18th, I believe. And he was 6 weeks premature. Although, he is very healthy for 6 weeks early.

I want my sister to have a baby, but the only answer I got from her was, "Ashley, fuck off! I'm only 18!"

[rolls eyes]

I just want her to have a baby so I can play with it!

Oh well, maybe someday...soon.

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Moving along. Great chapter! You really rock! Now, I shall read your last update...then go back to doing homework. [mutters]

Ta ta!

--Ashley

Awwh! Sesshoumaru blushed! Wow, that is most really saying something, yes? I would pay good money to actually see that. I, personally, find it very amusing when a man blushes. Ha! And every body thinks men are the only ones that think randy thoughts. Pfft!

Great chapter. I love the little bantering between Kagome and Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Wow, Sesshoumaru and Kagome are very...affectionate with each other, aren't they? Haha.

Sorry to cut this one short, but I want to read the other chapters before I go back to work. See you next chapter!

Ta ta!

--Ashley

I'm so sorry that I haven't read your story in ages! Argh! But I'm stealing a couple of hours away from doing homework [stupid homework] and reading your updates and hopefully finish writing my brand spankin' new chapter for Apples and Cinnamon. [Yay]

I love this story. The lemons are always so good. Poor Sesshoumaru, lost his beast. That must suck. I imagine it must feel like losing your invisible, imaginary friend. That must suck.

I think it is a very cool idea that Sesshoumaru has a green thumb. It's like one of those things that you don't expect of people. Like...having a gothic girl's bedroom filled with pink fluffiness. Yah, that was a bad example, but you get the point.

I have a green thumb, too! A friend of mine, though...well...let's just say she is nicknamed 'The Plant Killer' for a reason.

Two years ago, in Grade 10 Horticulture, we had to plant peanuts in horticulture, and observe the different stages of growth. Everyone's plants had sprouts coming out, and leaves, while my friends didn't grow...at all. For the entire semester, her pot did not have a speck of green in it. Yah, it was pretty funny.

Any way, I'm going to go read the next couple of chapters!

Ta ta!

--Ashley

gah! i finally had the time to do some reading and aiya!! nooooo, kaagooomeee!!! damn naraku and his nefarious plots! can't wait to read more so continue soon! oh and your next story seems fun, loved the summary! i'm looking forward to reading the first chapter of 'Like Silk' soon!
-hasu86

ooooo, i wouldnt want to be in the castle when Sesshoumaru realizes Kagome is gone.

you sould have let Inuyasha kill the old servent when he had the chance......he would have been much nicer than Sesshoumaru will be.....

lets hope kouga can keep himself together long enough to not hurt Kagome.

i am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
tilayha

::hee::hee...::chuckle::chuckle:: Keep it coming EP!

OMG!
That's such a mean cliff hanger!

Please let Kagome be ok, and totally kick Naraku's ass!

~Sandreline

Hey EP. Thanks for asking about my laptop. Seems the modem needs replacing and a few other things seeing as all the components are directly attached to the motherboard. If there is a problem involving the MB and you don't have insurance on it, it's a lost cause. MB's cost more than a new laptop. Ah, but it's insured and I have another 2 weeks where I have to share my girl, PJ's desktop. I have the convenience easing my pain by reading in bed but laptop's are such iffy things. I can't live without my fanfics now that I'm addicted so my loving husband is considering getting a spare just in case this happens again. Now, on with the fic. This is where the "stuff" hits the fan now right? I'm looking forward to that. And isn't it admirable that Naraku wishes to bathe and change clothes for Kagome's arrival? Hmmm, that thought just creeps me out for some reason. And he's got Kouga there to unbalance the brothers when he puts Kouga and Kagome together, right? Whatever your plans, keep me confused. It's no fun being able to figure things out too fast. So far you're pretty unpredictable...I like that. Hugs back. JEN

Wow/ This story is great. I'm not ashamed to say it ( at the risk of taking a blow to my verbal knowledge) but there were a handful of words I had to stop the story for to look up in the dictionary so that I could understand what the sentence was saying and it would be like two minutes later when I would start laughing because I didn't know what the word meant but thin found out and putting it together with the sentence would be hilarious. All in all, YOU JUST GOTTA WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Punishment? Is that what it is called these days? What a great time they seem to be having during their "mating." Back in the Western Lands, poor Inuyasha gets told off by a juvenile youkai and a juvenile human. I can't figure out what is going on with Sango. Did I miss something? Perhaps I should re-read a few chapters back. Kagome is only home a nanosecond and she is already being kidnapped (slight exaggeration on my part). I can't figure out why Kouga was kidnapped. Why not just take his shards and be done with it? At least Naraku is going to bathe and change his clothes before he sees Kagome, that is so thoughtful. The plot is getting deeper with each chapter. I must know what happens next.

Excellent chapter. I have two guesses as to who placed the cloth over Kag's face. She was still in the stooping position when she was snagged so I think it could either be Shou or Kan'na. Why couldn't Sess pick up the scent of someone in the shadows if his nose is supposed to be superior?...unless the person masked their scent but even Kags should have been able to pick up an aura, hmm...quite the mystery.

I enjoyed your snippets of quotes in between scenes...nice touch.

*hugs and smiles*

Everything is certainly setting up for a massive action scene.

The players working behind the scenes have been made, though I do wonder at their gullibility. Come on, do they really think Naraku is just going to let them go their merry way?

Such is the nature of idiots. LOL

I always enjoy your lemon scenes, so of course I liked that part of it. Sensual and 'real.' Along with the problems they are having adjusting. Sesshoumaru acknowledged that Kagome is made by her time, but also knows that she'll have to adjust. Personally, in that she is pretty much allowed to say anything she wants to him and isn't beheaded, he's done a lot of compromise already. It's Kagome's turn to learn some etiquette of his life.

Of course, she'll have to get rescued before she can undertake that task, of course. LOL

OMG! No way! Kagome got kidnapped! Sesshoumaru must save her and the pup in her womb! OMG! I can't stop putting exclamation marks at the end of every sentence!

You know, in the series, most of InuYasha's suspitions are not always incorrect. He may not be a full demon but his nose and years of being left on his own to fend for his own life has given him some knowledge, insight and gut instinct in which to follow. It just often annoys him that no one believes him or he doesn't have the carte blanche from Sesshoumaru to do as he saw fit in his absence. I have had feelings about the old character called Shou since the beginning. If he has indeed been in Sesshoumaru's employ for so many years he should not be so jumpy. Once one knows their masters habits and such they should have no problem working around his moods and such. And when the master is away why is he in the masters chambers when his services are not required there? I'm betting he's the one who drugged Kagome and he's knows that if he screws up he'll die a horrid death by Sesshoumaru but little does he realize that Naraku never allows his "defecting helpers" to live once their usefulness wears out. Leave no witnesses, as they say. Great going, EP. HUGS...Jen

haha, that was a nice chapter, but why did you end it like that? I was on the edge of my seat!

Poor Kouga, Poor Inuyasha, Poor everyone... I bet it was that Shou character that put the cloth over Kagome's face.

Sesshomaru and Kagome should have had this little talk of what she shouldn't do before they came back. That way she could avoid his attitude and he could avoid "the finger" lol, but maybe he likes that. The two of them sure are entertaining.

Yes, it seems he has completely forgotten about the talisman and is still wearing it. Interesting.

Where's Kikyo? What's Naraku's plan? and What is that sneaky little wind demoness up to? I swear it's not safe for anyone to trust her. Of course I don't exect you to answer any of these questions, so I continue to wait for new chapters each weekend.

It's quite funny I didn't realize the weekend came so fast, I was too excited about the Resident Evil Movie coming out. Great Update!

I still don't like this red screen but...
So did the kidnapper place the cloth over her mouth before or after Kagome stood up? Before it could be Shou after...Is it someone we know or a new character, one of the many staff.
I wouldn't mind being 'punished' as Sesshy did Kagome! Ooooooh, how do I get him to 'punish' me. Although my heart still belongs to Inu., a tongue bath is never to be refused!
Cheers!

Neko-sama

That Was A Rather Interesting Chapter ... Kouga Has Been Captured ... Kagura Is Some Obeying And Sesshomaru Played With Souta ... Gah Too Many New Things ... Well Kagome Has Been Knocked Out Hmm I Wonder By Who ... Anyways I Loved The Chapter I Realli Like The Winnie The Pooh Quotes ... SOO CUTE!!! Well Thats About It Until Next Update Bye Bye!

Oh Crap. Thats definitely not good. How long has Koga been down there, by the way? And what were you quoting? I didn't, unfortunately, recognize it. I'm guessing Fluffykins is going to be a tad unhappy when he finds out that his miko's gone missing. I can hear the screams...

As always, another wonderful chapter!!

I can not wait to read more ^_^

You left it there....EVIL!!!

“This Sesshoumaru desires his bitch to sate his thirst," - Now, how many of wish we had our own private Sesshoumaru to say that to us....

Excellent as usual!

Right now as I type this I suffer for you. I've just been done with an assignment that my idiot of a professor demanded, as he told us to be VERY detailed and long-winded. So, imagine my surprise when I hand it in and he says "I asked for a paper not a novel." Although I do admit the look on some of the students was priceless, long hours toiling in front of a computer wasted. Luckily he accepted them all, but my hand is completely numb, it feels like I've been sitting on it for a few hours but I couldn't resist typing a review, a long one to make up for my absence.

I've missed so much that I'm ashamed of myself, but alas real life gets in the way, no matter how much I wish I could frolic in the world of fandom forevermore, but frolic I will for now and what better story then yours to divulge myself in!

You write about Inuyasha perfectly, have I mentioned that? I mean he's the brash lovable, borderline insufferable hanyou that I adore. The way you capture how relationships progress with the brothers, and also earlier between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is wonderful. Nothing is instant, everything is slow, evolving, ever changing , like real life. Nothing is constant after all. You keep Sesshoumaru as he should be slightly aloof, but not overly so, as I CANNOT imagine Kagome ever being very happy with that. I mean she doesn't like Kouga's cockiness after all, buuut Sesshoumaru does pull it off much better.

May I add that little bit of citrus in there? Un-freakin' believable. Now I know they're really 'warming up' to each other or should I say 'loosening up' so to speak *Giggle*. The way Kagome allows him to dominate her seems so...personal, well obviously but I mean it on another level too. Kagome is always the fiery spirited miko, so to allow herself to be conquered seems like a big step up, like she’s putting herself in Sesshoumaru's hands completely.

Chapter 20 was completely touching, and I must admit I shed a couple tears, and then laughed my ass off at the horse comparison of course. Sesshoumaru would settle for nothing less then his mate Kagome, and tank god for that.

I'm glad you're starting to add even more of the other characters and let them participate, while always managing to keep the spotlight where it belongs. On RuRu of course!

Well, I suppose I shouldn't take up ALL the room on you're review page so I'll end it here. ElegantPaws you are a literary genius, and I worship the ground you walk on. . Goodbye and good riddance for now I’ve got to get to sleep! P.S Sorry if this posts twice, my internet is on the fritz.

don't you love hormones. there are so many things you can do with them. you have the crying thing to the all out bitch on the war path. i love this story.

your words continue to inspire me!
my question is......could the jumpy servant be the spy????? i remember why he became so jumpy but was it due to him really being a clutz, the fact that he is not finished with the task that Naraku has set before him OR is he faking all together and is using the scaredy cat routine as cover so they dont pay too much attention to him???
i am very, very happy that Rin is free of Kan'na's mirror. Evil, rotten hanyou.......lol
lastly, i am very excited that the conclusion is coming but not excited because the story has to end......you my dear are a genuine delight to us all!!
Tilayha :)

Just wanted to let you know that this is a really interesting story! I am eager to be strewn into the coming storm, and await your progress. Great job with the story, and I send you writer's luck! ^_^

I hope to see the next chater soon. Lovely story!

This really struck me as weird!! My AP World History just gave a paper on the Tao of Pooh!! I thought it was really cool how you put that in the story!! We just finished studying the Daoism, Buddaism, and Confucianism!! It was all rather fascinating, but I just loved Daoism or "The Way"!! When he read the Tao of Pooh to us, I loved it!! Well as always, an awesome update!! Keep up the great work and update soon!!

It was touch and go there many, many times. Kagome is in major hormone mode. Yikes! Poor Sesshoumaru. On the other hand, it was pretty funny when he kept saying the wrong thing, like about his right to have concubines, even though he said that he would not.

Oh my gosh, I love the voice in your writing. I've been meaning to tell you for a while. This story of yours was one of the first fanfics I read on this site. I seriously laugh my ass off. It's mah kind of humor. GREAT JOB!

Yay! I Finally Caught Up On My Reading!!! So The Past 2 Chapters Have Been Very Hormonal ... Kagome Is Going Through The Works! Inuyasha And Sesshomaru's Little Time Together Was Well Done ... Hmmm NarakuI Is Up To No Good And Kohaku Is Getting His Memories Back! Yay! Well I Can't Wait To Read More Until Next Time Bye Bye!!!

Ok, first off I would like to say, I so knew Kags dad was demon/hanyou... guessed it at least. Next I had a feeling mom was connected to Midoriko some kind of way. At some points I even thought she was Midoriko's incarnate.

I'm with Inuyasha... I don't trust Shou either. I believe he's in with Naraku. Aw, they got married. Man, I knever thought Sess would be the type to say the wrong things at the wrong time. Then again he's a male... they tend to do that. Poor Jaken... he's so "excited" he passed out lol.

Gotta love gramps... scratches himself inappropriately, haha.

as you said, a relatively peaceful chapter, besides kagome getting all emotional and gramps almost getting decapitated, hehe. and oh no, Kouga!! aiya, i'm definitely anticipating the next chapter! continue soon!
-hasu86

Took me forever and a day to load this chapter...A Single Spark is being a pain and even though it says you have 23 chapters, it didn't load past 21 :( But I got it :)

Ah pregnancy horomones. This chapter had me lmao almost the entire time. Sesshoumaru better watch that mouth of his

awwww, what a cute ending to the chapter! and it seems naraku's on the warpath, just what are they planning??
i noticed kagome's mother was more....well, motherish, seemed more down to earth and less of the bearer of important information in this chapter. i like her like that.
great chapter and yes, my ever hentai eyes soaked up that little lemon like my life depended on it. haha, keeps my inner smut lover happy. looking forward to the next chapter so continue soon!
-hasu86

OMG I LURVED THIS CHAPTER!!!! **swoons** Crap.... Yeah it rocked big time. **gives a cookie then growls as her muse steals the cookie** BAD INU!!! **blushes** Sorry laterz

Luvins
The Adorable Neko

Hey Girl, sorry it took so long to get to reading this. My laptop, only 5 mos. old, spends more time in the repair shop than on my lap where I would be a happy gal reading my "smut" as my daughter puts it. Hey, she started me reading fanfics so she's got no room to talk. I just happen to be more intellectually stimulted with mature literature...yeah, right...I just love the sex!!! And speaking of such, the last few chapters were totally hot by the way. You have got sensual and passionate sex down to a T. I'm quite proud of you. For your first fic to come out with such phenomenial writing is a rarity. Did you know you could write so well and were hiding that talent? Anyway, I'm glad you have given us the privilege of your talents. I just love your diligence in trying to please everyone with notice on updates and delays. It's nice to know you are well, just working hard to make a living but still caring enough to let us know. You are quite a prize. So, just wanted to let you know how particularly wonderful the updates were and I hope to have my laptop back before your next post. Sharing PJ's desktop is excruciatingly painful for my back but I must have my fanfiction even if it's only in small doses. Lots of love, JEN

aww they are getting along

I actually read this yesterday but website would not allow me to post a review...it was acting kind of funky and useless. Anyway, I can't remember what I originally wrote but it was an excellent chapter as always. Very involved and I liked the interaction between the brothers. I also like how you characterised the grandfather. He is very wise and all knowing *winks* Kag's hormones must be kicking in *LOL*

Wonderful story...can't wait until next installment update soon. *hugs and smiles*

aweee, that was a great chapter!

It looks like Kagura got caught playing both sides of the fence and now has a "cunning plan." (I love that quote from Blackadder.) I can not figure out how she will scrape her way out of this one unless Rin is abducted again and held hostage in exchange for the remaining shards. With Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru and Kagome all still away it seems like a good time for evil to strike. As far as evil guys go, I really think Naraku has a lot going for him. He always has someone else do his dirty work for him and he does sit back and spins his plans and evil machinations. He does get a bit carried away with toying with people he could just kill and get them out of his way. However, I think that his true enjoyment in life is toying/torturing people causing them physical and emotional pain. And he loves to watch it all unfold. That is it, he is a voyeur. I imagine all hell will break loose when everyone returns.

why did inuyasha call kags mom, mom??? some secret meaning behind it or it because noe they are famili or a mistake?

THIS WAS AWESOME! But really what more can I expect from you other than greatness. It took me all day to read this chapter. I was so exhausted and was fighting sleep trying to keep my eyes open, but then I realized I had read the first sentence over for like ten times straight and decided to just wait until later. Haha, but I finally finished it and it rocked!

Cool Satori's got her own sword. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are so funny together... in their own strange little way. Sesshomaru is going to have his hands full with Kagome's temper. Can't wait to find out what Sango learned. 'Til next weekened... I'll be waiting.

This seems like the calm before the storm. Sango's realizations will come in handy, though I wonder about Kagura's new plan.

I still don't much care for Mama Higurashi. I'm just odd like that, though, so don't mind me. Kagome and Inuyasha had an 'awww' moment, and Sesshoumaru didn't rip his head off. Yeah!

I can't even figure out how to say what I want to say lol. I enjoyed this chapter. The formal tone with the blood scene, The companionship between Sesshoumuru and Inuyasha - you managed to keep them from fighting, yet keep them both in character, the companionship with Inuyasha and Kagome was bang on and of course, the sex was just hot. I love how you were able to mix it up all so well.

I was grinning through this chapter simply because I am in love with the way you are writing the relationship between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. (You know I have a fondness for the puppy-boy... Yeah, that's a way to put it.) Makes me grin and giggle to see 'Yasha in good form. (Yes, that was good form! He was being a good puppy-boy!)
Peace! And thank you, EP!
~Ivy

Wow, you packed a lot into that chapter. You are tying everything together nicely. You are also red hot on the love scenes and the interaction of the characters is fantastic. I am puzzled as to what happened to Sesshoumaru's beast. I thought "he" was quite pleased with how things were progressing. I will take a guess and say that the feelings Sesshoumaru is experiencing are possible silencing the beast. However, it almost sounded like his beast is gone. Well, I will wait to find out.

apologies dearest on being MIA for such a long time! i moved back to school (yes, that's my excuse!!) and have been totally swamped with everything!! summer maid is being a snarky bitch right now, which is why i haven't updated that. but i'm sure i'll get hit with something soon enough, at least i hope. anyway, very informative chap, and yes, i loved the very delectable lemon in the beginning, excellent job with that! favorite line, "Lick me bitch, take this Sesshoumaru between your lips gently." haha, had me giggling. and what happened to his beast?? did i miss something? goodness, so much is happening! can't wait to read more, continue soon!!
-hasu86

Noooooo! ;_; How could this be the end?!?!

can't wait till the next chapter

I really like this fanfic, you have so many origional ideas!

First of all..wow. Second of all, now I have a headache. I've been following this story for quite some time and now that it has reached its temporary ending..I am confused as to what everything means, yet excited to read more about what happens. I was a little perturbed that what happened to Rin was so easily dismissed nd why was InuYasha still saying she was in danger if she wasn't anymore?
Oi..I'm gunna take a nap. Until next time..

What a chapter! By far the greatest amount of information every pieced neatly into a literary tapestry. I can't wait for the next chapter though I fear more questions will arise from the questions that are answered. The suspense is breath taking. I look forward to the next chapter.

wow soo many things to come, the story is getting soo good,
o well good luck writeing the next chapter im off to the first day of school

Awesome!! L-O-V-E-D IT!!!!! I wonder when things will get even more heated?!?!!?

PLEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU ^_^

P.S. more more lemons

Well, it seems like the battle will be sooner than Kagome thought.

Of course I enjoyed the intimacies between them. The part about his beastly voice going missing was a bit disturbing, especially in light of Inuyasha's reprieve from the moon-time transformation into a human.

I feel a bit bad that it is so, but I'm having a hard time liking Kagome's mother. I think it has to do with how distant she is with what she feels needs to be told. It's just something that I, as a mother, couldn't see doing to my own children. I'd give them everything they need to know in order to help them suceed, not play by rules set down before my children were even born. That just seems cold, as if she has chosen her duty over her daughter.

Either way, I enjoy the fact that Sesshoumaru intends to protect Kagome, even from her mother. Obviously, even though she might rather reveal all, she hasn't Kagome's best interests at heart. Sesshoumaru will keep her in mind at all times, hopefully. Everyone deserves to be first at least some of the time.

So The End To The Chapter Before This One Makes Perfect Sense Now ... I Must Say This Is A Lot Of Information To Take In But I LOVE IT ... Gosh U Have A Realli Extensive Imagination To Come Up With A Plot And Story This Extreme Cant Wait For More ... Update Sooon!!!

if you love grand, exquisitely written stories then you have come to the right place! It is an enticing receipt of drama, humor, love and loss in all the right amounts and at just the right times. If you sit down to read only one Seshomaru/Kagome story, this should be it!

Meara

Okay, firstly

"Ruru took his work quite seriously"
*snort* this line just cracked me right up.

Excellent chapter as usual. I love how you have the Higurashi family involved in this. Both Jiji and her mother are very wise, and you portray this well. This wisdom just enhances the story to a whole new level (i'm exhausted so I hope you understand what I'm trying to say)

Fabulous!

Hello, "BRAT" here,

Indeed, I did have to scratch my head a few times... lol. Well most of it made sense and most of it didn't, but like you said it will surely come together soon.

Inuyasha made me laugh in this chapter. It's so cute when he get all serious like. Where did Sesshomaru's beast go? Why is it only Sess and Inuyasha need to assist with the bow? YAY! WORLD'S BEST CHUBBY FAT CAT FINALLY HAS A PURPOSE IN A STORY! *1,000cheers for Buyo! Hip hip HOORAY!* Lol, I'm a big Buyo fan (how pathetic of me).

Why is it you keep referring to Kagome's mom as ancient miko? I mean what is really her story? Souta's so adorable, I can so totally see him acting that way playing his game boy and stuff. The golf thing was funny... I enjoyed that lil bit.

Well I am happy you enjoyed your whale watching (sounds like fun), but I have been really really really looking forward to this chapter and last weekend when I came to check and it wasn't there I thought I was trippin'. Haha. Well can't wait for the next update next weekend.

Sincerely;
Brilliant Reader And Thinker.
(Not to sure on the thinking aspect, but I got brilliant reader down pact.)

Excellent chapter. Like you said this chapter tied up some loose ends that made sense to me. I was thrilled and equally thrilled to be looking forward to the upcoming updates.

Well done. *hugs and smiles*

magnificent!! sorry it took me so long to get caught up on the story, but i am glad i got to read 16 and 17 together.
mothers intuition is scary in the real world but you make it seem errily innate.
the twist with Rin getting her soul sucked out is awesome!! I was wondering when Naraku was going to let himself be known again.
Inuyasha in an authority position in Sesshoumaru's castle is priceless!! lets hope he can hold down the fort!! lol
i love the way you left the last chapter, explanations and then more questions!!
love it! love it! love it!!!!!
tilayha

septememver first is a saturady not sun day :lol:

uh, isn't september 1, on a saturaday?

like the story
~zen

Is all good! I look forward to the next chapter, though. Take care and be safe.
~Ivy

Hojo finally lost the girl. What a fiasco that dinner was! Of course make-up sex was appropriately called for and I am glad you were not afraid to utilize it. I love the chemistry you have going between these two. Back at the ranch, Shippo becomes the voice of reason. Well, that is just like Shippo. How old is he really anyway?

Why on earth would you apologise for writing a long chapter in a really good story? But I DO want MORE!!!

Wait ... 3 ... So Kagome, Sesshomaru and Blank ... Okay I'm Confused Update Soon!!!

EP, I bow to your dedication to this fic. How all of you writers work, write and live an outside life is totally amazing to me. AHH, to be young again. I am so incensed with this fic. The last chapter was fantastic. I knew it was going to be interesting but this is far better than what I expected. For a moment there I honestly thought Sesshoumaru was going to go home. It was way hard to make these promises to Kagome and go against his nature when he felt humiliated. He really took it better than he would have in his era. Poor guy couldn't even take out his frustrations on the trees. Mama is alot more than Kagome's mother, I had already gathered, but I'm interested in seeing if she is what I think she is. The lemonade you're serving in this fic is truly delicious. I loved how she got alittle jealous over the fact that he may have partaked of another's....Guess she didn't figure in that he is in fact a dog demon and the many uses of their tongue. Sesshoumaru and Kagome's banter is very entertaining too. She nearly had a comeback for everything he threw at her. This is just great. I really do hope that you will write others fics after this, really, you've got the gift. Hugs, Jen

Those folks at Webster's are always trying to get me! What can I say? I was trying to type fast, I have very long nails, and I don't re-read what I write. Terrible habit, I know. Ah well. Grain of salt and all that. When the rents leave, updates will follow.
Sorry that I'm a speed reader! No pressure on you though! I mean, I finished HP7 in 5 hours. Fanfiction doesn't stand a chance against me. LOL
Thanks for the knickers! WOOT!
*goes off in search of tea*

This story is so imaginative and very enjoyable. Who cares about the length of the story, I just love reading it. It gets more interesting with every chapter. I especially like Kagome's mother. She does seem kinda of wierd but all is making sense to me know. I like how you are weaving Satori into the story before she is even born yet.

And yes, my granddaughter did manage to weedle some money out me with her sweet 'you know I love you grandma while giving me that puppy dog look' so she can go to the fair. I, of cousre, gave in. Who can resist such a beautiful child *wink* She will be the death of me yet *smirks*

Excellent chapter, I can hardly wait for more to come.
*Hugs and smile*

Cheers for another wownderful chapter, or bit of chapter, as the case may be! And, may I say that I was overjoyed to see, UNDERPANTS, in this section? I giggled out loud at that bit. But, you know me and the knicker obsession. Anyhoo, the jpegs have been sent (with a lovely non-pet addition, of course.) I will hopefully have time to repay you for all your wonderful updates by posting a few of my own on Wednesday. Things have just been so mad around here. But, you know all about that. Of course, the chap was delicious, the chocolate coved Sess decadent, and everything just wonderful as a whole. I can only dream of having the time and fortitude to compose such lengthy posts.
But as you pointed out so helpfully, quality over quantity, correct?
But why can't I be like you and have both? Now I am jealous. Bollocks.
In any case, I am off!

I adore you! (But you knew that already!)

shout out to all crepy mothers.... mine's included

OMG **glomps** Wow...nice chapter!!!! Can't wait for the next chppie **trys to wait patiently** **pouts** I CAN"T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Xoxo TheAdorableNeko

OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY please update soon

Bows.......OMG, it just keeps getting better. I live for the weekend now (well, more than before let's say!) If you ever publish something, let me know, I would love to read it.

this is chapter was soo FUNNY!!! I LOVED IT!! I love the whole chocolate shirt idea...hysterical!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^

P.S. the lime was good too =D

So Satori is also helping Rin? That was unexpected, but nice. Awe, and Shippo's so cute. I loved the scene of Kagome being discovered laying on top of Hojo...and your discussions of 'Ruru' never fail to crack me up. Next part, please! LOL. :)

*Purrs and grins* I have to say that the last two chapters have me enrapt in both the story and the cuteness level between Fluffy and Kagome. More please, soon!
Peace.
~Ivy

WoW! what an epic! I enjoyed reading your story. I have been following it from day one but can't review until now.Keep it Up!

keeep er comin

Oh wow! What a chapter, oh yes, what a chapter indeed!

Nice and long. That's what I adore about this story. Nope, you never disappoint.

Any way. I really like the thought of Sesshoumaru in the yakuza. Just imange Sesshoumaru, shirtless, in a nice pair of faded jeans, with his hair blowing in the wind, with a .44mm Glock slung back over his shoulder.

::le drool::

And stupid Hojo. God, I hate him. Idiot can't take a freaking clue!

Oh well. Sesshoumaru could maul him like a half-crazed bear if he wanted to. That I would pay to see.

Nice moments, there. Kagome's getting all assertive now. My Mom issues that same threat to my own Father. Now that Dad as reached the age of 45 and his youngest kids (my twin brother and I ... we're almost 17) are not going to sit and say 'Daddy, that's a bad word', he has decided that he is going to speak his mind to everyone.

Let me tell you, there is not a Tim Horton's worker in the Niagara Region that has not been snarked at by my Father. He got a little too pissed off with this one kid working at Wendy's and my Mom had to send him to the car so that he wouldn't blow up at the poor boy.

It's actually really funny to watch.

Moving right along...

I greatly anticipate your next update and hope for a clear explanation on why Higurashi Aiko seems to have ... well ... multiplied.

Laterz!

--Ashley

OMG! It's Friday... and you updated!
That. Was. So. Cool. I absolutely love this chapter it was great and although some things are confusing me somewhat I can't really word my questions right so I'll keep my mouth shut and wait for the update... for once... almost patiently.

This has been my comic relief to a very trying week. Seems like my off days are never going to come so I thank you for putting a much needed.... DESPERATELY needed smile on my face. The Houjo scene was especially funny. Kagome's mom is sending me mix signals, still love her character though. and the mention of the talisman thingie got me thinking Kagome's dad was a demon... perhaps, but then that won't make sense... would it... hmm. This needs more thought and analysis on my part so I'll probably reread the chap tomorrow at work.

Finally I would like to thank you for reading and reviewing my story that meant a lot to me. reviews make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol.

All I have to say is chocolate covered Sesshoumaru = yummy!

Excellent chapter. Some heartfelt moments, some light fun, and a good dose of jealousy always does a reader good, and although I will miss the longer chapters, I can understand why you'll be shortening them up. Keep up the wonderful work

Satori is finally here, and may I add what a way to be conceived, meow. I cracked up at JiiJii wanting to introduce Sesshomaru as a member of the yakuza, in fact it wouldn’t be that far off, I mean his name certainly fits. Alas Sesshomaru is much too good for the debauchery of organized crime, but the lifestyle would probably suit him, only if he was in charge of course, and I assure you he would be. Still I’m pretty sure Hojo would be uncomfortable dining in the vicinity of a mob boss and as soon as the introductions were dispensed he would die of cardiac arrest. So Buyo has finally made his appearance, I love that adorable obese feline, I mean no matter how lazy and chunky he is he always has had a place in my heart. Apparently Gramps has a case of sticky fingers, and not from the chocolate he swiped from Sesshomaru’s cheek, more like the feather he snatched from Sesshomaru’s pocket. That will teach the youkai to let his guard down in the presence of the senile old men, the old guy may be knobby and arthritis ridden, but he hasn’t outlived his purpose. So I’m guessing the bow that Gramps is making will aide Kagome in the defeat of Naraku, will it have something special about it, something magical? Probably, or you wouldn’t have made such a big deal out of it eh. By the way I never lacked faith in you’re lemon writing skills, but you have yet again surpassed my very high expectations of how well you could write one. They just keep getting better and better as you write them, and am I right to assume that you will be writing MANY more? Well I think this review has gone on long enough, and although these chapters are a pain in the ass for you to write they are wonderful for us to read and review. After all no pain no gain right? Just don’t come down with carpal tunnel and we’ll all be happy lol. Anyways looking forward to chapter 16…errr 18, I’m all confused, oh well as long as I get my chapter!

Nice chapter! Given I am somewhat of a speed reader, any length that can give me more than 10 min of bliss is wonderful!

The lovely comedic additions were wonderful as well. Hojou is such a nice man, really he is, but so dense!

The mousse addition-Sesshoumaru au chocolate-yum!!!

This chapter had really good flow I must congratulate you. I really loved this chapter I think it's my favorite so far. Can't wait for more.

Ello LOVE YOUR STORY CHICKA, it own's! Seriously, your story is the best one i've read so far ne? Anyways Sess is such a horndog!! **snickers** So ish kags for that matter. Lmfao. Keep up your good story. You got's skillz. **picks up a huge sword with flames** Don't be late with the next update plz **Waves around huge sword** BYES!

Awww I'm Late!!!! I Was Tooo Sleepy To Read Or Review Your New Update!!! Well Me Likes ... Sesshomaru Is Behaving Himself Rather Well ... Kagome's Mother Has Some More Tricks Up Her Sleeve ... Hmmmmm Miroku And The Others Have To Keep Rins Behavior From Sesshomaru ... I Wonder How Well That Will Go ... Well I Guess I Will Find Out What Happens Next Week ... Oh And Thank You For Reading And Reviewing Mi Story!!!

loved it like always!!!!!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^

Ahhh! I love Gramps! Hee-hee. He's an adorable codger, and you killed me with his assault on Sesshoumaru. Gramps was laying down the pwnage on Lord Sexy. And, wow on the storyline with Kagome's mom. I love how you take minor characters and give them these great parts to play. You truly do have a gift for spinning a tale. Sex, humor, drama, and romance...you've got it all. Also, thanks for the update e-mail. Makes me happy when I see you've updated, and look forward to the next update.

Sarah

P.S. That moment of recogniton between Sesshoumaru and Kagome's mom. At the risk of being wrong and sounding like a tool, is she Midoriko? I must know...you've got my brain working overtime.

P.P.S. LOL re Jin...the man is my background on my computer...the scene where he comes up the cliff to save Fuu...you know what I'm talking about...MEOW!

Awwwh! I was grinning the whole time! It's so sweet!

Great job on this chapter, as always! Hot lemon, too! Wows!

And you know what? I used to watch 'Hello Kitty' when I was younger. Now, I do not remember what it was about.

::le sigh::

Oh well.

Again, awesome job and I hope you update again when you can!

Laterz!!

--Ashley

When I saw that you had another update, I rubbed my hands together and giggled, made myself a cup of herbal tea got relaxed and read away. I was thrilled with this chapter and I'm egar for the next one. Reading this story was the only thing that settled me down from a full day of family strife. I read this very late Sunday night until the wee hours of the morning. My family had been driving me nuts most of the day including my favourite and only fifteen year old teenaged granddaughter *urgh*...you gotta love them though *evil grin*

Excellent & humorous chapter. ;-)

*hugs & smiles*

Although I’d expected fireworks from the end of the last chapter, I still cracked up when I read that little encounter between Sesshoumaru and Kagome’s grandfather. And what a way for Kagome to announce that Sesshoumaru is to be her husband, LOLOLOL! But to be amorous in the full view of her grandfather… GAH! They’re sure horny!

Scent of ylang-ylang and patchouli?!?! LMAO! I wonder why you picked this scent.

So, Kagome’s grandfather knew Sesshoumaru’s father, huh? That’s an interesting titbit. Sesshoumaru’s rescuing Kagome from Souta’s plane was hilarious! What’s funnier is Kagome’s reaction to Sesshoumaru telling her off for being rude to her mother, lol!

Seven Jewels, huh? The interaction between Sesshoumaru and Aiko is very well written, and I like the respect they show each other there. The plot is unraveling fast now and I wonder what’s going to happen next.

The lemon scene, as always, is hot! *grins* But I wouldn’t expect any less from you.

I am still in love with the way that you write grandpa so well. And I thought that I was the only one who was a huge fan of the bumbling old man. Jii-jii love forever! (*toddles off to make Jii-chan fan shrine*)

I can't wait for the next installment! This is an incredible story.

wonderful chapter! hah, and filled with lemony goodness too! jiijii's a riot, and tsk tsk, getting frisky right in front of him! lol, enjoyed it very much, continue soon!
-hasu86

I like how you are integrating Japanese culture and society into the story. Considering that I am not Japanese, the subject is immensly interesting and intriguiging for me, to see how the characters, shaped by an entirely cifferent mindset than my own, can be manipulated into the same culture of their origin.'

That said, there was a lot going on in that chapter. Kagome's mother certainly kept a lot of secrets from her daughter, but it also explains a lot on the anime/manga's portrayal on why her mother was so calm when Kagome went back in time. (Most mothers would have, as you said, freak out!)

Now, to see about vanquishing an evil!

I have run out of wonderful things to say to you about this fic.... *sighs heavily* When I am faced with a master work, I am left left with leaving crappy reviews like this one. During the reading of the chapter, my mind will point out moment after moment that I should comment on, but after a bit, it becomes clear that I would have to write pages to cover all the wonderful and important elements. Therefore, I am sadly left with reviews like this one that are seriously lacking in anything detailed, and instead sound like brown nosing drivel. Let me leave you with the fact that you have me hooked and in awe.
Continue love!
And, the jpegs are coming! I swear it!
UNDERPANTS!

Hmm, so much is revealed. Wonderful little steamy scene, as well! This chapter was great. I hope everyone back in the feudal era can find a way to save Rin! And now there are SEVEN jewels? Very interesting!

hello, EP. I just knew this meeting was going to be an interesting one. I'm quite surprised her grandfather kept the secret what with his hate of youkai. This fic is just really going so well. Take care of your little minion"s demands lest he turn on you. Jen

Thank goodness Miroku has the Rin situation already figured out. He would be a great palace advisor. Jaken's outburst of loyalty and backhanded compliments about Rin was kind of sweet in his own weird way. As for present day--what a greeting for Sesshoumaru! Way to ruin his pristine appearance and convince him that Kagome's family is a little nuts. Kagome's mother was a surprise. She speaks of herself in plural, like the Queen of England. Is she a merged being? I guess the ordinary Shrine Maiden and her family can be thrown out the window. There seems to be nothing ordinary in the Higurashi family at all. A few minor mishaps, but moving right along Sesshoumaru and Kagome managed to "fit in" their mating complete with the blood rites.

By the way. Beside the BATHTUB, I mean COME ON.

Who doesn't love that damn kappa? I mean he may be ugly and stupid and annoying but every program needs some comic relief, am I right?

Who needs privacy when you're only company is an old man whos half blind, half deaf and from the way he's pummeling that DEMON LORD compleatly dumb. Besides they're in a dimly lit well house and Gramp's hearing aides are nowhere in sight!

So Rin, that little bugger...is actually not Rin at all? Whew. Mrs Higurashi is so awesome, she just turns up the radio lol, I wish my mother had been that cool. Anyways. They're finally mated! Now my little authress dear, when will they get around to producing that little baby ahem pup of theirs? I'm sure RuRu would be quite pleased if you skipped over the formalities and just rolled them right into the sack lol. Anyways I'm looking forward to how you decide to pan this out. I have complete fdaith in you, you have done a pretty damn good job so far. Goodbye for now ElegantPaws my love, until you're next next chapter, ta ta.

Wonderful, as always. It is so nice to be able to read a story that does not have glaring grammatical and spelling errors dotting the page, and you have a superbly developed vocabulary. My inner author also prompts me to mention that you are doing a fantastic job on characterization and a subtly layered plot that can boast a superior level of complexity without confusion. Everything is so well thought out and explained. C'est fantastique! As per usual, I can not wait until your next update.
~Nephele

I love the vocabulary you use. You keep the characters true as well as the "background". I look forward to your updates every week.

Ah I really liked this chapter. The formal tea ceremony was well-described. I don't think I've ever seen it well described. and it proved to be quite the contrast in tone between that and the scenes with Inuyasha.

Now I just get the image of a naked, wet, Sesshoumaru in a bath out of my head. yum...

Well done.

Oh and one more thing... for a moment there you had me thinking Commander Daichi was secretly on Naraku's side allowing him some type of secret access to the palace or shiro as you call it in your story (HA... learned a new word! anywayz...) So happy that he wasn't because that would have turned out really bad for poor Daichi although I do feel bad that he's now dead. And does Shippo really stand for Seven Jewels? And I am just dying to know this link between Kirara and Kagome? Oh oh... why did her mother ask about Miroku?

Wow, this is the most vocal I've ever been in a review. Lol.

OMG!! That so rocked! It was off da chain! Lol. I literally sat up straight when this question was asked: “What of the lord’s ward?”
I knew it! I knew it! Rin was taken over by Kanna! Inuyasha's so cute when he's trying to prove himself worthy, lol. Kagome's family is so funny and gramps... just gotta love him. But I must say... you have totally put a new spin and twist on Kagome's mother giving her a bit of importance in a story. I can't wait to see what that scroll says.

*Jumps up and down screaming happily* They did it! They did it! They're finally mates! Woohoo! (ever played that game The Sims when they woohoo... so hilarious) Ok so I'm rambling, but please please to whoever is listening let the week pass fast, for I can't wait til the next update!

Update soon! Well as soon as next weekend come of course.

Brilliant! I love this story. It is humorous, flows nicely, well written and best of all I get to add some new words to my vocabulary.
*giggles* at my last line. Seriously, I like the way you write adding words that I'm sure has some readers scratching their heads and running for the dictionary. I keep mine right next to the keyboard just in case. I can hardly wait for the next chapters to post. This is a very interesting story...update soon!

*hugs and smiles*

Awh come on why couldn't they find Commander Daichi?
LOL granpa is so in trouble...

ohhh ilove this story please upsate soon

Gah! Loved it! Especially Jii-chan's reaction and the ofuda, and Miroku learning his lesson for ogling the wrong woman.

I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's debut in the modern world. Since he doesn't have fuzzy ears to grope, what is Mama Higurashi going to fawn over? Mokomoko-sama?

MD

ElegantPaws, I must first apologize for my tardiness in reviewing your most wonderful fic. I have been having health issues that have kept me away from reading. My laptop also went back to the shop for repairs to Win Vista and with my diabilities it's hard to stay sitting in a chair for extended periods of time to share my daughters desktop comp. Still, I wish you to know I did not dis you intentionally. I have finally caught up and I must say that I have to give Sesshoumaru alot of credit for his self control over every aspect of this fic. For him to be so tolerable of InuYasha AND the whole tachi is quite a feat in itself. I love Kagome's name for his manhood. Don't we all have our little nicknames for it? I can't wait to see what happens in Kagome's time. Anyway, I hope to see more soon. Jen

Something weird is going on at Sesshoumaru's castle. Rin seems possessed, and maybe she had a hand in making Kaede ill. Inuyasha sure has a long way to go to pull off being in society. Hopefully this experience will be good for him, but I see trouble on the horizon. I look forward to the next chapter.

You have to keep a close eye on those knickers..... well, I do at least....
*snickers*
Glad someone liked the Diary... I thought for sure that I would get flames out the wazoo for that one... Instead I get nothing but prasie and requests for it to continue! As though I don't have enough stories going on!
Good LORD! There isn't enough time in my day for all of the writing, chatting, working, and stalking!
Love you dearest!

Oh good green grass!

Sesshoumaru is feeling left out from Kagome! Oh my! This is a change! So it is true! Sesshoumaru does have feelings!! I knew it!

Now, I am within my right to be angry with Kagome. How dare she!

Oh well. All will be well!!

Great chapter! You are a genius! Really and truly!

I cannot wait to see what happens to Sesshoumaru when he is in Kagome's time. Nice touch at the end.

I mean, what's better than entering a new world and getting screeched at by an old guy? That's everyone's dream!

Any way, update again when you can. I'll be waiting all bright eyed and bushy tail!

Byes!!

--Ashley

I can't wait to see 'Maru's reaction to the rest of the family...That has always been a favorite for me with these fics....

Commander Dachi gives me a creepy feeling. There always has to be one bad guy, right? Well, besides Naraku. -laughs-

Well, whatever... I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!


p.s. Why do you say PART instead of CHAPTER?




Yumi-chan

Hehehe...Sesshou vs. Gramps. Round one: Gramps takes the coup! LOL, I bet the next chapter is going to put me in stitches; I just love how silly Gramps can be!

I loved the nice, long chapter, as well. I'd like to know what went on between Shippo and Kirara...since I'm assuming the 'presence' everyone felt had something to do with the fire-cat.

As for your review when you went storming through...LOL. Sorry about the extreme slowness! I have been having such a difficult time with the next chapter of JAL. I think my muses took an extended vacation. >( I really have been trying to get it done, I've re-written the chapter about 10 times now, but every time I look at the finished product, I hate it. Hopefully soon I will have it done...my apologies!

I love Gramps! Just imagining that scene made me laugh!

poor ruru is being neglected! lol, and jiijii is as funny as ever, i really do love the ofuda slapping silly old man, he makes for good comic relief. a very enjoyable chapter, though i can't help but feel a little sympathetic for inuyasha. but, i do love sesshoumaru more so, i'll get over it. can't wait to read more, so continue soon!
-hasu86

Hilarious and, as always, utterly enjoyable! Wonderful job, though I guess I should start thinking of something else to say.... especially love the "Lord Snotty Pants." Hehehe... but you know me...
And what in the world is going on with Rin???
Goodness, but you have me hooked!

well that was such a LONG chapter...loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

cant wait for more chapters!! =)

Pleeeeeeeeeease continue and thank you!!! -^_^-

Good Chapter! Sesshomaru And Kagome Have Finally Arrived At Home In The Future ... Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!

this clears thing better...more chapters please!!

Haha! "Sesshoumaru...meet Gramps." So funny! But there are so many questions, my head is spinning. What did Inuyasha want to tell Sesshoumaru about Daichi? Why is RIn acting this way? Why is Jaken unusually quiet? Why is Kagome so easily angered by Kaede? And...well, that's all I can think of for now, lol. Your email reached me only once, so don't worry. Thanks for the chapter and update soon!

Update!!! And have a good weekend yourself. Or whats left of it. Ja

oh my god i thought you'd never update. for some reason the wait seemed longer this time. ok so Shippou was sleeping all that time and it seems Kaede knows more than she is letting on. seems like Sess and Inu are getting along fairly well and what't up with the commander? oh and what the deal is with Rin? Has she been replaced with Kanna or something? What's going on?

I hope next saturday hurry up, because i'm going nuts.
good job. LOVE it

LOL!!!! That Last Part Was Funny!! I'm a Bit Worried About Rin Tho....I Wonder Wuts Going On? Well, Update As Soon As U Can!

Ciao Darling!!!!

Kagome-Chan ♥

"Ivy, you're gonna choke if you eat while you read that..."

I did, coughing on an edamame. The puppy boy pats me on my back. I put my bowl to the side and continue reading, laughing again. My sides ache.

He scoffs. "It isn't that funny."

"Yes it is!"

"Feh."

"Sit." I say after picking up the 'Sit Inuyasha for free' card and then grin, finishing the chapter.

~
YAY! Teehee. I laughed all the way through and went awe here and there. Particularly enjoyed the scene where Miroku nearly was drowned by Sango. Those two really need a book on S&M they way they go at it!
Peace!
~Ivy

Well I promised to review quickly, but I'm a little late. Ahh, the agony, but once I read the chapter I was as happy as a...horse in a hay barrel? I've taken to just opening both the review box and you're story in different windows so that I could write my questions down as soon as I think of them, you see I have a terrible memory and I can't miss out on the chance to make my inquiries! I wouldn't want to deprive you of my witty humour just because it's been forgotten! Wait a second, you wrote the wise and AT TIMES lecherous monk, since when is 'at every opportunity' at times? Sorry just thought of that, lol! Sesshomaru calling Kagome obdurate? Isn't that the pot calling the kettle black. I think the last part of the chapter is my favorite thing in the world right now. So it begins, I can't wait to see what you do with the ol' geezer, maybe Sesshomaru could teach him a thing or two about gardening? 'Family bonding' time? Well as always, amazing, can't wait till' the newest addition.

It amazes me the number of names Inyasha came up with when thinking of his brother, had me snickering throughout the chapter.

‘Where was her personal pervy blankie anyway?’

And that one just had me outright laughing.

Brilliant writing, you've got it all covered, romance, mystery, some suspense and a lot of humour, which I believe is essential in any story.

Wonderful job

There was a lot revealed in that chapter. I imagine Inuyasha is fit to be tied-being kept in the dark like that!

Kirara is certain;y full of surprises as well as Shipop.

I wonder how Shippo will take the aborted lessons by Sesshoumaru. Sango could stand in as a substitute!

And, I don't know why, but something about Shu just seems...wrong.

This Was Gr8!!!! It Explained a LOT of Things!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Ciao Darling!!!!

Kagome-Chan ♥

P.S OMG HARRY POTTER

Aw Shucks. Thanks for the e-mail. I was just up at my parents cottage, for a little family reunion, you know the great outdoors...no computer. So, sorry purdy lady, but I've finally found the time to review. Well alot has been cleared up in this chapter took me awhile to get throught the whole thing. Plus I was in love with the first two small paragraphs and read them literally 10 times. When I got to the rest of the chapter you yet again blew me away with you're writing and ideas. Satori? I love it, hell I love everything in this chapter and can't wait for the next one. I promise I'll review quickly on it!

Okie doke. So...here I was expecting some good old-fashioned mindless humor, and...you made me THINK! AHHHH! But, seriously...I love this fiction. Very clever plot twist with Kagome's dad. And, double points to you for giving Gramps a meaty role in this. I love that old codger, and cannot wait to see how he fits into this. Update soon, Missy! *On another note, I saw on your author page you are a Jin fan...me too! I guess I'm a sucker for the quiet types with sexay hair...lol* Anyways...update...or else! *Sharpens her butterknife*

i'm around and about, just not in the fanfiction world lately, much to my chagrin. work and more work and i can't seem to find the time to do anything lately! i've totally fallen behind on my fav fanfics, but i am little by little, finishing up my latest chapters. anyway, that's beside the point. and interesting chapter, enlightening also. Satori, i like the name, and i do love the prospect of little babies who belong to kags and sesshoumaru. enjoyed the chapter very much, can't wait to see what happens in that little gathering of theirs! continue soon!
-hasu86

sorry for the delay....:) had to read Harry Potter. took me a day and a half and i loved it!! hope you did too.
now for your chapter:
LOVED the opening. the poetry of it had me mesmerized. you have also been sneaky with the whole Kanna and the mirror thing....Hmmmm was Naraku able to slip through cuz kagome didnt go back?? you have become quite good at cliffies!!!! and i promise that i will get you my reviews in a more timely mannor now that the Potter series is complete. :)
tilayha

I just wanted you to know I am very grateful for this story, it has made me laugh in a time when I really needed it.
I love this story and I can't wait to see how Kagomes family reacts to Sesshoumaru!

::pant::huff::puff::

I >am caught up! Who rocks? Oh, that's right! Ashley rocks!

::happy dance::

Wow. Amazing chapters! So hot! So romantic! So...so...well, I can't think of another appropriate adjective, so just use your imagination.

Kirara is finally getting a bigger part in a fanfiction other than just being Sango's cat companion-thingy! It's so -- so -- refreshing! Ha! Thought of an adjective!

Any way. I hope you can update again soon. Hopefully I will get to update my story tonight!

::keeps fingers crossed::

Keep up the super awesome job!

--Ashley

P.S. Yay! Harry Potter (Book 7 [I think]) is out! I've started reading it and I am currently on Chapter... well, Chapter One. (I'm reading another book by Jodi Piccoult called Nineteen Minutes. Oh! It is a must read!)

Uh No fair. Why do you keep on leaving at least several cliff hangers? Please continoue...

The beginning of this chapter flowed very smoothly into Sesshoumaru and Kagome’s feelings on that letter. What came next was very interesting indeed – the fact that Kirara had been traveling all this time with them without letting Kagome know this secret. The seeming coincidence in which Sango (hence Kirara) and Kagome had met is not such a coincidence after all, huh? Everything is predetermined.

Sesshoumaru already has her essence and need to be…ummm… changed? I suppose in effect, he now carries human bits? *grins* After all the disparaging remarks he had made, I wonder what he really thinks! lollololol!!

The drive of Sesshoumaru and the heart of Inuyasha – I really like the way you chose to describe their father. It is very fitting.

As for Rin… She can understand Kirara? I suppose in a way it’s true, considering her closeness to Ah-Un. She does seem to always talk as if she understood Ah-Un – but one tends to brush it off as her imagining things, :P.

Well, at least Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru isn’t fighting. Sesshoumaru is softening towards him, even though he had to use Rin as an excuse, lol! And to Inuyasha’s credit, he at least now accepted the fact that Kagome and Sesshoumaru is an item.

As always, great job with the writing!! Look forward to the next one!!

Wow...you weren't kidding when you said you were busy...lol. I made it to Part Nine, and...I want to have your babies...ha. I absolutely love your fic. It's the perfect balance of humor and smexy...good on ya! The lemon...whooo boy. I would love to finish it tonight, but, alas...I am pooped...however, you can expect another review from me tomorrow praising you and this story...til then. Sarah

awesome chapter!!! loved it li[ke always!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pwez

I put off reading this till I finished the Potter book! Wonderful, wasn't it?
Anyhow, interesting turn of events here. Looking forward to the next chapter!

That was a good chapter.!!! Update soon. Ja

*purrs in contentment* Pretty words... Pretty pretty words. I love your insights on change and how the world is in constant fluxuation. I laughed when everyone was suddenly in Sesshou's room and giggled as I saw my 'Yasha all tall and brave and full of bravado. *grins* Not the whiney brat 'Yasha. My 'Yasha. The cute puppy boy. A very, very enjoyable chapter!

Another great chapter begging for the next to soon follow. It is great how the plot development has just gotten more and more interesting, and intriguing.

Geeze, seems like everyone crashed the party! LOL. So Sess and Kags are to have a daughter...interesting. But now Sess has some sort of human qualities? I hope that doesn't interfere with his normal awesome youkai-ness.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! As always, thanks for the update note!

Love the story, nice twist, very original. Thanks so much for updating faithfully!

Kim

THe review button seems to have mysteriously dissapeared!

Hmmm...

Good chapter. I enjoyed the spiritual interactions. Sesshoumaru certainly proved his commitment to her! Now one must wonder what is Satori's lot in life.

Inuyashas' parting shot to Sesshoumaru was a sign he was maturing. I'm glad, as I really do love the hanyou and wouldn't want the Taiyoukai to bash his head in too many times for being a baka!

Demonlordlover

Great chapter as usual. I would have been really pissed if all of those people were in my room. All they needed now was for Ayame, Kouga, Ginta, and Hakkaku to show up out of nowhere, some confetti, a few party hats, some music would do good and have themselves a party! Lol, like Sesshomaru would let that happen. And what did Inuyasha mean by what was it he said? Not letting her down or him? And where was Shippo? The little kitsune would have been the first one come running to me. So where did he get off to? Is he still sleeping? Seems to me like that dining hall is THE meeting place to be. Lol.

Oh and Harry Potter: Order of the Pheonix was great. I so loved it, but I'll have to go see it again because my friend was talking throughout the entire movie. God I just wanted to throw something at her! Well, update soon.

I just had to review this great fic! I don't think I've read a more culturally descriptive fic in years -- the descriptions of Japanese thought, architechture, dress codes and over-all feel of the culture are wonderful to see (as an anthropologist, this is a BIG thing that is missed from most fics). One question I do have, is, after reading every chapter up to date, I didn't really see much of a clear transition between Sess' beast wanting Kag for a mate versus Sess, himself wanting her for a mate -- it didn't seem like much of a struggle between the two sides of Sess. Meaning, you emphasize that the beast is happy that the master has stopped protesting. . .so how much of an influence does the more primal side of Sess have over the rational side? One other question: tell me if I'm right -- Inuyasha is the physical embodiment of Courage, Sango is Friendship, Miroku is Wisdom, And Shippou is Love (I'm not attempting to spell the four attributes -- I took French, not Japanese :)); although, couldn't Sess also embody all four atributes? Really good fic, update soon, please! If you could email the answers to me, and put me on an update list, I'd appreciate it -- my email is Deborah_Lemieux5@msn.com . Thanks.

AAAAAHHHHHHH! There has just GOT to be another Chapter, VERY, VERY, VERY soon.

Really, love the story. It has grown into something so much more than it started out to be, and it getting more and more interesting with each update. Looking forward to reading the next update and hope that it is soon.

You updated! *grins*

Like I said before, loved the scene between Sesshoumaru, Miroku and Kaede. Eloquent in thoughts and speech as always, the taiyoukai’s jealous thoughts on Miroku had me cracking up. Yes, Kagome would be pissed off if he progress with the ‘unnecessary murder’ of Miroku, lol! And then his protectiveness of Kagome’s privacy kind of adds to the his rapid decline into this feeling called love.

The fact that Kagome feels comfortable in Sesshoumaru’s room means…? *grins* Yeah, they are both quite attached to each other, huh? We are just waiting for them to admit it properly to themselves and each other. Until of course, she suddenly realized something after she had…um… helped Sesshoumaru in the bath – which is, by the way, a nice and steamy scene. Well done, you mighty hentainess.

I like how you made Sesshoumaru smell. LOL!! But it makes him more REAL, more alive – as in not completely unbelievably perfect. And that Kagome is comfortable enough with him to point out that very fact to him.

Good grief… Kagome having a very domestic moment with Sesshoumaru there during dinner, lol! I wonder if she realized it. I laughed like mad at the sake conversation. Coolly and calmly, he simply told her that No. No sake, lol!

Whether or not he realize it, and I think he does, the fact that Kagome asked him to stay with her during the letter opening moments says a lot about her feelings for him – that she trusts him, and consider him close enough to share such a private moment with her – beyond the physical. And Sesshoumaru seem to feel as strongly about the letter as well.

You left it there? You left the chapter before telling us how Sesshoumaru and Kagome reacted to their future status as mates and their daughter?!?!?! Not to mention Kirara – Ahh…the suspense!!

Wooow good stuff!!! Update soon I can't wait to find out about grandpa, and what the object is. You keep on rockin my socks right off! Ummm apparently my kitten Mushin agrees because he keeps trying to help me write this review....cute and yet verrry annoying.

GREAT! GREAT! Keep it coming.
I love the way you have made this couple into a pair of emotional complexity and the un-deniable resources of destined soul mates. Can't wait for more.

Yeah, you should see pitch forks!!! You ended it at the good part.!!! Update soo. Please. And I really like your name . Elegant Paws, its just so cool!!!

I wanna watch Harry Potter!!! I like how Kagome is dependant on Sesshoumaru for comfort, it's so sweet. Update soon!

Why ca't Romico Taka make somepen in the manga or movies?! That was so ingenious and explains more than the manga ever did! I like the feather, and wish that i had one like did, i would nevver guve it to my Jiji-chan, if he was still alive...Up-date soon! I can't wait to see how Kilala (thats ME! lol) will help sesshy-kun through the well....and how kagome's Jiji-san is more than he seems....hmmm.....and i wonder if Kags will realise that Sesshy-kun is her mate-to-be....her True mate-to-be...and not just her pillow...though i wouldn't mind having a pillow with those sexy lips and cute tight butt....
Up-date SOON PLEASE!
ttfn!
joanne

They were destined to be together?Wow, I wonder how Kagome's grandfather will react...break out the sutras. So if Kagome and Sesshomaru have a child and she is the manifestation of both good and bad, dark and light will she be youkai so she can properly wield both her demonic powers along with her miko powers. As I doubt a human body could take the strain, or will she still be born a hanyou? How will Sesshomaru will take being destined to do something? He always seemed like one of those 'you control you're own fate' youkai types. I doubt he'll dislike spending quality time with Kagome, especially after the display of her newfound skills in the hotspring. Eh? Eh? Well I look forward to the next chapter in this story, prefrebly soon as I am an impatient woman lol.

this is awsome i wonder how ther will take it ? hope you update soon

yet another wonderful chapter. Woah... well I was most DEFINITELY not expecting that. Oh my God, Friday seems so far away! Ok, well I guess I have no other choice, but to wait... with my handy dandy dictionary. Keep up the good work.

LOVELY CAHPTER!...LOVED THE LEMON!!!!! Cant wait to read more!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

P.S. more lemons pwez =)

Light the torches gather the villegers and bring your pitch forks there is a man hunt to be had. Or should I say Author hunt? It was totaly unfair and cruely of you to end the chapter so ubruptly as so. It was just getting good then... BAM no more until Friday? How do you expect me to live that long while waiting on the next chapter of your extremely talented piece of work. I am very impressed that this is one of you first fics unless you are holding out on us some where. You truelly do have a talent that you should be proud of. You mange to keep me on the endge of my seat at each turn. So now where is that ever wounderful and inspiring next chapter hmmm? Patience is not a virtue that I seem to have. Now where is that ignitor fluid for the torches?

woah, that must have taken you a while to write out. you must be mentally exhausted

Hm...I can't wait to find out just exactly what that letter meant about 'gramps', This story is getting deep. And I did love the little lemony scene in this chapter! Awesome. :P

Interesting. Sesshoumaru has finally admitted to himself that he wants Kagome on a permanent basis.

Now all he has to do is convince Kagome. NOT that Ithink thiswill be a problem!

A millenium or two together-so does that mean being mated to him will ensure her of a long life? I'm so braindead, that I cannot remember if that was elaborated on in this story. (So many fics, so few brain cells!)

And Kagome's father is now revealed to have been the catalyst of her time travel. (Or at least knowledable of it). Hmmm...No reaction on having Sesshoumaru being named a mate yet. Hasn't yet sunk in yet, I imagine. Fireworks when it does, I imagine!!!

I am almost speechless. you must be decended from shakespear. i wish i could have 5 minutes inside that gifted brain of yours to see where this stuff comes from. you are an insperation to all us newbies!!!
tilayha
thanks for the suprise!!! :)

That chapter as all the others ROCKED!!!! Please update soon can't wait to read the coming chapters.

Love This Chapter And All The Fluff ... I Wonder What Kagome's Grandfather Has To Tell Her And I See That Kagome And Sesshomaru Want To Be With One Another As Mates But Refuse To Tell The Other ... Hmmm I Wonder ... Well I Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next Update Soon!

Gilded ovaries....I am still laughing about that, lol. Nice cliffy.

I'm Crying Rite Now. No, Really I Am. That Was So Touching!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can. To Have the Ability to Make Something So Passionate, Sourful, Giddy, and Underminded At the Same Time Is a Great Gift to Have. I Wish You Only the Best. (And I look 4ward 2 the Sequal!!)

Peace, Luv, and Tears,

Kagome-Chan ♥

lol, go kagome, use those jaw muscles! hahaha, loved the hotspring scene. the letter was very well written, i can understand your wanting to take time on it.
and yeah yeah, i was a few days off, just umm...disregard that message...BUT SM is updated! lol, things never go as planned with me it seems. an interesting chapter though, sheds light on a lot of things. aww, they're gonna have a baby girl!! can't wait to read more so do continue soon!
-hasu86

Awwww Thankyou!!!! I Like My Titles 2!! Now I'm Off 2 Read the New Chapter! You'll B Getting Another Review From Me Soon!!!! ^_^

Peace, Luv, and Gr8 Authors Like Us,

Kagome-Chan ♥

oh some forshadowing, and lots of fluffy goodness. I can't wait for more.

"Why are you checking if the story is updated yet, Ivy?"

"Inuyasha, shush."

"You really are enjoying this story, aren't you?"

"Yes, Inuyasha. It makes me giggle and grin and bounce."

"Uhu."

"Oh, come on! She's writing a beautiful story! The descriptions are well developed and it is entirely captivated."

"Yeah. Sure. She called him Ru-Ru."

"Shut up, Inuyasha. You're just mad because you're the whiney boy in another story."

"Well, duh!"

"If you weren't the whiney brat in this story, would you think it was well done?"

He eyes me and I smirk. "Ivy..."

I wave the "Sit Inuyasha for Free" card in front of him. "Spill."

He sighs and looks dejected. "Yes."

I smile triumphantly.

~
Really, this story was a lot of fun to read and I really enjoyed it. Update soon! Very Soon! I will if you will. *grins*
~Ivy

Oh I'm so sorry! I'm so dense...sorry! I didn't read your email properly. You did say you were going to update this weekend! Sorry, sorry! Forgive me? ^_^"

You didn't update...or maybe you edited something in the chapter? Ah well, thanks for informing me. I have a request though, I hope it's not too troublesome. Could you please put the URL in the email when you send it to me? Please? Thanks.

Woa, I LOVE Your Story!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!! I Can't WAIT 2 Find Out What That Thing Was....and How Did Kiede Get It, If Kagome's Dad Was From Her Time? Hmmmm....

Peace, Luv, and Loving Fathers,

Kagome-Chan ♥

i'm enjoying This Sess. Needs Not A Mate soooo much. I'm excited for the rest!!!

so she is from the past

another awesome chapter!!

Please hurry and update soon okay!

Ja Ne!

So....what did it say? what was in it? is the mother in the other, more advanced time not really her mother, but instead a woman who found her in the well? and is her father really someone from this time, and is Kaede really her grandma or....what? is she her aunt? or...mother?
so many questions,....questions are what you get when you leave us at a cliff hanger! never do that! its great and all but...it kinda makes some -like me- impatient for the next chapter!
Up-date again soon!
and i know this review is late, but i wanted to read through the whole story again, and it took a while...lol
ttfn!
joanne

Her FATHER! Holy crap,well I for one didn't expect that.

I love the way this fan fic is written, so many big words it appeals to my...higher level of intelligence. ;]

You really thought this whole thing out didn't you? Well anyhoo it's amazing and keep throwing in those innuendos I love feeling clever when I find them.

OOh OOh OOh... *waves dictionary around in air* This was great, I have learned a lot of new words from this story. Lol... AMAZING, I loved it and I do hope you update ASAPWYGAC... lol (as soon as possible whenever you get a chance)

Much luv

Ah…Sesshoumaru is beginning to realize how possessive he felt towards the drooling miko, lol! You JUST had to make her drool, didn’t you? LOL! But he saw past that to the courageous and caring miko underneath.

The Rin scene was very touching, showing Sesshoumaru’s more compassionate side. But in your own unique manner, you managed to add some levity within that past – namely, Rin trailing wet goop all over his yukata, hehe!

Inuyasha, however grudgingly, looked like he was about to come to terms with the thing between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. As gruff as ever with his interactions with the rest though, lol!

Kagome’s father left something for Kaede?!?! This is an unexpected twist!! But what is it? And why did she run off so suddenly? It is just because she was angry that Kaede had hidden something from her/

Another long and satisfying chapter. Well done!!

Lovely chapter ElegantPaws!~ Sorry for reviewing so late, school's busy and I had a week's worth of tests piled up all thank to my swollen limpnote(sp?). Anyway, thanks so much for the chapter! Update soon!

i hate you at this time.. you left a MAJOR cliffy!!!! Post asap before i send my zombies to attack you!!!! oh and by the way i loved your chapter and your story :)

you know, jaken isn't so bad once you get know the little guy, i think he's just misunderstood. lol, love, peace and harmony with the toad. and yes, that was a twist out of nowhere! i wonder what it is! and kag's father? hmmm, you have spun your web of mystery quite well. can't wait to read more so continue soon please!!
-hasu86

i love this story it is cute just that i got lost at the end hu wat happened why she run out did she open the packet lol well tell me when you update so i can keep r&r

I love it!!
How did her father know?
What does the scroll contain?
Please post soon!!

as usual u have left me wanting more. and yes u had informed me of the update and it is most apperciated. i just ask one favor....please warn me ahead of time if the old miko is sick.....i dont need my keybord shortcircuting from me not having tissue. :)
i am looking forward to the next chapter
tilayha

Wow! Another secret identity! Yays. Update soon, please.

Ok, i was going to wait until i finished the story to review but i just couldn't wait for this one. this is for chapter 9 by the way and i must say that it had to be the lets say strangest lemons i have ever read! it had it's sweet parts i'll give you that but to tell the truth it really wasn't all that great. it was just too much trouble for one simple thing plus it could have been more romantic. But the story so far is pretty good.

Love your story. Always waiting for the next update. I have a question about the word palette. I gathered from your writing it is a royal bed, I was trying to see one on the net to get an idea of what it may look like but could not find one. Can you provide a description or link? Thanks.

whats in there!!...need to know!!more chapters please!!!

I Like The New Chapter ... I Wonder Whats Going To Happen Next With The Whole Gift Thing ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love this fic EP, I do! I always smile when I see that you updated! It is just so wonderful! My, my. You just keep me guessing. And the fact that you keep me coming back at all, well, keep it up. Whatever you're doing, keep going. It looks good on ya!

Slight correction, Hachi isn't a badger he's a tanuki also called a raccoon dog. Other than that slight goof I really like it.

::is very thinkful that you cannot see the silly-stupid happy dance that she is currently performing::

YAY!!!...More loveliness that is Sesshomaru...lol

- Sidhe

Whoa! You threw in a huge plot twist there. Excellent chapter.

I love this story and you really threw me for a loop with this chapter! I can't wait to see what's in the package!!! Keep up the good work!

Hmm...I cant remember if I left a review for you recently, but I just finished reading the newest chapter a little while ago. Wonderful! And I wanted to thank you for your update messages. :) I look forward to the next chapter.

You're updating at lightning rate, lol! Okay, you already know what I thought of the various bits here and there...so I'm a bit at a loss of what else to say *grins*.

Ahh...I see you added the 'Flashback' note. Yes, it's very obvious now, though it would have been fine without it if one focussed harder, hehe!

As always, Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's interaction with each other is a great joy to read. Can tell that Sesshoumaru is becoming less reticent about talking, and obviously enjoys his 'debates' with the miko.

Hmm, Kagome would really have something to think about if she found out that it was HER touch which Sesshoumaru craved. It makes me wonder what she really thought of all that was happening to her right now. Will discuss further in an email.

I grinned like mad (again) when I read the part about Kagome's grandfather inventing illnesses for her 'pregnancy'. LOL! I just cannot imagine what he could possibly come up with!!

Kagome 'felt' for Inuyasha? Heh! She shouldn't!! She finally told him straight to the face and now he realised that she's not a doormat - it was about time. no, kagome should be PROUD that she set Inuyasha in his place.

As for her period...I'm sure you have something up your sleeve there. I await the next chapter with bated breath. hehe!

This Chapter Was Jus Soo Fluffy Me Likey ... The Relationship Is Developing Emotionally Its Seems ... Well I Cant Wait To See What Happens Next ... Ooo And U Have A Good Holiday To Okay!

yeah!!!!....more chapters please!!!

This chap was so sweet!
He's being all gentle and caring, but she still doesn't realize that he might want her as more than a lover...
Poor Kagome misunderstandings, I'm sure, will still abound.
Liked it a lot, looking forward to more!
-aura

awww, sesshoumaru the masseuse! you know, i've always wanted to do a scene where he works his magic fingers, him or kags, either one. HAH!! and Summer Maid is updated! nicely written chapter though, i really enjoyed it! continue soon!
-hasu86

so will sess have to work to get her heart, now that she decided not to give it to any1

::poke:: ahem...

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

::coughs:: that being said, I am sorry that it took me this long to write a review. ::cringes:: I meant to do so sooner, after all fair is fair and you have always been so encouraging! Now I happily return the favor and ask you to place me on your list of 'Update' folks! ::grins:: I'm so happy to find another version of Sessho-the-hentai and Mistress Sango!

Now for my only complaint...I was looking at your profile and while I admit, Ranger is lovely...I must say that he was beaten out by Diesel…::blows raspberry:: but to each his own…and I got a thing for blondie men!

- Sidhe

-pounds on the desk eagerly waiting-

hurry with the next segment!!

That was an amazing chapter and it was funny! I was laughing at a few places and when you said the part where her grandfather trying to think up ways to explain the pregnancy my mind went rolling.

So many excusses that it was so hard to sort them and stop the nonsense to continue reading but alas I managed to and finished the chapter!

Please do hurry and update I wish to know what will happen next!

Ja Ne!

as always your words have allowed my imagination to see perfectly into your world. you are truely talented. i so enjoy reading this story. please continue to let me know of updates. this is becoming one of my favorite stories very quickly. :)
tilayha

As much as Kagome has promised to let no one so deeply into her heart, it seems that Sesshoumaru is creeping in. As for Sesshoumaru, he is listening to what Kagome says, taking it into consideration, and utilizing her suggestions when making decisions. They are behaving as a couple, whether they realize it or not.

um.. i dont mean to be mean, but you kind of misused a few words, i think. nearing the end, in chapter ten, you said, inuyasha flattened his koi ears... koi is a fish or a beloved. there were some other mistakes too... i just wanted to tell you... no offense meant, though! the story is otherwise great though! keep it up!

Lovely addition to the story!

I certainly enjoyed the lemon scene, but my favorite part had to be the verbal interactions between the characters in this chapter. Kouga is so dense, Inuyasha is Inuyasha, and Sesshoumaru has become a nymphomaniac. Kagome, the poor dear, is stuck between the three. Though, I suppose she doesn't mind being stuck with Sesshoumaru, I do hope Kouga and inuyasha get suitably distracted so as not to interfere with some Taiyoukai lovin.'

Looks as if Sesshoumaru is going to have to work a little to gain the Miko's love. Good...He should--it will make him come to realize what he could loose.
Great Chapter!

i love it when kagome gives inuyasha what he deserves!!! and without saying sit! i love it. koga and iyami arent going to know what hit them. thank u for letting me know the chapter was up. i have thouroughly enjoyed it!!!
tilayha

You wrote another great chapter ;)
I can't wait to read the next one, as always!!!

Great chapter. Inuyasha has just burned his last bridge with Kagome. The problem appears to be that now she is wary of entering into a relationship with Sesshoumaru. He was just coming around nicely, too. No pun intended.

wow..toecicel!!..lol..i hope kagome relizes that you have to lose some thing in order to gain something else..more chapters please!!

Another great chapter!

Here are some of my favorite bits:

You see, as to be expected when dealing with territorial sexually charged psychopaths it is essential to keep an eye on them at all times since one was never quite sure what they would do next.

*********

Mama had chosen a mate and it was Lord Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha was not going to like this at all – the kitsune smirked.

*********

And then of course:

RuRu(?!?)

Great work as always,

-aura

I mean what is wrong with kagome, why is she so difficult? I am just loving this story very different.

hah! yeessss, penetration at its best!! lol, very tastefully done! i find their inner monologues hilarious by the way and i do enjoy reading sesshoumaru's dialogue, very england-esque, very regal. haha, i do love the british accent but that's beside the point. i didn't realize i fell so behind though and i'm sorry for the absence in reviewing! i just started a new job and that's been taking a lot of my time. anyway, wonderful job! keep it up and continue soon!
-hasu86

I like the way you end ur chapter. Update soon. Ja.

LOVED IT!!! LOVEEEDD IT!!!! THE LEMON WAS SOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story was juss as awesome!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^

P.S. more lemons pweez =)

Me Like! Me Like Alot! Poor Kagome She Is Going Through The Blues! I Hope Everything Works Out!

-applause her-

nice chapter!

I hope you update more soon, that was an excellent chapter!

Ja Ne!

in one word yummy! cant wait for the next chapter. :)
tilayha

Wow! Hot hot hot! You're a natural at this, hehe...But then again, you ARE a self-proclaimed hentai, :P.

The birthday gift Sesshoumaru had left Kagome was so touching. Kagome's reaction was very well written. She did not expect it from him and it kind of adds to her appreciation of the gift - after all, who would expect a gift from Sesshoumaru, right? The fact that the comb had been his mother's was really telling. I cannot imagine him giving it to anyone he did not respect or have some feelings for.

Argh! Kouga is so annoying. Not only he had gotten drunk and smashed Sesshoumaru's place, now he's there to butt in between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. AND he's still attemping to flirt with her even when he's about to be mated?!?!? And where was the Inutachi? Hmm...

I found it funny that Sesshoumaru was so excited about their 'date' that he had woken up before dawn, lol! He's doing all sorts of things which shows how attached he is getting to her...it all makes me grin like mad. His beast have recognised her as his mate and I can't wait to see how Kagome would react when she realised this.

The sex, of course, was satisfyingly steamy. But then again, I would expect no less, hehe! Sesshoumaru was all so confident and 'generous' until she pushed him off. Haha! He actually felt rejected?!?! Took quite a hit to the ego there, huh? But I'm glad it all got cleared up. For a moment, I thought you were going to leave us (and Sesshoumaru) hanging, hehe!

I guess we'll see how things go from here, huh? *Rubs hands* Inuyasha is going to love hearing about how both of them had copulated, lolololol!!

Keep up the good work. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and from the looks of things, many other readers did too!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

You are sooo good at this. You should have really tried this writing thing long ago. The whole lemon scene was great. It is so true how she felt about his...size...fitting there. I thought the very same thing when I had my first time with my husband. I thought that since we were basically the same height that it wouldn't be no big deal but dang, height has got nothing to do with it. I was scared out of my mind and I too said that thing just won't fit. He just laughed and said God made man and woman to fit like a glove and I just needed to trust him to not hurt me. I too thought of the horse's....You did so good. I'm so proud to be able to be one of your first fans. Jen

Was gone on vacation and came back to find so many chapters. Hehe! And it was all worth it, because this must be one of the funniest and hottest stories around, :P. Aren't you glad you took the dare?

Chapter 8 was satisfyingly long, :P.

Kouga's rampage at Sesshoumaru's castle was hilarious. LOL! Poor Sesshoumaru was really annoyed by all his broken furniture and the porcelain stuff, wasn't he? Kouga is really a clown in this piece and really funny. If I was Sesshoumaru, I would have killed him for wrecking the castle. "‘What had he meant by HIS WOMAN?’ thought the Western Lord whose teeth ground against each other in irritation and a sudden strong need for violence." HAHAHA!! A strong need for violence? Jealous, was he?

I'm very touched by the scene where Sesshoumaru spoke to Jaken. It looks like he was praising Jaken in his own subtle way, but poor Jaken was probably too terrified to notice. It was nice how Sesshoumaru had noticed that his retainer had tried to defend the castle to the best of his ability.

Stealing her underwear, lol, was priceless. He's such a pervert. So subtle, but STILL a pervert!

Ohh...Rin was so sweet, bringing flowers for Sesshoumaru. Only you had to ALMOST drench Sesshoumaru in the water, lol! I swear, every couple of paragraphs, there would be something to make me smile. And Kouga sniffing between his legs? The image of that, hahaha!!

Sesshoumaru strangled Kouga?!?!?!

Nice switch on the 'You will honor your commitment' line, from Sesshoumaru to Kagome. I enjoyed the conversation between daughter and mom. And that her mom realised that Sesshoumaru had stolen Kagome's heart. As always, everything is beautifully written.

I'll save the next chapter for tonight. Right now, I desperately need a nap...Jet lag!

-applause-


Damn that was so good! I had just managed to get to my computer today after my friends kidnapped me and I'm glad I got tot he computer because I just loved this chapter!

It was so nice!

Hurry and update real soon okay well...

Ja Ne!

really good so far

Wow...just wow. I have just been rendered absolutely and certifiably speechless...if I'm not careful I might be declared legally dead. You are an amazing author. *sigh* I have been reading so many great and wonderfully written stories recently (this definitely included)...it's a miracle I haven't developed an inferiority complex...ahh well, it would be worth it even if I did because I could read indescribably awesome stories like this. Your writing style exudes an air of elegance and wit, and is exceptionally engaging. I will be waiting with bated breath until you update once more, as per usual with this story.
C'est magnifique!
~Nephele

Holy freakin' MOSES!!! *fans self furiously* Damn, too bad I quit smoking in the house, now I need to go have one. That, m'dear, was one of the STEAMIEST, yet funniest, lemons I've seen in a long time. Kudos, dear authoress, on having one of the more hentai muses around!!

I can only BEGIN to imagine what the next chapter is going to bring our intrepid twosome, as well as the other oh-so-cleverly portrayed characters in this enchanting piece. Damn, drooled on myself again just REMEMBERING the descriptives in that lemon. Oops!

Anyway, thank you so VERY much for a delightful end to my weekend. Yup, I seriously doubt that much is gonna top this one!!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Hi again.
Another great chapter.
I do have a couple of things to nitpick about though.
There are two words:
fusuma
and
kosode
that are used in Part Nine but are not in any of your definition lists (I checked).
Normally I'll just guess what the Japanese terms mean from the context, but since you've gone to the trouble of making a definition list I thought you might want to add them.
Other than that, it's a great chapter (as always), I hope to read more soon.
-aura

oo wow- im kinda speechless..........
that was sooo hot!
plz update soon

Love it...love it...love it....please update soon.

omg i loved this chapter i think my favorite part was when she threw him off of her it was just hysterical well i can't wait to see what happens next please update soon thanks

Um...More, please. Good chapter indeed. Love everything about it. update soon

All I can say is hmmm...hmmm...hmmm. Nice piece of story writing. It left me panting for more. I think Sess' bouts of jealousy is so cute. :)

I hope Sess starts to see Shippou in a different light and maybe bond with him in a father/son sort of way. I know that Kags and Sess will become mates officially but I hope it's soon. *giggles*

I wish there was an adult version of this anime with these two paired together but alas-- a wee lassie can dream, can she not? *lol* Since neither of us own the rights to these characters, it will never happen except in fandom land. *sinffles*

Well done...update soon :-)

What a great chapter. The waiting seemed to prove rather difficult for both Sesshoumaru and Kagome, although Sesshoumaru knew exactly what he was looking forward to. Kagome's post coital words were a hoot.

Fabulous!

I really like this. You do have 2 minor goofs in chapter 9 though, using lord & sama in the same instance it's like calling him lord twice so pick either 1 of the 2 but not both at the same time. Also castle is shiro not shiori. I hope this helps.

well....i LOVED the lemon!!! VERY HOT AND LEMONY!!!!!!! the chapter was SOOOO good!!! Excellent job!!!

PLEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^

P.S. more lemons pweez =)

haha...this was tight...why would he have her undergardments with him...whats up with guys and that?...anyways...more chapters please!!!

Love The Chapter ... Kagome Is Changing And So Is Sesshomaru ... Only A Little Bit More Tyme ... Cant Wait To See What Else Happen Next Week ...

Wonderful chapter. Sesshoumaru is such an arrogant prick, but I have hopes for him!

Hmmm...now that I think of it, leave his, ah, prick the way it is. Seems Kagome got plenty of of pleasure out of it, anyway.

Behead her indeed. LOL

I love it! Can you please send me an email everytime you update? Please? If it's not too much trouble... My email is anime_nutty@hotmail.com. Thank you so much!

You are to good at this [i]-grins-[/i]
Keep on going please you left a cliffy to. [i]-puppy dog eyes-[/i] All you authors need to stop that just for one more chapter At least one.

Wow, you made edits based on my review!
I feel privillaged, or something of that sort. ;p
Can't wait 'til tomorrow and your next post.
Keep up the good work! ^_^

update now I say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ga I love it please inform me of your updates my email is disgracedworld@yahoo.com

Another, marvelously looong chapter. I love it. I am truly surprised that Koga survived the encoumter. I have a really juicy feeling that Koga won't be gone by the time Kagome gets there. HEHE.

I thought it was sweet the way Sesshomaru treated Jaken. He almost praised him!!!! He'll never be the same, and he really was brave to take on all those wolves.

I also cannot believe that Sesshomaru stole Kagome's underwear. How cool is that? He is such a little cutie in a homicidal maniac kind of way.

I will be waiting with baited breath for the next installment. Same Battiime, same Bat channel.

Til next time, Deb.

I'm so glad demonlordlover pointed me in the direction of this fic, what a gem!

I can't wait for an update!

I Must Say I Love Your Story It Is Really Good ... I Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next ... Update Soon!

Update!!! Really soon. Good stuff.

I love you EP! I really do! I love everything about you- your reviews, and now, your story! You have me hooked as few can do. Thank you for giving me something excellent to read in times that have seemed to go dry. There have been too few quallity fanfictions being posted as of late, and I thank all the Gods that you have decided to share this gem with us. I personally do enjy the phrase "testicular fortitude." Again, thank you for being wholly wonderfully.
Forever a fan and thankful,
~omizumaru
PS: Give me lemons woman! You know my hentai has needs. :)

You know we need storyline in these fics to give them purpose, so, this was a necessary chapter.[unless of course it's a PWP] I just loved the scene in which Kouga sat on the wet tamtami and thought he...and then when Sesshoumaru said "Rin" in answer to his look, Kouga thought he was saying Rin had wet herself. Also, I am not a true fan of Jaken but one does have to feel sorry for the little toad ever now and again. He is such a pathetic little creature. I again want to give you praise on a job well done. You are creating a very well written and humorous fic without taking the characters too far out of their series characterisations. Sesshoumaru isn't using contractions or words his character wouldn't have knowledge of and when someone can write a believable Sesshoumaru and even Kaede's dialect I must give praise because that in itself is an accomplishment to the writer's ability to think outside our their own language and slang expressions. As I have said to others, Kagome being from the future makes sense and so with the Inu Tachi always being around Kagome they would naturally pick up her speech patterns as she does their's but Sesshoumaru has not spent enough time with her to fully understand her speech and would often just look at her with a questioning brow just as he was inspecting her panties and bra he stole without her knowledge. That I also found quite cute, BTW. I will be waiting for your next update. You are doing fantastic. Jen

this is possibly the best story i've ever read. good grammer and spelling. i would love for you to e-mail me whenever you update. and PLEASE write more stories, your talent shouldn't be with held.

Question: you didn't define "sannomaru" in part eight,

'Jaken began to shiver as he made his way down the yagura in order to reach the sannomaru before the Taiyoukai arrived. He had to explain, his life might well depend on it.'

I'm guessing it means courtyard? You might want to add the translation to the list (which I *really* appreciate by the way).

I like how you're adding some Japanese terms and phrases other that just the usual 'gomen', 'baka', and '-san'.


Also, one error: if her father

'apparently died before the Miko was born'

then she wouldn't have a *younger* brother, her mother also implies that he was dead before Kagome was born-that would make Souta her twin, born 8 years apart, unless they have different dads.


I really enjoy Sesshomaru's personal thoughts:

'the kappa was the taiyoukai's personal kick toy and no one else's.'

This is getting long now so I'll stop, but I really do like this fic.

Wow....thanks for giving us such a long chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter, hopefully there'll be more interactions and chemistry between my two main characters ;)
Keep on writing. Pls update soon.

I always did like her mother. I just hope Kagome will quit being any less than firm toward Koga. Sparing his feelings isn't getting them anywhere.

^.^ Fantastic as always, ElegantPaws-san. I can't wait for the next chapter(s). There's no need to rush yourself, but please continue with this fanfiction. ^.^

Was it her imagination or did that one little sound have more than one meaning. This ‘Hn’ was amused.

LOVED this line!

NOOOO must have update!! ahhhh... cry cry cry cry... i hope you have time to update soon :)

oh shit. things will definitely get interesting here on out... Inuyasha's got an idea of what's been going down.

hehehe... that was a neat trick making the bird one of Kagura's spies... well done! Although I might say Kagome has gotten in over her head... ahahhah

wow, things are really starting to heat up! The shampoo scene was delectable. I hope to see more like it. I can't wait to see how it concludes (although your comment about how the course of love not running smoothly has me a little worried)...

hehehehehe... I can't wait to see how this encounter goes... Sesshoumaru and Kagome + hot spring is sure to = much hilarity.
P.S. was I the only one to notice the play on words at the beginning of the chapter when Inuyasha was subdued... you wrote that he had 'become one with the earth just as he had done so many times before...' Kikyo= earth and Inuyasha's subjugation spell-- nice double meaning there. :)

Wow, well written :) I liked the 'confrontation scene' between Sess and Kags. That was pretty hilarious how you worked in the line 'my eyes are up here.' I hope you come back to that fateful encounter and explain more about why Sess suddenly up and left. It should prove to be pretty interesting.

Wonderful first chapter! It is unusual to see a story from Sesshoumaru's perspective :) Well done! I think you are spot on with his characterization. It should be interesting to see how things turn out when he finally meets up with Kagome :)

Very nice! I hadn't been able to read anything new for a while, but finally got the time to sit down at my computer. Imagine my gratitude to find something funny and sexy!

Sesshoumaru is portrayed wonderfully as a conquering sex god and Kagome is delighfully spunky. I like the inclusion of Rin as showing his softer side, but he is in no way 'soft' or humanized. Kagome, on the other hand, is her same old self, but with the assurances of a slightly older woman.

Can't wait to read more and see what you have in store for the two of them, not to mention how you plan to torture poor Kouga!

-pokes the computer screen-

Hey!

Hey you!

Yeah you!

Who else could I be talking to?

Hurry up and update!

Yes that's an order and no I will not leave you alone!

Update now!

Must know what will happen next so update now!

-pokes the computer screen again-

Did you hear me?

Then get to typing now!

-grins evily-

Ja Ne!!

LOVE it...can't wait for the next chapter.

miroku reminds me of my friend from school all he ever does is talk about girl body parts in such ways that cant really be good for anyone to hear for long periods of time less you become a perv too.

At least she is out in the open about it....even if Inuyasha is in a crater, lmao. Cool Story, keep updating.

very enjoyable chapter, and who cannot love Sesshoumaru's possessiveness?? i find it such a turn on! haha, excellent job! continue soon!
-hasu86

OMG, I LOVE this story! LOL, ElegantPaws! That lemon scene was seriously hot, and you left me hanging when you cut it short with Inuyasha's arrival. I can't wait to see what happens when she visits the palace! I'm in awe..,Could you please email me with updates? I would love to keep up with this story!

Kami Miroku is vulgar.... but we wouldn't have him any other way! lol

anyway i really enjoy this story! it's so well written and i find myself imensly enjoying your style! the pervertedness is always gettting me an dI love how Sessh deals with Kagome's abiltity of saying what comes to mind. Hence the kissing. He culd shut me up any day... lol jk anyway i really do love this and i hope you update soon!

loving it... continue the good work...

Yay! 'Yasha bashing! Literally! I loved how rude Kag is being to him. Maybe if she uses small sentences and a switch...heh.

Update!!! Good beginning. Keep it up.!!!

HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP IT THERE?
That was one hot scene - I can't believe it just stopped. I can't wait for the next chapter - it kept me on my toes! I love the firery passion!
Way to go!
Brava!
~Sandreline

Tough luck puppy-boy. Eat dirt!

This story is awesome! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work!

when you said, in part six... the best laid plans of miko and taiyoukai... it reminded me of mice and men- the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray... you are a very elegant writer, indeed, lol! nice job!

Uhh...buhhh....Woah...

You are such a tease! It's not even funny!! Great story though, really enjoying it!!

Ooh, Sesshoumaru, getting all possesive!! Good Puppy.

Hopefully you will update again soon and keep up the amazing work!

Luves...
--Ashley

Arrrrggghhh....I hate cliffhangers. Please update again soon.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ASAP!!! great story btw. keep up the great work. can't wait to see what inuyasha's gonna do. awsome.

This story is positively, the most delicious story I have read in a long time. It made me laugh out loud and read some of the parts to my daughters.

It also made me tingle from the roots of my hair right down to my toes. Lady, you brought it all out. I was panting just reading it. Oh, to feel that passion again.

You have Sesshomaru right down to his jmethodical, tacticle. devious, diabolical thought procsses, all with unyielding precision and menace.

Your use of the engish language is superb and I applaud you. (Standing Ovation). Much thought and preparation has gone into this effort and I am so glad I have found it. Your story puts me in mind of Demonlordlover or Vyncent and I cannot wait for more.

You are very good at cliffies and Your Lemons are exquisite.Til next time, Deb.

first of all, where's the rest?! nuh uh, that's so not gonna cut it! there wasn't even penetration! and second of all, very nicely done for a first lemon-ish scene, haha, i'm so not gonna be satisfied until there's penetration, nope! nuh uh, and they were so close! damn, can't wait to see how they deal with the sexual frustration.
oh and not quite sure when the new fic's gonna come out, hopefully sometime in the next week or so!
great chapter, can't wait for the next!
-hasu86

Heh heh! I knew it! That damned hanyou just has to interupt. Every damned time!
Arg.
Update soon.

please update ASAP!!! GREAT STORY!!!!

Oi! Cliff hanger! How mean! How very mean!

nice plot line, I hope to read chapter six soon so please update when you can.

Ja Ne!

Ok...im kinda dissapointed that they didn't have any water sex, but happy that you're keeping them in character...
UP-DATE SOON!
TTFN!
joanne

This...is...awesome!!! I love this story so much that it transcends any ability I have to describe how much I love it. The story isn't overly complex...it is like a breath of fresh air. There is a comic aura to the writing style that is reminiscent to The Complete Idiots Guide to Dog Demons (another favorite). I am officially addicted to this story. You are doing a wonderful job and I sincerely hope you keep doing so...or I may have to unleash our pack of hounds to find you. Ignoring my late night/early morning ramblings...I simply adore this story.

That was cruel, leaving the story like that. But i liked it.

tum-tum!? lmbo!
I SO love this sentence [Yes, the Lord of the Western Lands, eldest son of the deceased Inu-no-Taisho, the Killing Perfection and Youkai of All He Surveyed purred - like a contented pup whose ‘tum-tum’ was replete with warm milk.]
SOOOOO FUNNY!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
AND STOP BEING SUCH A HORRIBLE TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really like your writing style. it adds a certain finesse to the lust filled scenes, builds on the sexual tensions, very well done!
haha, i was about to kill that annoying bird myself, totally ruining the moment! so far so good, continue soon!
-hasu86

I love this fic!
Please! You have got to update it as soon as possible!!
Please tell me when you update it too!
sailorsweetie0033@hotmail.com

Ha... *Rubs hands*

The first section of section 4 gave us, the excited readers, a vivid taste of what caught the stoic youkai's attention. And man...was he stunned, lol! Not to mention he was frazzled enough to forget that Kagome is not from the inu lineage, :P. Enough to grab her by the waist and not let go, lolololol!

Aw...and Kagome hits him with her 'gomen nasai' and he softens *squeals*. Protecting her indeed *rolls eyes*. And SO OBLIVIOUS (apparently) to the fact that our dear miko is completely nude. Like he's not looking AT ALL. So funny how Kagome tried to get through to Sesshoumaru that she's naked (he didn't notice, right?!?!) only to be faced with complete disregard. LOL!

Ah...the shampoo scene...*grins* I love the initial 'dance' between those two, with the shampoo bottle and the claws and the sniffing. And Sesshoumaru's speed of undress had me laughing because - wow! He SO looking forward to his hairwash, isn't he? The perverted dog!!

The flow between Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's parts were done very well. I love their shifting emotions, which will...*grins* eventually lead to a huge blow up (I hope!)

Will wait with bated breath for the shampoo scene. And that teaser...It just got me itching for more!!!

Stop Writing Authore notes, u tease!!!!

Give me a STORY!!!!!!!

Dear ElegantPaws-san,

*squeals* I love this fanfiction sooo much! *squeals* Okay, enough of my fangirl-ness. Anyway, keep up the good work. The storyline of "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not a Mate" is really fluent and thorough. There are a few grammatical errors here and there. All in all, it's still fantastic. Please continue. I'd like to see what you have in stores next for us readers. Sorry for the ong review. ^^

Sincerely,
Adria Li

I really like this! at first i didn't want to read it, but after a bit of looking at it for a while, i decided that, hey! i've got nothing to loose reading it! so, i read it, and am now thinking 'ok, i should have read this earlier' lol!
I like how the title says that he doesn't need a mate, yet his beast apparently thinks he does, spacificaly Kagome...
and i like how he didn't feel his heart start to beat fast or his lips for a smile.....lol, so KAWAII!!! :-D
the only thing i have a question on is, with your last "chapter" you gave us three links, but its really only two, cause the thrid link is actualy the exact same as the second, its the one of inuyasha....so, un-less inuyasha is now sesshy and rin, showing their relationship, then...im confused...
TTFN! and up-date soon!
joanne

For Part 3...

Very disturbing thought that is...that Miroku had the thought that he taught Shippou the hentai way himself. Gah!! But come to think of it, Shippou IS quite the charmer, isn't he? Imagine what he's going to be like when he grows up. We all know he'll definitely be more charming than our resident hanyou, :P.

Again I laughed at Inuyasha's obvious discomfort at the look Rin shot him, chastising him for his treatment of Shippou. Inuyasha was imagining Sesshoumaru's expression wasn't he?

"Peach in, green out'?!?!?! Hahaha! Yeah, sure that's going to work, Kagome.

The scene where Sesshoumaru rubs Toukijin is another for the books. LOL! I can just imagine the look of anticipation on his face. The taiyoukai, like you said, is indeed diabolical!!

Ahh...the Sesshoumaru scene. I can't wait to read that!! And I hope that it will be soon, nevermind that my access to internet connection is a little erratic at the moment.

*Snickers* One shot PWP indeed... :P Well done, dear woman. I'm happy to see that you're receiving a good response!!

I finally got on!!!! Sorry for the late review...

For Part 1 & 2

Sesshoumaru is beautifully characterised in this pice, with a nicely balanced amount of dignity, arrogance and of course, maliciousness. Hehe! Of course, all that does not detract from his hilariously serious thoughts. I do think that he takes himself too seriously sometimes. And that is nicely presented in this first chapter.

Jaken, as expected, provided the comic relief. His reactions to Sesshoumaru's irritation is really quite funny, but I couldn't help but feel sorry for the poor little demon, lol! He worships the ground Sesshoumaru walks on and the taiyoukai is thinking about how far Jaken could bounce off the cobblestone, haha! Not to mention dripping poison on the poor little thing.

I also like the part where Sesshoumaru is irritated with his own beast for thinking about 'certain' stuff, lol!

LOL! I can't help but laugh at the part where she slapped him (no matter how many times I read it). I would love to see the shock on his face, lol! But he WAS really asked for it, with all the perverted thoughts and all.

HAHAHAH!!! HOTDOG?!?!?! *ROFL* You and your one track mind, you hentai!!!

Onwards to the next part...

Hey there, I 've seen your many reviews on other fics but I didn't know you could write. This has hit my tickle bone and believe me I've needed some good entertainment this week. My laptop decided to get sick and I have to share time with my daughter's comp which for me being disabled doesn't give me any comfort for reading. A chair can be quite a "B" when you have back problems. Anywho, I wanted to give you mucho praise on this. The flashback scene of their spat over her clothes was to die for. I even managed a way to put my daughter's new flat sceen in a position next to the sofa so I could read alittle longer after the 1st chapter. I totally agree with you in your bio page. But if you have seen my reviews you know that I am just as hentai loving and appreciative of GOOD writing and storytelling. You get a huge thank you for the laugh. Hugs...Jen

I just love shippo in this story! plus the story itself is interesting so please update soon.

i love it and please bump. oh and if you didn't understand what bump meant then it is a horter way to say update.

Hanyou pups?!! Ugh! The beast really IS cracked. You think it would want strong, self-assured, in control, and handsome pups. Full youkai pups all the way!

OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!! Seriously I do. Your story is absolutely AMAZING!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please hurry and put up the next chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter > update! oh and btw....great job with the first two chapters ^^....update!

Good start!