| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Sapphire- Thu 04 Oct 2007
| Good start. I would like it if Inu-Yasha is to be with Eri. Koga with Ayame. Kikyo is evil, but stupid. Because cheating in public, even though it's dark and whatever is stupid. Should do it in a house or something, but in a public and in a street corner - I think - makes her look like a streetwalker.
I really like your story. Yay for Sess/Kag!!!! I was wondering if you'd like to post it on my website:
http://www.justexpressing.com
Megan Consoer- Wed 19 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Megan Consoer- Mon 03 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
jasmine- Thu 09 Aug 2007
| i love ur work update more(have an emotionless face like sesshy)lol
| i love the story. needs some work on the spelling though.
| Hmmm I Smell A Lemon Coming Up Next Chapter ... Anyways Update Soon ... Bye Bye!
| hey luv the fic keep updating pleze still great as is wit all ur fics
Kawaii_Kilala- Wed 11 Jul 2007
I hope you know that you went a little too color coded, like, Eri was wearing all red, which would make her look a little wierd in my opinion, but seeing as Inu does like red, considering his Haori, then its understandable....and that you went a little wild on the rhinstones....all the girls had some, wether on her top or bottoms or in her jewlery...not that i have anything against such a beutiful stone, but, sometimes there can be too much of a good thing...
I think you may be progressing this story too quickly, but if that is your intention, then, great!
if not, still great! sometimes, the slow stories are too slow, and your is just the right temp to be fast, but not too fast....i only ask that you make them a little more in character, and not so OOC, kay?
thanks! Hope you had a nice 4th of July!
ttfn!
joanne
marquishawright- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| so luv the story don't you just luv the lemons but hope u update soon
Megan Consoer- Tue 26 Jun 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Red-Smartiez- Mon 18 Jun 2007
woot!!! I cant wait for Eri to blow Inu away with her outfit!! Same goes for Kags with Sess!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^
P.S. lemons pwez
| hey luv the fic keep updating pleze
Megan Consoer- Thu 07 Jun 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Please Update soon!!!!
I can't wait to know what will happen!!!
| THANK YOU
| THANK YOU
Solaira- Sun 03 Jun 2007
| I really like this one-shot and I am sooo glad to hear that you are going to turn it into a story. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Slm_candle- Sat 02 Jun 2007
Hey Girl,
I ABSOLUTELY love it and now I ask you when the next update si to take place. This SHOULD be a story thx
Forever your girlfriend,
Slm_Candle
Red-Smartiez- Sat 02 Jun 2007
This fanfic is AWESOME!!!!! I LOVED THE LEMON!!!! VERY HOT AND...LEMONY!! =D
CANT WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^
P.S. more lemons...is Naraku still gonna go after Kagome?
bluemoon_175- Sat 02 Jun 2007
| I love your one-shot, but I think it would sound better if you would make it a longer story. But do what you will.
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