| This is really good. But since its not complete you really shouldnt put it under the complete section. Its less misleading that way. Anyway, cant wait for the next chapter
| hey good rest so far but im still waitin 4 u 2 update
Sarah- Fri 08 Jun 2007
i like your screen name...the devil of lust...nie one. but i love this story...you've created a wonderful plot here. please keep up the awesome work, and update whenever possible!
~Sarah
HEY!!!! don't laugh at me! ok, go ahead, cuz i thought that it WOULD be the next chapter. I nearly fainted when i read your chapter 3 preview.....can't wait for u 2 review!!!! please do that soon!!
--Lady to the Lord
Violetcarson- Sat 26 May 2007
| Curses be upon your family for leading us on!!!! How RUDE!! Gomen for not commenting on the last chapter, it was really...interesting. lolololol!! At first I thought it was a lemon, then I changed my mind, then, lo and behold, it WAS!!! I liked it!!!
Fluffy- Fri 25 May 2007
| Wow a BIG pot an a dishwasher yeah you are evil! Still plz update soon what happens?
Slm_candle- Thu 24 May 2007
| LOL a big pot and dishwasher lol. I love it now another favor other than the ever reliant UPDATE plz make longer plz and thx
Slm_candle- Wed 23 May 2007
| I hope you mean a BIG lighter and a small candle cuz god if you is thinking what i trhink you is thinking then im going to be blushing as i read the next chappie. LOL
Violetcarson- Wed 23 May 2007
Hn, I'll agree that you are indeed EVIL!!!!!!!! Muahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!
I have a friend who made up a very odd song about [enguins, but we won't go into that now. Anywho, nice chappie!!! Yay! for updates!!!!
Violetcarson- Wed 23 May 2007
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more ASAP!!!!!!!!!!
That was Fun-nay!!!!!!
Cerenite- Tue 22 May 2007
| Interesting concept, but perhaps a bit heavy on the brand emphisis?
Latarsha- Tue 22 May 2007
| i love the first chapter and this looks like a promising story so please hurry and continue it.
Fluffy- Tue 22 May 2007
| keep updating. I want to know who it is! Also the beginning is good.
zenfluence- Tue 22 May 2007
um, hey.... like the plot?
Er, grammar and consistancy need to be improved.....vastly. And you have 3 chapter ones and a prologe in between them. Other than that, I love the idea, stick with it.
~some explaination would be nice, I'm slightly confused
~zen
Any9- Tue 22 May 2007
Hm... Nice, realy nice.
Please keep updating.
Kohana- Mon 21 May 2007
| hey heres your response!! haha I want to know whos there, your off to a good start!!
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