I like the unique plot of this story. It shows promise. I just wish you would update. It's been since May. Have you given up on the story?

What an excellent beginning! Your vocabulary is astounding and I like the way you keep the story moving while giving us history/explanations. The second update was too short though! Wah!

Looking forward to reading more.

Acid spit huh? I think I would be trying to dodge it too. Pity it got her shirt I think it's worse than her shoes personally.