reader00- Sat 01 Mar 2008
please update!!

Catherine- Wed 26 Sep 2007
Another lovely chapter - but huge cliffy! Come on, please update! Please please please?

Anyway, this is an original and believable take on the Sess/Kag relationship. I could totally see Kagome sacrificing her virginity to save Sesshoumaru.

I sense an interesting conversation coming up *evil grin*

demon13o- Thu 26 Jul 2007
Ghaa!

Big cliffy!!!

Hurry and update soon!!

I have to know what's next!!

Hurry!!!

Ja Ne!!

MorningStar- Sun 22 Jul 2007
aw, i love the way you write! please continue soon, i get excited when i see that you've updated

Victoria- Sun 22 Jul 2007
That was really great!!!! I'm so glad that you updated!

marufan- Sat 21 Jul 2007
wow this story was different rare to come across one so original! i loved it but i hate you for the cliffy! you have to update soon!

v1cky84- Sat 21 Jul 2007
Arrrggghhhh, a cliffhanger!!!! I hate cliffies!!! Please update soon.

toni- Fri 20 Jul 2007
yeah u finally update!!!!!!!! arigato

BeautifulDeception- Fri 20 Jul 2007
Me Like This Is A Realli Good Story Update Soon Please!

sola- Fri 20 Jul 2007
An udtate! wonderful! It is soooo hard for one of these stories to be interesting after the lemon. You are doing an excellent job!

Ana- Fri 20 Jul 2007
ACK!! CLIFFY MUCH!! I agre with July Vincent, you need to update and soon! I wanna know what happens next!! Wha'd he say?!?! PLEASE?!?!?!

Catherine- Fri 20 Jul 2007
Yay, new chapter! It's no surprise that Sesshoumaru is intrigued by Kagome's behavior - it is so unlike what he expected.

I wonder what he will say to her... update soon, please:)

July Vicente- Sun 15 Jul 2007
bitn sya grabe... maganda...
i hope you continue the story...
where both sesshoumaru and kagome fall for each other....

lunaticneko- Sun 17 Jun 2007
;_; That's so sad.

v1cky84- Mon 11 Jun 2007
Please update soon...I love reading this story.

demon13o- Thu 31 May 2007
darn you and short chapters!! hurry and update another since that one was short i have to know what's next!!! Hurry and update soon please!!

Ja Ne!

megan- Thu 31 May 2007
great story! i xan't wait to see what happens next. you did a very good job.i hope you post the next chapter soon. this story is soo good that you've got me hooked. thanks for the good reading.

d- Thu 31 May 2007
I believed someone stoled your story and put it on adultfanficiton.net

Fluffy- Tue 29 May 2007
1 word describes that: wow! that was amazing will there b ne more?

MorningStar- Tue 29 May 2007
hehehe... lecher cashier! i've had a few of those in my life. they're always fun to annoy.

anyway, i loved it, but i think it calls for a second act. like, sesshy's not happy she's not there and decided to "punish" her. lol.
please update again soon

rein manson- Mon 28 May 2007
omg wow update update or ill be forced to kill you muahahaha plz!!!!

rein manson- Mon 28 May 2007
omg wow update update or ill be forced to kill you muahahaha plz!!!!

luna- Mon 28 May 2007
you know for some weird reason i dont think that the spell was not "removed" correctly because of the condom. but then again that is just my thoughts trying to get more lemons out of you- ok that sounded weird! IT WAS A VERY GOOOD CHAPTER!

kagsess_fated- Mon 28 May 2007
It's a hit and run! *giggle*

Shikon Goddess- Mon 28 May 2007
nice story u have here im really lookin foward to the other chapters

whiteinu1- Mon 28 May 2007
keep updating ^_^

Kami's_Twilight_Angel- Mon 28 May 2007
I am glad you allowed her to have safe sex and the fact that she was wise enought to walk away afterwards...i can't wait till he wakes up though > update!

Mlmonty- Mon 28 May 2007
I feel sorry for Kags since she can't seperate feelings from sex good idea to make it safe sex though

v1cky84- Mon 28 May 2007
Ooohhh...finally some action between the two of them. I love it...that was hot!!! Please update again soon. I can't wait to read more.

demon13o- Mon 28 May 2007
wow nice chapter... hurry and type the next chapter... please ^-^

Ja Ne!!!

AnimeAngeline- Sat 26 May 2007
WOW! your story is really interesting and somehow quite unique. i really loved it, and i can't wait for you to update the next chapter for your really interesting and cliffy story. XD

whiteinu1- Sat 26 May 2007
keep updating ^_^

Fluffy- Thu 24 May 2007
Pwease update soon!!!!! i need Sesshomaru!!! What happened i know he didnt die please update!!!!!!

Inusbabe- Mon 21 May 2007
poor poor sess

Mlmonty- Mon 21 May 2007
Arggg! I can't believe you did that to me! Just leave me hanging like that so not fair.

v1cky84- Sun 20 May 2007
Ooohhh...I hate cliffies!!! I hope you'll update soon...pretty pwease :( I can't wait to read the next chapter.

demon13o- Sun 20 May 2007
awesome chapter! hope you get to typing and update the next one on any fic soon lol!

Ja Ne!!

Jay FicLover- Tue 15 May 2007
Yeah Kiska's story started being posted a while after I first posted the challenge so I kinda thought the same at some point, but the potion theme IS very common, the only thing I did in the challenge was add the "life and death" situation, hehe. In "Spark" I think it is Kagome who gets herself into the whole mess, sin't it? Not someone from the outside... and it also has all the subplot with Rin, which makes it a very different story. Besides, there's a world of a difference between the ways they chose to write it.

This story has it's own style and I keep wanting to read what's gonna happen next...specially now that Kagome knows what might happen unless she does *something* about it! The next chapter promises to be most relevant, that's for sure.

magnificentchaos- Tue 15 May 2007
wow this reminds me of kiska's "spark" maybe you guys picked up on the same challenge or something lol but anyway I love your story keep up the awesome work.

Chelsea

demon13o- Mon 14 May 2007
awesome!! hurry and update please I wish to know what happens next!! ^-^

Ja Ne!!

demon13o- Thu 10 May 2007
awesome fic! I hope to read more updates from you!

Ja Ne!

Hazel- Thu 10 May 2007
STALKER!!!!


LMAO

Suchiya- Thu 10 May 2007
Yay you updated!

ah she dreamt she was nekid! i dream that all the time i can totally understand Kagome.

magnificentchaos- Thu 10 May 2007
lol that was great please update again soonb lol

Jay FicLover- Wed 09 May 2007
You better forgive me or my friend Suchiya is gonna kill me *shudders*

Suchiya- Wed 09 May 2007
Jay you idiot you disrespected your own rule: never get carried away when reviewing fics answering your challenges.

Jay is my friend she didn't mean to sound bossy please forgive her.

hazel- Wed 09 May 2007
I really like the story and it's a LOVE POTION for crying out loud. Keep writing it dont matter as long as your happy with it. Shit I'm happy because I want to know what he whisper to her.



come on tell me!! lol

Inusbabe- Wed 09 May 2007
I think I know! I think I know! I'll wait for the next chapter to find out.

Jazz10122- Wed 09 May 2007
awsome plot and story. I can't wait for the chapter.

magnificentchaos- Wed 09 May 2007
YES!!!!! That was perfect lol I don't think I could have imagined it any better then how you presented it....GREAT job and update again soon please.

Chelsea

SesshomaruCrazy- Wed 09 May 2007
Nice chapter... I enjoyed reading it..
This has been a good story so far..
I too wonder what he whispered too her too... Something Kinky.. I hope.....LOL...
Oh well hurry and update so we can find out...
Take Care
Mari

v1cky84- Wed 09 May 2007
I love it. it's getting more and more interesting. Please update soon.

Jay FicLover- Tue 08 May 2007
Oh... I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE!! Thanks for taking the challenge! ^__^

Suchiya- Tue 08 May 2007
Wow awsome fic, don't worry about Akina. Akina: get over it! *laughs* some people can't handle waiting.

Akina- Tue 08 May 2007
Damn you for not updating >. I need to know what happens.

amp- Tue 08 May 2007
im beging you plz moor

magnificentchaos- Tue 08 May 2007
hn interesting even more she may not get his love but she wil have her revenge hehe

lady fairy goth- Mon 07 May 2007
kool nice start can you make it a bit longer you dont have to its ok anyway please update soon bye

v1cky84- Mon 07 May 2007
Sounds interesting. Please update again soon.

magnificentchaos- Mon 07 May 2007
omg that was great. Jay always has the greatest challenges that Jay does. I myslef am doing one. Magnificent Pandemonium yet it isn't as good as your because it was my first story lol. I hope you update soon and if you get some sory of list that allows your readers to know when its updated put me on it lol my email is disgracedworld@yahoo.com. I loved it.

Chelsea

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