Reviews for Shiroi Yuki by luzopi

chibi-nova- Sun 12 Aug 2007
i'd read it if you decide to continue it it was so sweet and cute (Pink!) lol

Punk_101- Fri 18 May 2007
You should definently write more. I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER FEW CHAPTERS PLEASE.

Punk_101- Fri 18 May 2007
You should definently write more. I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER FEW CHAPTERS PLEASE.

sola- Thu 17 May 2007
Ummmm....A

silver tomi- Thu 17 May 2007
option A

Betterthankikyo466- Thu 17 May 2007
A. A chapter story, about 10 chapters or so.
- Including the long-awaited lemon, and life after mating.
-May have another sequel. XD

cindy- Thu 17 May 2007
yea both plz!!! i can't wait.

Violetcarson- Wed 16 May 2007
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me so happy!!!!!!!! Can't wait dude!

Angel- Wed 16 May 2007
I choose A. I loved this story keep on going. Please E-mail me @ shylatobiassen@gmail.com

Azmaria-hime- Wed 16 May 2007
Make another story plz

Azmaria-hime- Wed 16 May 2007
Make another story plz

Shanalir- Wed 16 May 2007
*Cheers wildly* I'll be looking for the sequal! I'm overjoyed that there'll be a longer story too!

UniconEva- Mon 14 May 2007
I think you should go with "A".You have a good start with chapters "1 an "2.Keep up the good work,and I will be checking in on you to see how its going.Im just sad that there ant more to read.

sessyfan101- Mon 14 May 2007
I think c as it gives the best of both worlds.

Black_Rose- Mon 14 May 2007
Definately A. I think it could go a lot further this way!

SandK- Sun 13 May 2007
Eiher A or C...Great story.

stassi- Sun 13 May 2007
ohhh! I want a chapter story!!!!! I loved it! You have a wonderful talent for writting and I do hope you write a story for this!

stassi- Sun 13 May 2007
ohhh! I want a chapter story!!!!! I loved it! You have a wonderful talent for writting and I do hope you write a story for this!

Anne- Sun 13 May 2007
love the one shot and I'd love to see a full story or another one shot.
You're a wonderful writer.
have a great day!
~Anne

Victoria- Sun 13 May 2007
Choice c. see which one would work best.

Hazel- Sun 13 May 2007
can I be greedy and say D all above. lol I like C.

Hazel- Sun 13 May 2007
canI be greedy and say

luna- Sun 13 May 2007
I choose the first one that has mad chapters cay=use the story is good and like i said in my previous comment you cant leave the story like that!

Violetcarson- Sun 13 May 2007
C !!!!!!!!!!!! C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C, C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But please do the chapter story first, and a lemon soon!!!!!!!!!!

K.M.- Sun 13 May 2007
Okay this was a hard decesion but i choose A&B yes those 2 are the ones you should follow. Oh and hurry I like this fic

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

sesshous_girl- Sun 13 May 2007
C. Both.
- A one shot, then a chapter story. Whichever works.
- Lemons!

You should also have Inu-Yasha get his ass kicked for the way he treated kagome.

Shanalir- Sun 13 May 2007
I have to vote for C. A fluffy oneshot followed by a longer, more serious (but not too serious) story would be great!

Noacat- Sun 06 May 2007
OMIGOD, ARE YOU KIDDING?? OF COURSE IT SHOULD BE CONTINUED!! Continued with lemons! ^_~

Queen of the past- Sun 06 May 2007
I think that you should continue it was a great story

bluefire- Sat 05 May 2007
I love how you describe the first scene in such detail! When he licks his lips I’m about to drool(I’m such a loser-_-). Another thing I like about this fanfic, is that you somehow made the Killing Perfection(AKA Fluffy!), into a gentle, warm guy. Most fanfics I read either result in Sesshomaru being a very hmm… passionate, maybe?, mate; I liked that you made him into a tender person. Makes him the more dreamier, ahhhhhhhhh…………………(spaced out in fantasy world@_@)

greg- Sat 05 May 2007
more please

Phoenix Wolf- Sat 05 May 2007
I LOVE how you have written this story! I vote for a very definate YES to continue! But only if you want to, it does make a great one-shot. But one hell of a first chapter to a story!

Until we meet again.

Adria Li- Fri 04 May 2007
This is such a sweet and gentle fanfiction. It does not matter if there is a continuation or not, but I prefer this to remain as a one-shot. The continuation will stretch the story too much. However, if "Shiro Yuki" is to have a continuation, then I will read it to see what you, luzopi-san, have in store for us readers. Anyway, I thank you for writing this fanfiction because it gives inspiration to write something. (I am not that good of writer.)

judzea- Fri 04 May 2007
That was such a sweet love story. I would love to read more...please do continue it. Since it is winter...hmmm...but spring Kags & Sess should be fully mated and expecting their first pup. That would show that '@%$?ing' Yasha.

Anyway...nicely written...update soon.

chai- Fri 04 May 2007
this should SOO be continued!its soo sweet!...I just wanna go AWW........=D

Darkness- Fri 04 May 2007
Please continue

Unseen Watcher- Fri 04 May 2007
Nice. I hope it's continued, but if not then thanks for this respite for them both.

~ CelestialTenshi ~- Fri 04 May 2007
update soon plz!!!!!

unknown- Fri 04 May 2007
you should continue this one!!!!!! i really llike it and i think its sweet...please continue it...

luna- Fri 04 May 2007
this should defenetly continued. theres far too many question, will kagome realise that even thought she compares sess and inu she see's sesshomaru as the better man unlike inuyasha who looked down upon her and held kikyo in higher respect, what will happen after winter, will inuyasha go look for kagome or will he think she left until spring, what will happen to shippo who is so attached to kagome? so many questions and more.

magnificentchaos- Fri 04 May 2007
That was sweet and so comforting that someone would share love like that. Love is so sure and happens so quickly sometimes you don't even realize it. Hope to see more of your work around.

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