awh!, it's so sad and so cute
I think he should give her the present and KISS HER, to show that he does notice her, and he does hve FEELINGS for HER

Breathtaking and awe-inspiring. It's innocent and lovely. Not many fics are poems and this one is so beautiful and easy to understand. I can can hardly wait to see what happens next.

is it like a poem or are you just a piece of crap writer?

i'm loving it!!!!!!!!

I Under Stand It Perfectly but can you make a story instead of a poem out of this like after writeing all the poems have Kagome start off sighing to herself reading all of the poems she wrote about her Love??
It's a thought but will you do IT... PLease do it would be really nice to have a story and flash backs to see how all this happened Not that I'm Saying it's bad right now. It's really good right now but I'd like to read it in story format when your done writeing the poems please and Thank you

Me likey!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!! I want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love Sesshy/Kag poetry!!!! I cant wait for more!