Zenia- Wed 30 Apr 2008
I am only on Chapter One... and it seems intriguing so far, so I will keep trying to read. I only hope that later chapters are formatted better (each time a new person speaks, it goes on a new line) and that you don't put authors notes in the middle of the story (instead of saying, *Just then, Rin walked in with a navy blue maids outfit (Kinda looks like the outfit Sango wears)* you could say "Just then, Rin walked in with a navy kimono, much like the clothing Sango wore..."

Anyway, just hope I am helping. ^_^ I know that some people refuse to read fics that have not been formatted properly. i am usually among them. Just for speech it is especially annoying because the speaker can be easily confused.

Amanda- Sat 24 Jun 2006
Did she wish that the baby was Sesshoumarus? ... What did Sessh wish and what did Kagome wish? Amanda.

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