your story is so good! and interesting! please update soon!!! the storys just getting good and i want to read more!
Tanaya131- Fri 21 Dec 2007
please write more for this story i really like it
P.s, please do more chapters I really like this story, its going into my fav fanfic section.
I love how in chapter 6 Sesshoumaru's dad basically pimped him out to a virgin but in like a subtle way. That was freakin awesome. I laughed so hard when I really thought about what the plan was(whips tear from eye)/
i really like this fic like to see it updated soon iam really in to it and cant wait to read more
lIgHtNiNg_PaNda- Thu 05 Jul 2007
i love this fanfic i hope you update soon because i have to know what is going to happen next this is really a great fanfic and i hope it isn't finish soon
k-dog- Fri 27 Apr 2007
I think your story is awsome and keep doing what you are doing. i wish i could write like what you guys do @ a single spark.:-:
luna- Thu 26 Apr 2007
well i wouldnt mind staying in the house if sess stayed with me, and is sango part of sess's gang? he called her by her name so they must be on some sort of first name basis.
i love this story can you please write more...... and soon
awesome and cliffy you evil lol can't wait for more chapters
Pim- Wed 25 Apr 2007
I am so in love with you right now... the 1957 XK-SS Jaguar Roadster is my dream car too! Not in white though...I've never really liked white cars. haha. Maybe in a dark blue. Not like it's going to be happening any time soon though. I can dream though, right?
Inuyasha has sex with his socks on...go figure. haha. I laughed so hard at that part. I love all the little quirks you give to the characters. It's like you keep them in character...but there's that little extra something that lets you connect with them. Like Inuyasha having sex with his socks on. haha. I'm still chuckling about that. XD
Nice chapter overall, a few spelling/grammar mistakes, easily overlooked. I have the same problems with my story.
I can't wait for the next installment. =]
Sincerely,
A.J.
Mika- Tue 24 Apr 2007
Wooow..ookay..if I would be Kagome I would be speechles, or complete freak out!^^
This situation gets more and more complicated, especially for Kagome, ne?^^I hope she'll make the best of it..and is Sango involved too? I mean, because Inuyasha, Seshomaru and her know each other?
Hachja...I wish I could update my FF this fast like you do *g*
Thx for sending message^^
DarkAngel495- Mon 23 Apr 2007
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chibi moon baby- Mon 23 Apr 2007
I really like this story, its well written and intresting. update soon please!
Mika- Mon 23 Apr 2007
Heyho^^
Wow, this is a great FF!^^
Poor Kagome, I think I would be frightend to no end, with gunshots in my back^^'
Could you send me a mail, when you update?? =)
Elisa- Mon 23 Apr 2007
Wow two chapters! I so wasn't expecting an update this soon...but who am I to look a gift horse in the mouth?? lol I'm glad things are starting to come together, I can tell this fic is going to be one of my favorites. ^_~
Crys777- Mon 23 Apr 2007
I love it! Me Want'y More as soon as passable.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tanaya131- Sun 22 Apr 2007
please write more i realy like your story
this is definitely interesting, mmmhmmm, my curiosity is piqued. good start so far. continue soon!
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Elisa- Sun 22 Apr 2007
I really like the idea for this story and I like where it's headed so far. I can't wait to read more!! Great job!! ^_~
localsamurai- Sun 22 Apr 2007
It's off to a good start. Update soon.
thoughtfulillusion- Sun 22 Apr 2007
heh, I kind of have to wonder based on the AN at the beginning of the first chapter if you've ever read "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"--it definitely reminded me of the notice in the beginning haha.
Anyway, there's some great potential in this story and I'm looking forward to reading more. You're writing is good and I like the fact that you're letting the story build up rather than just jumping into the action too quickly like some stories I've seen.
Keep up the great work!
naru- Sun 22 Apr 2007
Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shaedow- Sun 22 Apr 2007
Nice beginning ^^ Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what happens next.
*grins* I like it! ^_^ It's interesting, so was it Inuyasha that hit her car and then drove off or am I insane and connecting dots when there aren't any? Haha, no, but it was really good, can't wait for more. Thanks.
lady fairy goth- Sun 22 Apr 2007
coolness! loves the story i know you probaly dont apretiate this but please update soon love ya. toodles
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