| your chapter 10 isn't posted... when you turn to chapter 10 that it's chapter 9 and when you go to chapter 11 it's chapter 11 so your missing a whole chapter.....
ummm.....- Sat 19 Apr 2008
| your chapter 10 isn't posted... when you turn to chapter 10 that it's chapter 9 and when you go to chapter 11 it's chapter 11 so your missing a whole chapter.....
Kari- Sat 22 Mar 2008
| Hey! Love your story, but chapter 10 "The Fight I" is missing and I don't understand chapter 11 now. Can you fix that because you have two chapter 9's. Thanks! Still love the story! XD
Lala- Mon 11 Feb 2008
I like the story.
Sometimes it's long,
Sometimes it's short.
Like candy...
Very addictive.
al- Fri 28 Dec 2007
I won't read other word until you go thru your story and correct ka nines.
it's canines.
just one little letter.
otherwise,this is pretty original in content,not
so much as a story,but your approach.
Kaitlyn- Sun 23 Dec 2007
| omg! i love your story it is awsome, i cant wait for you to continue it! it is very enjoyable to read! cant wait to read the rest!
Megan Consoer- Tue 10 Jul 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Lady Nya- Tue 03 Jul 2007
| I like your story, but the spelling/grammar makes it a little confusing.
| this is a great story. Is Kagome the ookami pup in the dream?? and Sess is so kawii in this story
Mistres butcher- Mon 02 Jul 2007
| you need a beta reader and quick.
| Me Like ... That Was A Very Eventful Chapter And Will Inuyasha Stop And Look At His Surroundings ... Kagome Is Safe!
elvira- Mon 02 Jul 2007
| kami!!!....is inuyasha that dense?....yeeh!!!!..thier together agian!!!..more chapters please!!!
| wow i so love it plaese update soon
Lady Nya- Thu 21 Jun 2007
| Hmmm. So much was scattered in that chapter that I don't think I'll know what to say until you post again. Hint, hint.
whiteinu1- Wed 20 Jun 2007
| keep going ^_^
elvira- Wed 20 Jun 2007
| wow....this is one good story!!....sorry about your family member passing...hope you are ok though...but keep up the good work..
elvira- Wed 13 Jun 2007
| this is so tight...i love this story keep it up!!!
| Prettie Good ... Cant Wait To See Wuts Goin To Happen Next ...
hime jun hi- Wed 02 May 2007
I vote that she the princess of the east.... and get's PREGNANT (the hentai way) in the next chappy....
SesshysKagome- Tue 01 May 2007
| Awwww, That was great and adorable. I loved it. Can't wait for more.
SesshysKagome- Sat 21 Apr 2007
| I love it. a such romantic approach to this relationship. Very refreshing.
zen- Sat 21 Apr 2007
hey, love the plot, its just kane-nines is really spelled canines (sry, upcomming test in english)
Love it, keep up the pace
~zen
favi- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Yo make some more chapters, please!!!!
Bye, :)
Faby
favi- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Yo make some more chapters, please!!!!
Bye, :)
Faby
Metis- Sat 21 Apr 2007
| She actually has the right survival instincts. Will wonders never cease.
aryana- Sat 21 Apr 2007
| this was so good i really liked it
jasmine- Sat 21 Apr 2007
| This is good. All of them were what's next
jasmine- Sat 21 Apr 2007
| This is good. All of them were what's next
Nice chapter. I cannot wait to read more ^_^
-River
hime jun hi- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kat- Fri 20 Apr 2007
you realize your chapters are out of order right?
other then that i love this very interesting update soon
Metis- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| whoops. Wrong chapter.
Metis- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| I'm surprised she's not bolting. This is definitely a fight or flight situation.
Metis- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Let's us see. A conniving Rin. Someone needs to be denied sweets! I don't know whether to root for Kag giving him a hard time or not! We'll see how He acts.
Metis- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Thank you (and your friends!) so much. Those decisions tend to ruin perfectly good fics for me. What a horrible way to start things.
| this story is awesome
| A few grammer error and typos but over all rather well done. I thank you for replacing the double ch with the correct one. It's a pet peeve of mine when those kinds of misstakes and AN are left in.
Sassy- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| You reposted the second chapter after the third.
I did not know I was behind. I'm glad I had caught up! ^_^
-River
hello I like your story but i have to say that chap4 is chap2 again. can't wait for your next chapter see you soon.
hugs and puppies
al- Fri 20 Apr 2007
you've got a lot of revision ahead of you.
there are words that should be there,but aren't there...like already,as in 'i already mated with kikyo'....you must have overlooked some things because your story would be more flowing and make more sense if you revise this a bit.
overall,it does work,but unless you fix some places,it will not.
i'm sure you'll do better as you write more.
take your time,and take care of yourself.
SesshysKagome- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Very nice, I like it. You have talent.
Candy- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| I like your story only one problem. You posted chapter 2 3 times ;)
WhiteInu_Demon- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Love IT!!!
WhiteInu_Demon- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Love IT!!!
WhiteInu_Demon- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Love IT!!!
WhiteInu_Demon- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Love IT!!!
WhiteInu_Demon- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Love IT!!!
WhiteInu_Demon- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| Love IT!!!
| I think you have a good story idea so far, however you need to work to on your grammer and spelling. Don't worry too much about it there are many like me who beta just grab someone to help out.
katie- Fri 20 Apr 2007
| um.... your story is good but this is the 3rd time you've posted the same chapt. ^_^
Crys777- Thu 19 Apr 2007
| ME Like Me want moorre! pleas!
Poor Kagome. She's gonna get it. But the whole rape thing...hehe I would be the one to vote for that, I'm sure that would be pretty funny...but then I would probably have to think of the future of things in the fanfic lol. Anywho! Great chapter! ^_^
-River
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