Reviews for Life Without by njoy54

judzea- Mon 11 Jun 2007
Excellent story. You did well for your first fanfic and I will be looking for more stories from you. I'm sure your next story will be just as brilliant as this one. The ending was so sweet...it made me smile for the first time all day today and that's a good thing. I was grumpy when I woke up today and so when I saw your update, I read the whole thing over again and I found myself feeling good. Thanks for that.

You rock ;-)

judzea- Mon 11 Jun 2007
Excellent story. You did well for your first fanfic and I will be looking for more stories from you. I'm sure your next story will be just as brilliant as this one. The ending was so sweet...it made me smile for the first time all day today and that's a good thing. I was grumpy when I woke up today and so when I saw your update, I read the whole thing over again and I found myself feeling good. Thanks for that.

You rock ;-)

judzea- Tue 22 May 2007
That was so romantic and sweet. I loved the part where Sess proposes to Kags.

Great job...update soon.

demon13o- Tue 22 May 2007
awesome chapter!! Update more soon okay!

Ja Ne!!

Violetcarson- Tue 22 May 2007
OMG!!!!!! That was so kawii!!!!!!!!! I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

demon13o- Sun 20 May 2007
nice chapters!! hurry and update soon please!!

Ja Ne!!

SandK- Sat 19 May 2007
AWWW...Update soon...

helikesitheymikey!- Sat 19 May 2007
AWWWWW...so KAWAII!!!!!!!!!
thanks for not killing Inu off!!

I was worried when sess woke up that something happened to his youkai because you said he had cerulean blue eyes but then I remembered the consealing charm....whoooo....you did have me worried for a second there....

PLEASE DO THE WEDDING AND THEIR NEXT/FIRST BABY SHOWER in some part of the next 4 chappies.....

Kag really needs to have a baby girl....ya know daddy's lil girl.....man will he be wrapped around her puppy claw or what!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Violetcarson- Sat 19 May 2007
Yay!!!!! Everybody's happy!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 17 May 2007
Woah....please do us all a favor and NOT KILL INUYASHA!!!!!!

I actually like the life without title.....but if you want it changed the only name I think would also work is Without You.

Couldn't Kags get in a miko-rage......I mean her mate is getting tortured and the wierdo that hurt her arm is at least partially youkai.....

I wonder if Kag is pregnant again....

for an epilogue or something we should totally see a baby shower for kag and see the guys make fools out of themselves.....with like diapering a baby doll race or drinking beer (or a sour drink) out of a baby bottle race......and that don't say the word "baby" game!!!!

ohohoh the wedding will be cool too!!!!
remember that they're supposed to smash cake into each others face!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 17 May 2007
Woah....please do us all a favor and NOT KILL INUYASHA!!!!!!

I actually like the life without title.....but if you want it changed the only name I think would also work is Without You.

Couldn't Kags get in a miko-rage......I mean her mate is getting tortured and the wierdo that hurt her arm is at least partially youkai.....

I wonder if Kag is pregnant again....

for an epilogue or something we should totally see a baby shower for kag and see the guys make fools out of themselves.....with like diapering a baby doll race or drinking beer (or a sour drink) out of a baby bottle race......and that don't say the word "baby" game!!!!

ohohoh the wedding will be cool too!!!!
remember that they're supposed to smash cake into each others face!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Mon 14 May 2007
ohhhhhh. IT"S INU!!!!
YEY!!!!!!! I THOUGHT YOU HAD KILLED HIM OFF BUT YOU DIDN:T!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

demon13o- Sun 13 May 2007
._. note to self never walk on the streets after dark or if i do not without a weapon to defend... damn!

okay uh please update soon i want to know what happens next so don't leave me waiting for to long lol.

Ja Ne!!!!

Violetcarson- Sun 13 May 2007
Evil cliffie!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

demon13o- Mon 07 May 2007
._. -picks up a basket full of tomato's and stares at njoy54-

you ended it on a cliffhanger and thus...! -picks up a tomato and throws it at her. It misses her by a centimeter-

You got lucky but I still have a whole basket full to throw still -evil crackles of laughter as she begins to throw more tomato's at njoy54 like crazy-

Ja Ne.... I hope I made you laugh ^-^

helikesitheymikey!- Mon 07 May 2007
I SO LOVE THIS STORY!
What do you wanna bet that Kagome is gonna make all sesshomaru's meals to help fatten him up again......CHOCOLATE!!!!
sorry I think I had too much pepsi.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

demon13o- Sat 05 May 2007
awesome!!!!!

Hurry and update real soon please!!

----
Ja Ne
-demon13o

Unseen Watcher- Fri 04 May 2007
Well, Sess has his own levers. I only hope she'll see sense over pride.

Unseen Watcher- Thu 03 May 2007
Family together. Yaay! I'm sure Shippou will heal fast. Such a precocious little pup.

judzea- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Very nice chapter. I loved it. I like family reunions *smiles* I went FF.net to read chapter 6 and that was wonderful also.
Was it me or was little Taru's voice emunciation started sounding less like a two year old and more like a six year old in the space of a day...hmm?

Great story...update soon :-)

Unseen Watcher- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Wonderful family reunion. I hope you get an artist to capture the moment with Kagome in his arms, his head tilted to look over her shoulder, with their pup reaching out his hand for him. Pick a good artist! As for Kouga....moron. Insulting a child/pup in front of his mother. I'd slice him into wolf cutlets! Go Kagome!

Unseen Watcher- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Anticipation..! hee

Unseen Watcher- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Aww! Family fluff!

Unseen Watcher- Sun 29 Apr 2007
Yay! Full youkai pup! And it's not even my birthday!

Sess' Sakura- Sun 29 Apr 2007
What was chapter six about? You up loaded chapter seven twice. Anyway I really liked this chapter but i would like to read chapter 6 to. Update soon and keep up the good work.
Sakura

helikesitheymikey!- Fri 27 Apr 2007
You're lucky this is such a good story and that I like it so much......enough to come to a s s and find the story to review....... so in regards to the update on ff.net that I can't review btw _
I"M SO HAPPY THAT SESSHOMARU FINALLY FOUND HER!!!! no...wait....I"M SO HAPPY THAT LITTLE MARU FINALLY FOUND HIS DADDY!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the kags wearing glasses idea by the way....
I wonder who was at the door.....

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

judzea- Fri 27 Apr 2007
Great update...you have improved on your writing skills...excellent job. I really like this story. Please continue the good work and update soon. I hope Sess and Kags get back together soon. *smiles*

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 26 Apr 2007
dundunDUNNNNNN!!!!!
I wonder what will happen at the manor.....Sesshomaru HAS GOT TO BE REUNITED WITH KAGOME VERY SOON!!!!!!!! I mean there'll be more action and stuff.......so am I correct in remembering that the other lords *cough*kogaandhiskids*cough* are gonna be at this shin-dig??

LUV THE STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

judzea- Sat 21 Apr 2007
Nice story and I enjoyed reading it. However, there are a few spelling and grammatical errors. If English is not your primary language, I can understand why because English is a difficult language to learn with the spelling and double meanings of certain words. Other than that, your story is off to a good start.

I have a couple of questions, though: You mentioned the name Mia twice...once as the other maid that Kagome is working with and Mia her mother. It would have made it easier if you named her mother somethng else to avoid confusion. Second: if Kagome is working for Sesshoumaru, why can he not smell her scent in any part of his home. If they are mates, can they not sense each other's presence or essence? Like when he was driving to work and he noticed a mother with her child & the child was bouncing up and down singing something about 'doggies' (I'm assuming that this was Kagome)...why could he not sense that it could have been Kags and his son? Why has Sess not been able to find his family...with his money & power (& technology), don't you think that he could have found them by now? Just curious.

All in all...you story is good for a first timer and I hope you update soon. I do not flame writers, I only offer constructive critique. So please do not become angry with my comments. They are not meant to be hurtful.

Great job :-)

polka- Sat 21 Apr 2007
I usually don't read angst, but I decided to give this story a try, and I was quite surprised by it. I like the storyline, though the timing and ages are a little confusing. I did see in your a/n that Inuyasha didn't tell Sesshomaru certain things before the well closed, so that does explain a few things. I wonder, though, how Sesshomaru can't pick up Kagome's scent from her working there. Is he just not smelling it, because he and she don't go to the same places in the mansion, or is he confusing it from his dreams and memories, and thinking he's still smelling it? Just asking. So, good job so far. The only thing I think you need working on is your spelling mistakes. There are several spread out, and I think it affects the flow of the story, so maybe a beta will be helpful for you. Otherwise, your story has real potential for good storytelling. Update soon.

helikesitheymikey!- Fri 20 Apr 2007
ooooooh*nods in understanding*

wait if the other lords are visiting does that mean Kouga or his son or grandson will find Kag, say she's his woman, and she'll hurt him for even claiming her?? Or the pup will bite him??

who are the two guys I wonder....
so one is kinda a puppet to the other.....sess shoulda trusted his instincts.

WHEN WILL SESS FIND OUT HIS MATE IS WORKING FOR HIM!?!?!?!?

So if Kags working in the kitchen does that mean she's a pretty good cook and will snitch a few pieces for her 3yrold{that's how old he is right??} pup??

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 19 Apr 2007
I was so happy to find out I could review that I forgot something that I didn't undertand....

Sess doesn't know Kag had a pup right?? If he did he would have probably teared up the whole city while she was pregnant....{future sess that is}

so I don't understand this statement:
[“You are right Shippou. Sesshomaru would have sent Inuyasha here to deliver a letter by now. It has been almost a month since the last letter I wonder if something did happen,” fretted Kagome causing her one year old to grow upset. ]

If Inu was giving letters and everything he would have known about her pregnancy and told Sess and Sess would {500} years later have wanted to kill INu more....

SO When did the well close??? Because I would have thought it was before the pup was born....

just something that was kinda bugging me.....

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 19 Apr 2007
OH MY GOSH!!! I'm SO glad you found this site because I can now review this wonderful story!!!!!
ff.net's disable anonymous review thing stinks!

BUT I LOVE THIS STORY AND WANT YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!

so while Kag and pup are working at the mansion are Ship and Rin gonna be at the shrine and "help" their great-grandpa at the shrine??

I keep having this scene in my mind where Shippo ends up in the hospital because he was made by great-gramps to work on the roof......don't know where the idea came from but I can't get rid of it.

COMPLETELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

helikesitheymikey!- Thu 19 Apr 2007
OH MY GOSH!!! I'm SO glad you found this site because I can now review this wonderful story!!!!!
ff.net's disable anonymous review thing stinks!

BUT I LOVE THIS STORY AND WANT YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!

so while Kag and pup are working at the mansion are Ship and Rin gonna be at the shrine and "help" their great-grandpa at the shrine??

I keep having this scene in my mind where Shippo ends up in the hospital because he was made by great-gramps to work on the roof......don't know where the idea came from but I can't get rid of it.

COMPLETELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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